caffeinatedbliss
Excuse me but That was unnecessary.
No, it pretty much was. Everyone else here is saying the same old tired lines of "Oh it's nice" "oh it's pretty". It's not. It lacks anatomy, it lacks composition, it lacks a colouring technique that makes it look like anything other than a 5 year old scribbling over and over on the paper until it's oversaturated and falling apart.
Don't try to pull the instant ramen line on me either, I've heard that a million times over as well. I've barely got enough money to make my bills and I can still afford art supplies and eat hearty everyday; manage your money better.
I'll tell you right now; I hope you're a hobbyist. Your picture is an unforgettable deviantartist submission, that will be passed over without a second though.
You want critique? Rip it up. Redo it. Redo it over and over and over until things line up. Until the shading resembles something other than pillowshaded "I don't know where it goes, but I know something has to be shiny." Fix the skin so it' snot one entire blob, or if that's what your'e going for, use acrylics or gouche to make an even colour. Stop drawing contrived, terribly deviantart tutorial eyes and body. Her body looks like a giant lump of cancer attached to a hairy face with lips stapled on, devoid of any light source or knowledge of anatomy or stylization.
You want to get better? Rip it up.
Keep ripping it up.
Stop thinking it's special, it's important. Rip it up until you
just don't give a ******** about what happens. Then you'll improve.
