ok
that sounds really good
my whole family writes booksa nd i have writen two
but one was for class
and one was a little kids book that i almost won a contest in!
well i got 4th place
but u should have it that one night shes getting chased down in the woods and she almost dies but then the vampire saves her cause he secretly likes her
and after he saves her she findes out what she is and at first she avoids him cause shes terrifyed of him
but then he doesnt give up on her and she falles in love with her!
lol
you can send me a PM and i can really help you with it if you want
i can give really good feedback!
lol
just send me a PM