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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:57 pm

Well, I've been working on a story for my English class.
It had to have a gothic style, since we were reading one of Poe's works right before.
This clearly isn't the whole of it, but, I'm unsure if I should make it the beginning or late middle/ending, minus part of it.

"Claws rip at his bare flesh, the skin ripping, blood of crimson flowing down his lower body. Sharp, bright white fangs bite down hard onto his neck, more blood trickling down in two thin lines. The boy cringes as tears streak down his cheeks as well, this pain so intense, like nothing he's ever imagined. The man above him, smirking, shoves his own wrist into the boy's face, his own blood dripping lightly from it.
"Drink," he commands with a slight tone of forcefulness in his voice. With no other choice, the boy below him does as he's told after a short moment of time, the loss of his own blood making him feel faint. Still with a small smirk on his face, the man turns and walks off to the room's door. he stops in its opening, looking back to the boy, who is still slightly crying while trying to stay conscious. Now in a more gentle tone, with a soft smile on his face, he says this:
"Sleep well, my pet.", gently closing the door behind him, his new slave passing out quietly as the door is shut.

"Nngh.. Not that dream again." sighed Chris as he sat up in the bed he was on. He looked down at his bare stomach and chest, wrapped tightly in bandages. "I know that wasn't a dream, but.. That was at least a week ago, and I just want to forget it for the most part." he said to himself, looking over to the wall on his right, a window covered by black curtains the only other object in his now prison. A dim light of the moon and stars shone through, creating a small patch of light on the floor, the room's only source of light."

Yeah, that'd be all I have at the moment, especially since I made/revised a bit of that as I was typing it out. xB