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Not bad but pay close attention to the symmetry and the balance of the characters. The monster's head seems to be slapped onto a blobby body, while the chick has enormously huge lips + arms.
Clean up her face a bit too, because it seems everything is squished over to the left side far too much that it becomes a bad point of focus.

Lastly: clean up. The sketchiness is fine if it's a 5 second thing, but it really hurts places like the teeth and body of the monster, as I can't tell what the hell is going on.

Personally peeve: Wordbubbles. No finished illustration should have them unless it's something requested or *essential*. It aggravates me to see little word bubbles with "sup!" "<3" "yo!" "lol" and whatnot in them. They ain't giving anything to the picture, so why include them?

I'd go with Marrow just because it seems like a cool-assed name.

Seconding SNAKES ON A PLANE! - it would be nice to see this larger. It's hard to critique it at such a small size.