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 Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 9:29 pm
This is a song of poison and hate
Listen well, lest it be too late
Venom drips from the very air
Careful though, watch your hair
From the ashes the flames spring to life
It flickers green, reeking of strife
Malice grows in the darkest corners
From the shadows comes echoes of laughter
Doom approaches, so beware
Don't fall into the pits of despair
For if you do, it's impossible to get out
Struggles if you must, but don't scream too loud
You might just wake others from their slumber
When they're roused they're full of hunger
If you heed my words you might just miss
The tales of terror you always dismiss
My warnings you should not ignore
Or you will find yourself quite torn
Between reality and imagination
This is it, the mysterious dimension
Written for the guild. I hope this is the right place to put it.
I wanted to end it with "Mysterious Reality" but I couldn't come up with a rhyme. Help?
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:14 am
Very nice biggrin
But somehow, you should include parts of the guild, like members names, in the poem. It would be funny to see something like that xd
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:49 am
EOTW Very nice biggrin But somehow, you should include parts of the guild, like members names, in the poem. It would be funny to see something like that xd Yeah, maybe I should do that. 3nodding Thanks. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:39 pm
fukaimoriMidori EOTW Very nice biggrin But somehow, you should include parts of the guild, like members names, in the poem. It would be funny to see something like that xd Yeah, maybe I should do that. 3nodding Thanks. biggrin No problem wink
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:01 pm
I'm not really a free verse enthusiest, but well done. Oddly, I picture baron, sahmainn (sp?) and perhaps vanilla as the others that are "hungered when roused". It certainly fits to some extent.
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:53 pm
Here's a good ending if you wanted to include the title:
1. Or you will find yourself quite torn
Between Ghosts and Mortality
This is it, Mysterious Reality
Teasers (JUST JOKES!):
2. Or you will find yourself quite torn
When your life turns to homosexuality
This is it, Mysterious Reality
3. Or you will be quite torn (up)
Because of a mortal kombat fatality
This is it, Mysterious Reality.
Just ignore the teaser... I just made them for fun and laughs xd
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 5:53 am
EOTW Teasers (JUST JOKES!): 2. Or you will find yourself quite torn
When your life turns to homosexuality
This is it, Mysterious Reality
3. Or you will be quite torn (up)
Because of a mortal kombat fatality
This is it, Mysterious Reality.
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:34 pm
HEHE!!! Teasers do that to you whee
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 7:56 pm
EOTW Here's a good ending if you wanted to include the title: 1. Or you will find yourself quite torn
Between Ghosts and Mortality
This is it, Mysterious RealityTeasers (JUST JOKES!): 2. Or you will find yourself quite torn
When your life turns to homosexuality
This is it, Mysterious Reality
3. Or you will be quite torn (up)
Because of a mortal kombat fatality
This is it, Mysterious Reality.
Just ignore the teaser... I just made them for fun and laughs xd Lol, thanks. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:22 am
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Baron von Turkeypants Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 4:18 am
Baron von Turkeypants what the ******** class="clear"> I say there should be a POETRY contest! You can't "WTF?" somebody if you couldn't write a better poem about the guild yourself... But she said she's fixing it to be more like the guild. Say, including members names and stuff like that.
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:28 am
Baron von Turkeypants what the ******** class="clear"> Could you do anything better?
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:49 pm
*Masters of Horror*
*coughs*
There once was a guild for paranormal and those inclined
to study it and partners named horror and scifi
The members are few and far between
The Noob Lord's personality in his name can be seen
Baron Von Turkeypants will balance him out
His logic alone will fill your self-doubt
Fukai is there to give you a rhyme
And the lovely Aqua insures that all have a good time
vanillaXtiffy: speedposter extrodanaire
the rest seem like they are made of thin air
Save for varmeip who occasionally posts
And though we number few, surely we can boast
This cast of characters is enough to make you shiver
or at least give a good laugh
And though we can't boast complete individuality
We can extend a hand of welcome, to Mysterious Reality
rolleyes
*is the best guild evar*
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:00 pm
vanillaXtiffy *Masters of Horror**coughs*
There once was a guild for paranormal and those inclined
to study it and partners named horror and scifi
The members are few and far between
The Noob Lord's personality in his name can be seen
Baron Von Turkeypants will balance him out
His logic alone will fill your self-doubt
Fukai is there to give you a rhyme
And the lovely Aqua insures that all have a good time
vanillaXtiffy: speedposter extrodanaire
the rest seem like they are made of thin air
Save for varmeip who occasionally posts
And though we number few, surely we can boast
This cast of characters is enough to make you shiver
or at least give a good laugh
And though we can't boast complete individuality
We can extend a hand of welcome, to Mysterious Reality
rolleyes *is the best guild evar* EVEN BETTER!!! biggrin But whats with the rolleyes eyes at the end? Was it sarcasm?! AHHHH!!!
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