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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 4:07 pm
I thought I would start a thread for non emo poems smile Anything goes, as long as it's not about death and darkness and crying razz
and keep it clean!
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 4:19 pm
sry but i cant erally write happy poems cause to me, life will always end up with death. u cannot escape it and we will eventually all die. in vain, or in happiness, we will all die. so i will try to write a happy poem.... but will probably not succed the sun was shining the birds were singing the glorious sun had come out the children were playing the church bells ringing all was well on this happy day yea....... that stunk and dont even say that it didnt cause it did....
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:09 pm
That was good! But you don't have to write about something super happy, just leave the depressing ones in the emo section that's all smile
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:14 pm
Here is one I wrote not long ago. I do mind if you guys use this one.. please don't without permission. It's very personal. But basically it's about all the people that have come into my life and changed me, it is a little sad but not emo sad, more like nostalgic. Enjoy smile
Different than before by Ru
rain roars up like a lion's roar and things that soar my fingers are sore and bruised up from the pavement, the rain sprays in a myriad of greys and i am left here ignored and forgotten my concert reduced to the baseline my audience trailing out like so much snail snot oozing my heart is draped over my shoulder like a fur coat my four leaf clover wont work with this bloke my heart is a wall that stretches out for miles red and brown, green and blue oranges and yellows and purples too they splatter and splash and dribble and pour and i am left here, different than before where does this all go, i wonder to myself where am i going here in this house with my shelves and my paintings, and my memories and my music so cool like the air is cool and your voice was cool and the cookies cooled and my heart's walls, now different than before
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:17 pm
Lol here's another one that's also nostalgic. I have a ton of others, these are the only two I could find without a lot of digging. There is no hidden meaning in this one.. it's pretty clear. All in all, I'm ont really happy with it.. it's only "ok" but *shrug* mebbeh you guys will like it.
I would like to remember ballet Tootoos and slippers Girls spinning together Cool sunlight sifted through the trees Throwing shadows on the floor And mom, watching Smiling
I would like to remember piano Fingers swiftly flying over keys Puppies licking my toes The silence in between The notes falling And dad, watching Smiling
I would like to remember the autoharp The sound of angels when they dance And the ukulele And the guitar The strings waiting for me.. The notes coming so easily
I would like to remember snow My sister dodging clumsily And vacations Mountains sailing by My sister and I playing in the backseat Waiting for the next swimming pool
I would like to remember dancing So many boys, so little time So many waltzes And pool tables and Car Rides The wind gathering my hair My fingers caressing the air
And I would like to remember you The yous that knew me when The yous that shaped my present The yous I have yet to meet
Motor cycles and birthday cakes Grapes and sunrises Puppies and rain The stars and the rivers and lakes and oceans and creeks
And you, there with me
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:39 am
Ok I haven't written anything happy in a long time, but I'll give it a shot.
The light filtered through the canopy of leaves, As she walked slowly through the woods. Twigs snap beneath her feet, Echoing through the trees.
She continues along her aimless path. Longing to feel the warmth of the sun, To smell the sweet scent of flora, To feel alive once more.
Her life until now has been full of darkness, As if she were under a gloomy rain cloud. Countless nights had she lain awake, With warm tears falling down her face.
Mourning over a great life lost, Or a love not returned. But the time had come that she pined for the light, And the happiness that she used to feel.
She dreamed of the day she could show her smile, And carelessly laugh as if nothing were wrong. So on she hiked through the brambles, Of the forest that was her life.
The journey was not easy, It tested her strength and perserverance. After many trials and tribulations, A light could be seen.
The light of salvation had finally come. She stepped out into light. A ray of sunlight warmed her skin. Bringing a rosy color to her cheeks.
The wind blew a strand of hair across her face, Carrying the sweet smell of the flowers to her nostrils. At last she was free, To live the life she had always dreamed of.
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:10 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:27 pm
Thanks. I've been on kind of a writing hiatus for awhile now. I'll see what else I can come up with. Lol!
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