the only thing about the face that bothers me is that her green eye is noticeably higher than her hazel one. usually even from an angle the eyes are in a line pretty much perpendicular to the line dividing both sides of the face, but here they look a little slanty. i opened it up in paint shop pro (the worst image editing software ever btw) to show you what i mean
here's your original:


and here's after my editing



psp is little more than mspaint with layers, so sorry if the rendering i did looks rough and pixelly, its just to give a basic idea ,_, on the other hand whatever your using you are able to render FANTASTICALLY with. her skin looks amazing @_@