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Bashful Strawberry

PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:55 pm


Just a sketch I'm working on for someone I love a lot. Soooo, I want this to look extra good.
I've already spotted a few things I need to change, but yeah, outside sources always help!

Since it was a bit spur of the moment, I had no reference pictures but any help would indeed be loved!

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h219/Creepy_Midget/trying.jpg

Edited: I dunno, something still seems off about it.... So more help is more than welcome and appreciated. XD
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:17 am


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@__@ i should be in bed, so i'll make this short~

the armpits seemed up high on the girl on the left-- i think the curve is still logical in the pose, but erasing it was the quickest fix

also, i thought it'd be cute to have their arms that go off the page touching, or reaching for each other (depending on how the draw out)


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Gummibear Pwns

Bashful Strawberry

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 10:28 am


Ooohh, yes, I see!
o3o I think I see what I need to do, but it's not coming out right on the paper.... I might just CG this. :/
But thank you so much or the drawover, it was MOST helpful! <333


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 10:51 pm


Edited bump! 4laugh

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