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 Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:46 pm
ohhhhhh okay i didnt see the introduction thread /unobservant
but okay, so, yeah
since this is a work in progress i'd love to get it crit now before i lose interest in it and don't want to edit it after finishing, you kno?
i'm considering starting all new for the older woman's face because at first this was just doodling, so i didn't have a color scheme at all in mind, and she needs ot be refined and recolored to complement the younger woman better. i' have a rough idea of where i'm going with this, i think at least, which i can elaborate more on if you guys want.
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:38 am
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THIS IMAGE OR VIDEO
VIOLATED OUR
TERMS OF SERVICE
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:24 am
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 7:59 am
ARGHHH. sorry.
that's bothersome, because i have some life drawings up in my PB and they havn't deleted it yet.
i'll host it on tinypic in a second.
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:59 pm
I think that the older womans chin should be bigger. And with the angle of her actual features, her jaw should be more slanted upwards
also hi :# ilu u know that
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 10:00 pm
i think that their heads are too big relative to their faces?
they kinda seem ... weird
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:20 am
okay, thanks, i know what you mean, i'll touch it up, thanks! & ily 2
ooh, okay. a couple months ago i was told i don't give my people enough head space, so i wouldn't be surprised if i overdid it. thanks for pointing that out, i'll add that to the things i need to fix!
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:27 am
 Every time I come in to look at this it has been taken down due to violations of whatever rules the server has crying
I'm so curious!
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 5:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 5:06 pm
old womans hair should be greyer/more faded....unless she dyes it
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 7:59 pm
i saw one of the pics before it was deleted but i dont really remember much to be able to say anything
i hate when figure drawings get deleted by picture hosting sites crying
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:34 am
I have no idea what's going on.
I can host those pictures for you if need be.
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