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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:17 am
Last First Kiss [Yunho's Story of The Police life] by Atlantiz_Princess Forewords [Introduction] [Yunho's POV] You know, being a cop isn't all that fun. I almost got myself killed in situations before, at least 6 times a year. Also my partner Yoochun isn't very helpful. That flirtatious, stuck up guy has been partying since he became a cop. He is good at reasoning though, unlike me...Yoochun also can fight pretty well. Well they call me Yunho, but at work they call me U-Know, Yoochun is called Micky. Though I am pretty much almost the boss. But Jae Joong, or Hero, is who we listen to. But if I ask him to do a case for me, he'll definitely help out. Good cop and a good friend...though he seems annoyed with me. Yeah, I am rich, and yeah I admit, I can be pretty cocky, but everyone likes me for helping people. Especially when it comes to people being hurt by others. Then there's those punks, Kibum and Junsu. They steal all the time. I catch them everyday but I lost them twice because I was distracted by another major event. I was pretty much a hero, until that day where I almost stopped something more heroic than what I do. She changed my life, she would steal to give to the poor. Now stealing is a bad thing, very bad, but giving it to the poor is also a good thing, very good. So she just kind of balances it out. She's also cocky, loud, violent, and a quick insulter. Though she is a bit cute though...AHEM what the hell am I thinking? Thinking of a criminal that way...get it together! So umm..what was her name...Suu..uel? Though it's rude, I'll just call her Yah for now...by the way she keeps coming through my basement window...odd. I'm guessing she never used the door before? [end of POV/Intro] [Main Characters] Jung Yunho – Underneath all those mean comments and aggression is a very caring guy. The richest and best cop. Bae Seul Gi – A arrogant loudmouth yet a very sensitive thief. Has a big heart for others. Park Yoochun – A flirtatious cop who loves to party but soon meets a girl of his dreams. Kim Jae Joong – Has a singing background yet chose to be a cop, and being the chief. Is related to Seul Gi. Ivy – A positive girl who loves to be loved. Seems to love people watching...o.0 -Supporting Characters- Kim Junsu Kim Kibum Lee Hyori Yoon Eun Hye Jeon Hye Bin Choi Dong Wook [SE7EN] -'get in the way' characters- Chunmoo Stephanie Joo Brian Ji Sung Sunday Lee Ayumi
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:20 am
Chapter 1
The Thief A/N: First chapter! Yay!I hope I don't start to bore you already =[ but please enjoy! I will update..just not every single day anymore =O. Home working sucks! Ahem to the story... .............................................. 11:30 pm In the club Activity: Dance night.
Yunho watched the stage as girls were defeating the boys in dancing. Finally he saw some b boy action, but none of them interest him. Yunho then took a drink, walked up and took control of the stage. Dancing with power, he watched a girl from a far.
“Yo Seul Gi!” Said a guy. He tapped her shoulder and pointed at Yunho.
“That's Yunho the richest cop in the city.” He told her. Seul Gi smiled and looked at him. Yunho then made a heart with his hands singling her out of the crowd. Everyone looked at Seul Gi and glared.
“Meh..” Seul Gi then walked out of the club, wondering about something. Yunho who was done dancing went outside to find her but she was already gone.
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The next day 6:30 am Yunho's home Activity: Training/Boxing
[Yunho's POV]
“Another boring day.” I said to myself as I gave the punching bag some quick, hard, punches. I finally stopped and headed in for a shower, just another typical day I thought.
“Hyung!” Someone called out. I got out of the shower only wearing a towel and saw Yoochun sitting there waiting for me. “Could you possibly hurry up? I need your help on this case!”
“Alright alright, but Micky, I think it's better if your on your own on this one.” I stepped back in the bedroom putting some of my dancing outfit. I wore a bullet proof vest that wasn't so suspicious looking, other words it was umm...stylish? Bleh I feel like a girl.
8:30 am The Puran Cafe Activity: Spying on Chief Jae Joong's girlfriend.
“You seriously have to stop flirting sometime Yoochun...araso?!” I whispered loudly.
“Look at how her body is shaped, those dark mysterious eyes, her soft long hair, and--”
“Shut up. Resume the spying..” I mumbled. Yoochun was obviously off guard. So that's why in most cases I have to come with him.
“Hyung! Look! She's heading to the wrong table..she's waiting for another guy?”
“It might be the fact Jae Joong might have reserved a different table than we thought he reserved..” And so...why am I his partner again?
-CRASH!-
Screams from the ladies were heard, 2 young guys were running in stealing some food along with a girl...well she looks like one. How can she run so...fast?!
“Ya! You get those punks, I'll get the girl.” Smirked Yoochun.
“How about, we both get those 3 ya?” I shook my head and so we chased after those thieves.
[end of POV]
10:01 am Outside of the cafe Activity: Running away from those cops.
“Junsu could you wait for a little bro?!” He shouted as he stopped to calm his breathing.
“There right after us Kibum!” Panicked Junsu.
“If you two don't start running, I'm going to have to kick you two out.” The girl said while she took the things and ran.
“Nuna!!!” The guys shouted. They soon started to follow her and then became ahead.
“Ya! YA YA YA!” Shouted Yunho. “Don't make me angry!”
“You already are.” Said Yoochun.
“Shut up!” Wheezed Yunho. Yoochun stopped and was catching his breath while Yunho kept running after them.
“Those punks! Every frigging single day!” Yunho mumbled under his breath. He then saw the girl giving those items to the boys but one of them dropped a bag and the things in it were all over the streets. Yunho finally caught up to them.
[Yunho's POV]
"Aish! Nice job! Run!!" Shouted the girl. She dragged Kibum and Junsu with her running away with the stolen items.
"YA! YA!! STOP!" I run after those thieves and I caught the girl but Kibum and Junsu got away again.
"This is new...who are you?" I asked while I watched her look at my gun in my pocket. "YA! Look at me when I'm talkin' to you!"
"Look you fat cop, I don't have the items" She smirked. "Why should I tell you my name?"
"Cause I'll just call you ya for the rest of your life. I am not fat either." I laughed while handcuffing her. I then realize she was the girl I saw in the club last night.
"Fine! It's Bae Seul Gi. Just don't say the Bae and call me Seul Gi." She mumbled. She seem cute...but so disappointing to know she committed a crime. I then notice my gun was gone.
"Isshi.." I mumbled.
She then pulled it out in front of me, still handcuffed.
"Hah! I'm not afraid to use this!" She screamed. I could tell she never held a gun before. I then walked closer to her.
"Seul Gi...go ahead shoot if you dare." I walked closer and closer she then screamed.
"Back off!!" She then ran into me and hit my forehead with the gun leaving a mark...
"AISH!!" I yelled in pain.
"Omo!!" She then dropped the gun and gasped and ran away.
"Those punks! That girl...aigo..my head!" I'll catch her next time...
but then she tripped and fell on the floor. I quickly ran up to her and grabbed her hands put them behind her back and handcuffed her.
“Listen...you! Do this again I'm not gonna take it easy on you! Araso?” She was then quiet. “Araso?!”
“..who are you talking to?” She was starting to tick me off.
“Ya! You!”
“You who? And who's Ya?” She laughed. I brought her up against the wall still holding on to her.
“Ya! Don't play games with me kid.” I then dragged her going back to the cafe.
“I still don't know who your talking to you.”
“I'm talking to you stupid gi!” I then saw the expression on her face, she was biting her bottom lip, glaring at me, shaking her fist in anger.
“Stupid gi? STUPID gi!? How dare you! You! Dumb, anorexic, flirtatious, useless, cop! Hah!” She shouted.
“First of all, whats your name again, so sorry to call you stupid..blah. Second, I'm pretty smart for an average guy and you should know every guy is useless by now, third..you called me fat and now I'm anorexic, and fourth, the flirtatious cop personality is taken by my partner.” I laughed and saw Yoochun driving the car, stopping by the cafe. I took her in and sat down on the passenger seat.
“And so you only caught the girl..how ironic when I could have caught her.” Laughed Yoochun.
“Say anything like that again, no more free dinner at my house on Fridays.” I mumbled.
“Omo! Ok ok..” I turned to look at...umm her and she glared at me.
“My name is Bae Seul Gi. Seul Gi.” She said in a flat tone.
“Okay okay...so umm ya! Why did you think of stealing?” I asked. Seul Gi is her name..ooh okay.
“Stop calling me Ya! I have a name it's SEUL GI. Say it once please...your making my head hurt..aigo headache.” She whined.
“Alright alright...umm Seul Gi. There...so tell me why did you steal?”
“Non of your business...” She then turned away from me but she hit her head on the window hard. “AISH! My head...owww...”
“Now what did you learn?” I laughed.
“Oh my head..oh the..the heat!” She then fell on the seat looking unconscious...she fainted?
[end of POV]
[Seul Gi's POV]
This Yunho guy is pissing me off...I knew he was stupid from the first moment I saw him in the club. I wonder if Kibum and Junsu are actually going to give those items away, if they don't, there friggin' dead...after I get away from these cops. Finally they stopped. I'm guessing there going to drag me into the jail cell...aish. If only they knew...
“Wake up, your not fooling me.” He said to me as I felt his hand lifting my head. I opened my eyes to see another cop starring at me funny...
“Wow she's so cute...” He said in amazement...wow am I that pretty or he's been living under a rock for so long.
“Yoochun please, give it a rest.” Yunho said looking irritated. I then looked around, I was no where near the police station. What's going on?
“Look, I'm going to let you off for now, the items aren't that important to the cafe apparently. Your lucky...ya.” He smiled and dragged me into a coffee shop. Why is he letting me off?
“W-What are you doing?” I asked hesitantly. First he caught me, next he's taking me out for coffee? What the hell...
“Having coffee with you, now ya, tell me why you would steal in the first place.” He asked while tapping on the table waiting for his coffee.
“Look, if I told you, you wouldn't believe me. My name is Seul Gi not ya.” I told him as calmly as possible.
“Ya, why would you steal! For yourself? Are you poor? Is that why?” He kept asking me, well I guess I would have to tell him a bit about it...
“I stole the stuff because I want to..” I said, well that's not gonna help but it's the truth! I want to steal the things for something...something he shouldn't know otherwise he'll stop my plans!
“So you truly are a criminal, a thief, a very very strange one too. I'll catch you next time..” He smirked.
“Aish..I'm going home!” I walked off.
“Ya! Ya!! Come back here! Ya!”
“I have a frigging name it's Bae Seul Gi! Get it right!!” I stormed off and saw the other cop named Yoochun standing there.
“Outta way!” I then ran away into a bus stop, luckily the bus came just in time.
“Ya! You didn't answer my questions! ISSHI!”
“SEUL GI YOU DUMB a**! MY NAME IS SEUL GI!!!” I screamed out the window. I then heard him laughing and watched him getting more distant..away from me as the bus had stopped at the next street.
[end of POV]
[Yunho's POV]
Haha, that made my day. I will catch her next time..why did I let her off?! Oh well, more important things to worry about...oh no.
“PABO! We forgot about Jae Joong's date!!!” I yelled. I quickly got in the car and waited for Yoochun to jump in and sped down the streets trying to figure out were his date went now.
[end of POV]
1:00 pm Police Station: Jae Joong's Office Activity: Request
Yunho looked and search for Seul Gi's profile. He wanted to learn more about her. He saw that she was stealing from the richest people in the city. He couldn't figure out why a young and cute girl would steal. He saw she wasn't homeless nor poor. Yunho then walked into Jae Joong's office and waited for his return.
[Jae Joong's POV]
Those unhelpful jerks...I don't blame them though, something came up...but he let her get away?! Yunho is starting to annoy me but he's the best in this facility, can't beat me though. I laughed to myself but then a man told me someone called for my name coming from my office. I opened the door to enter the room in front of my office.
“Who called?” I asked. I saw Yoochun talking to other guys about...girls. I rolled my eyes and asked again. “Who called?”
“Oh Yunho.” He replied.
I headed to my office and saw him sitting there holding papers about something.
“Ya check this profile out!” He said cheerfully.
“Profile?” I looked into it and it was some girl's records.
“This girl keeps stealing food, clothing from the richest in town.” He told me. I hope he realizes this is a city...he then continued.
“I, Yunho, is also rich so..” He then leaned up to my ears whispering, “Go spy on her for me..”
I jumped back and of course yelled,
“Bwoh?! Spy on her?!” I looked at Yunho who was walking away and said,
“Thanks man, I know I can count on you boss!” He then left. That fellow...I'm the boss, he should listen to me! I then read her name on the paper...
“Bae Seul Gi..” I then thought about it...I had a cousin with the exact name, she can't be the same person..can she?..I haven't seen her since Junior High...
With that I headed to the cafe to see if she would come, and she did. I followed her to a strange location...okay not so strange. Just some house. I then sneaked in the house by the balcony and hide behind a table to hear what the girls were saying...though this Seul Gi looked awfully familiar.
[end of POV]
4:00 pm At Ivy's house Activity: Meeting
Seul Gi walked into the room looking all upset and angry. Ivy looked at her in concern, but left her alone to cool down. Later the new computer girl walked in. In this group, the computer girl should know everything and what happened because she has access to the cameras around the city. She could watch where Seul Gi is going. Except when she's in a home of course.
“Welcome.” Said Ivy.
“Where's Kibum and Junsu...” Questioned Seul Gi. The new girl then replied,
“There not back yet they...”
Seul Gi then lost her cool and turn her head to face the girl.
“What are we going to do about him?!”
“Bwoh?” She questioned. Ivy just watched.
“That stupid cop, he thinks I'm just stealing for myself.” Said Seul Gi.
“Well he doesn't know i-it's--”
“A good thing? For those poor people?” She blurted out.
“I knew we shouldn't have trusted those two punks. There so good at stealing..to the point there good at stealing from us.” Seul Gi then stomped out of the room and headed back to her apartment.
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I know it may be a bit...um boring in the beginnings but I promise to make it more interesting! >_< comments will be appreciated!
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:57 pm
Chapter 2 Trespassing [Jae Joong's POV] 6:00 pm Outside..somewhere Activity: Spying on Bae Seul Gi
She is my cousin! My cousin is stealing? Well I guess it's for a good cause but stealing is wrong. I quickly head back to the police station.
“Where's U-Know?” I asked. Yoochun simply replied,
“He's at the gym in the fitness building.” He answered and I then rushed to the gym.
“He's not around..” I quickly sat down and heard a voice.
“Annyong!” He said cheerfully. I turn to see Yunho waving at me.
“A-Annyong!” I backed away and was about to leave. Maybe it's best if I told him she isn't my cousin...that way he won't tell the guys, my reputation will be ruined.
“Ya! What about--”
“She's--” Before I could say anything he jumped off the seat.
“So where does she live? Why is she stealing? Hm?” He kept questioning...aish. Maybe if I tell him..he won't say anything...
“Yunho Seul Gi is..umm..”
“She's what? Oh you like her don't ya?” Yunho shook his head. I then whacked him lightly on the head.
“Bwoh?! What the hell! Pabo..She's my cousin, the one I told you about in Junior High.” Yunho then smiled.
“I see I see..thanks for the help Jae Joong.” With that he just left, without asking me the other question, why did she steal.
[end of POV]
[Yunho's POV]
8:00 pm #22 Seul Gi's apartment Activity: Learn more about her
I hid behind a wall as I watched Seul Gi coming out of the door going down the hallway, she closed the door but it wasn't fully shut. I then seized the chance and ran into her home.
'...this place is super small' I thought to myself, I then saw a list on her table.
“Ms. Lee, received food that can last her 2 months and 5 new clothing....bwoh?” I continued reading.
“Mr. Shim, received new clothing for his child.” I noticed more than half of the list is crossed out. I then read the last thing on it.
“Get more clothing from another rich person just to supply the young child on the corner of 4th street.” I realize she wasn't stealing the things for herself, she was giving it away. But why steal?
“So the stupid cop finally figures it out.” She remarked. I turn to face her.
“So, your pretty much a female robin hood.”
“...Wha?” She looked at me in confusion.
“Robin Hood? The character that takes from the rich and give to the poor? Gah forget it.” I stumbled.
“Oh well I haven't read that book...heard of it though.” She laughed nervously. “Anyways what are you doing here?” She crossed her arms. “Trespassing is against the law right officer?”
“Not when it's police work.” I replied.
“What work? Your just snooping around.” Her voice changed to the tone of anger.
“Sorry, but I was curious.” I walked up to her, getting closer. I watched her look more nervous and uncomfortable, finally I got close enough to almost kiss her. Tempting, but I shouldn't. “Now why would a sweet young women like you steal hm?” I watched her expression change, she then simply smiled.
“If you haven't notice, the rich in this city are snobs, self fish and when they have excess money they don't do anything useful with it. They spend it on more clothes and more food. And you wonder why more people are getting stupider and fatter.” She then pushed me away and sat on the couch.
“Hmm, I see.” I walked up to her standing behind the couch.
“I don't even have enough to pay the rent anymore...” I heard her mumbling to herself. I then had an idea.
“Look, I know society is being unfair but stealing isn't right. What if someone stole your things and gave it away?”
“I would be happy that it's going to someone who needs it.” She was being a smart a**...
“But what if Junsu took your things..yeah I know Junsu, anyways what if he took your things and sold it to someone rich?” Seul Gi then sat there looking dumbfound. She turned to me and gave me a cold stare.
“Now your just being mean.” She said.
“But what if? Now thats how Ms. Chae Yeon feels, she's the richest women in the city.” I lied to her, about how Chae Yeon feels. Everything else is the truth I swear. I looked at her, she looked puzzled. I was satisfied and I guess I've changed her mind about it..I headed for the door.
“Umm...” She started. I was hoping she would stop me and talked more. I waited for the 'I guess your right' words...
“Yeah?” I replied.
“When you leave lock the door from the inside and shut it tightly, don't slam it. Thank you.” She smirked. She didn't fall for it...
“Why you little...” I mumbled to myself. “Ya! Next time we meet, you better not steal!” With that I walked out slamming the door.
“YAH! I told you lock it before you leave! AISH!” I heard her shouting. I then headed home to sleep.
[end of POV]
[Seul Gi's POV]
8:32 pm Outside of the house Activity: Get him back
I wore all black, tied my hair to the back and sneaked into his huge back yard. I then headed for the basement window.
“Your going to get it now..!” I whispered to myself. I then quiet broke the security alarm off the window and unlocked the lock. I stepped in quietly, stepping onto some sort of shelf. I jumped down landing on my feet, crouching down absorbing the loud thunk sound. It was pitch black I was crawling towards what seem like a bed...and I notice someone was sleeping. Is this his room?!
“Mmmm...” I heard him murmuring. I quickly and quietly crawled along the bed trying to reach the desk by it. Out of nowhere an arm just grabbed me by the waist holding onto me tight.
“Y-ya! Bwoh?!” I whispered loudly. I covered my mouth hoping he's still asleep.
“Mmm...pillow..” He pulled me onto the bed and hugged me tight. I was just...shocked, traumatized, well not really but super shocked! Still covering my mouth with one hand I used the other to pulled myself away from him. That stupid cop. Yunho is a stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid...stupid stupid stupid guy! Damn it let me go already!
“...snore.” He loudly snore by my ear, I moved my head away but he kept coming closer. He started to..cuddle. AISH!
“Omo omo! I'm not your damn pillow!...Ya! Aigo...” I whispered loudly. He then murmured again. I lifted his arm away from me and fell off the bed, landing really hard making a THUNK!
He then got up and clapped, the lights turned on. I stared at him coldly...damn of all times to mess up, why now?
“I expected you, but not in the middle of the night.” He said while scratching the back of his head.
“Y-Ya! You pervert!” I said while backing away from him to a wall.
“What did I do?” He yawned.
“You don't know! You grabbed me like some kind of pillow and and--”
“Oh, sorry usually my pillow will fall on the floor, so if you were at the pillow's spot, I'm sorry.” He yawned again. “Alright good night.” He fell back onto the bed as if nothing happened. “Mmm..all a dream.”
“AISH! Wake up! It's not a dream!” If I am caught might as well get it over with. He got up and laughed.
“Trespassing is against the law right Seul Gi?” He laughed. Finally he remembered my name.
“O-Omo..” I stood up about to leave from his window but he pulled me down and I fell to the floor facing down. He then sat on me. “YA! What are you doing?!”
“Just stay put will ya, look if you want to help the poor so badly, why don't you donate some money to them hm?”
“I would if I was rich.” Geez, what is he up to?
“I heard you couldn't pay your rent..” He sounded as if he was pondering about it. He finally got off. I quickly got up and sat on a near by chair.
“Lemme guess, you want me to sell my body and you make people pay more than usual? Or your going to make me strip in front of you and you'll pay me 100,000?” I crossed my arms. He then looked at me laughing.
“Haha, now why would I want that? I mean who would wanna see....that.” He laughed. I felt myself blushing...in anger?
“PABO!”
“Hey calm down, just kidding. I may be a guy but I'm not that horny. Plus I am a cop, thats not what I was planning.” He then started to walk, circling around me. “Do you have a job?”
“Well, I get big tips/donations from dancing in the club...no not strip type of dancing, I mean breaking, hip hop. Ya know?” I sighed as I watched him pace back and forth.
“What would you say I could give you a job that pays you 10,000 an hour?” He smiled. I looked at him with confusion...now why is he nice to me all of the sudden?
“B-Bwoh...??”
“If you be my servant, I'll let you live here and pay you 10,000 per hour if you do what i ask you, like cleaning the house for instants. Then you can donate to those poor people, and you get to live in a big home.” I then thought about it...but it seems all too...easy. I have to see how this cop is like first.
“Let me think about it...”
“Well my parents might not approve but as long you can sneak in here your good.” He laughed. We then heard footsteps above us.
“Yunho! Are you okay? You need one of omma's sleeping pills?” Said a man. I'm guessing it's his father.
“Uh..no appa! Just thinking about a huge case right now. Sorry if I am talking to myself too loud appa!” He laughed nervously. He then nudged me to leave from the window. “Tell me your answer tomorrow, at Puran cafe, oh don't worry no one remembers you.” He whispered, and by his command I quickly hopped out and ran out of the yard.
[end of POV]
[Yunho's POV]
For a girl, she's like a ninja. Did I really...hug her? Wow Yunho you need to fix your sleeping habits.
I then saw my door knob turning, my father walked in.
“Yunho? Everything alright?”
“Y-Ya.”
“Alright, go to sleep, tomorrow you have to meet my friend's daughter. She's real nice.” He told me with a smile. Great another attempt to get me married.
“What's her name?” I asked.
“Jeon Hye Bin.” He replied.
“No thanks dad, I met her a week ago and she kept nagging about my personality and saying how I should be.”
“Oh alright, but if you find a girl, please tell appa okay? Your omma is feeling very anxious about the time you'll be married. But for now, you will still meet the girl.” He then left. I sat down on my bed. I notice a scent.
“...Vanilla? Smells..good.” I laid down starring at my clock. I closed my eyes thinking about...her? I can't possibly fell for her. Thats not right, she's a thief, I'm a cop. Unless she could change...gah what am I thinking. So then it's decided, I do not like Seul Gi, just pity her? No thats not it either.
“Ugh..” I turn to the other side still trying to figure things out. I do want to help her though, I want to know more about her. I guess I have to leave it to fate.
[end of POV]
12:00 am Seul Gi's Apartment Activity: Trying to sleep.
Seul Gi kept turning, trying to get the thoughts about Yunho out of her mind.
“Aish...maybe I should accept the offer, but then what if he becomes some pervert!...like the whole pillow incident..” She then turned on her back starring blankly at the ceiling. She fiddled with her blanket. After sighing she would grunt in anger, thinking what she should do now that Yunho knows.
“He seems to be wanting to help me. Should I let him, but he's a cop. He might arrested me and fooled me. AIGO this is getting complicated. How will I tell Ivy and the new computer girl. Not only that but I have to tell little....yawn...I have to..tell..Ji..E....nn..snore.” Seul Gi finally started to feel tired, few seconds later she fell asleep.
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The next day 7:30 am Outside of the apartment building Activity: In search for nuna.
“Unni, she should stop helping the other poor people. There starting to rely on nuna now. The people not trying to get a job anymore, they think they could get the stuff from unni.” Said a little one. She sat down on the steps, playing with her necklace that Seul Gi bought for her.
“Unni is too nice, I hope she finds some other way to help us.” She got up and hopped into the building. “Even though I am 7, I understand the world more than anyone...more than nuna.”
She then came across a tall man staring at her.
“Umm...”
“Are you lost little girl?” He asked.
“No, I'm just waiting for unni.” She told him.
“A nuna?..So what her name?”
“Bae Seul Gi, she's very nice.” She smiled happily. The man crouched down and gave her a smile.
“I guess she is, hey what your name?” He asked.
“I won't tell!” She answered.
“Why not?” The man pouted.
“Not if you tell me your name!”
“Okay okay, I'm a policeman, or they just call me a cop. My name is Jung Yunho.” He smiled.
“Yunho? Sounds like an English word...” She thought about it, she heard the words from little kids in the playground at the international elementary school for foreigners.
“Sounds like 'you know' right? Well here, I know your nuna so.. I'll take you to her okay? But first, your name.”
“Ji Eun! Nice ta meet cha!” She said cheerfully. She grabbed onto Yunho's hand and skipped to apartment #22. ..........................................
So what you think so far? Hope you enjoyed it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:58 pm
D: No comments? Im starting to feel more discouraged...
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:00 pm
Chapter 3 Gettin' Started 7:52 am Outside of Seul Gi's door Activity: Barge in and have a talk
[Yunho's POV]
I lead the girl to Seul Gi's apartment, I knocked on the door.
“YA! Open up...” I then looked down to see the girl staring at me strangely. “..ahem please?” I added.
“I thought grown ups have more manners.” She told me
“They do, sometimes they forget because their getting umm old.” I smiled at her. She's so smart for her age. I knocked on the door again. The door slowly opened and I saw a dead looking girl staring blankly at me. She was all pale and wearing b boy baggy clothes. She's very different, better than meeting a girl in her under garments...right?
“What do you want.” She glared at me.
“Um, get dressed, were going to the Puran cafe remember?” I told her.
“Oh..hey Ji Eun!” I saw her face lit up, actually smiling. She then picked the kid up and smiled even more. “How ya doin?”
“Seul Gi! Good, but I want to talk to unni about my people..” The little girl said shyly. She then looked at me.
“Thank you Yunho!” Ji Eun winked at me. I flashed a smile at her and Seul Gi stopped smiling.
“Come on in Ji Eun!” She brought the kid in, so I followed but Seul Gi stopped me.
“I meant only Ji Eun..” She then slammed the door at my face. What a....grr. I knocked on the door.
“YA! What I have to say is important too! Ya!” Then the neighbors looked at me. “What?! I'm Jung Yunho, the U-Know cop.” They then ran back into there apartments. Geez...So I just sat out there leaning against the door.
“She better let me in soon” I yawned.
[end of POV]
Seul Gi sat down on the couch and waited for Ji Eun to say something.
“Unni, I think you should stop giving us everything.”
“Bwoh? But it's helping you guys a lot right?” Seul Gi questioned.
“Yes, but..Unni people are relying on you for the things. They won't even try to find a home, or they don't want to work.” Ji Eun sighed. Seul Gi's face lit up a bit and smiled. She wanted to tell her about Yunho's plan.
“Ji Eun, what would you say if I worked and donate you guys money instead? That way I'll stop umm stealing and you guys have a better chance of buying a home. But I'm more than happy to have you live with me Ji Eun.” Seul Gi smiled sweetly.
“Really? Unni you would do that? Could I?” Seul Gi nodded and gave Ji Eun a hug.
“Your like a daughter to me.” Seul Gi said softly. She then got up and opened the door but it hit against something causing a big thump sound.
“Oww!!” He cried. Seul Gi then laughed and saw Yunho's head was growing a bump.
“You can come in now...p-pabo.” She laughed. Yunho glared at Seul Gi. Then Ji Eun giggled and sat on Yunho's lap.
“Yunho! Can you carry me?” She asked. Yunho nodded and lifted her up and carried her back into the living room.
“Alright! Welcome to the Yunho plane where we fly you until you want to stop.” Yunho laughed and ran around the room carrying Ji Eun. She was pretty short for her age, even though she's 7 years old, she has the body of a 5 year old.
“Weee! Higher!” She squealed. Seul Gi just watched the two and shook her head. Finally the two stopped and sat down on the couch.
“So what do you say Seul Gi? But um it'll be 5,000 per hour since I can't pay you more than that.” He laughed a bit. Seul Gi nodded her head and Yunho smiled. “Alright you'll start at 6:00, clean the house before I get back.” Yunho then got up and left but he then remembered something.
“What?” Seul Gi asked, smiling.
“My wallet...” Yunho glared at her. Seul Gi laughed and gave him back his wallet. He then stomped off going home to supposedly meet his fiance.
But meanwhile, Jae Joong was fighting against a gang who was picking on 4 children.
9:55 am Outside from the alley to the tunnel Activity: Fighting off these punks
[Jae Joong's POV]
“Damn ******** cop!” Said one guy as he grabbed a pole that was cut off from a post. He swung it at me but I caught it and hit him on the back of his knees causing him to fall. The fight felt like hours. Finally, back up arrived to capture those dumb asses.
“Nice work Hero.” Said Yoochun. I nodded and looked around to see a girl. Her eyes were glimmering straight at me. I headed up to her but she ran away.
“Um..hey!” I called out. She then almost tripped and the heel on her shoes fell off. I went up to her to help. I crouched down to fix her shoe.
“U-Um, thank you.” She said hesitantly.
“No problem, did you see the whole thing?” I asked. She nodded and smiled.
“Your very heroic.”
“Thats why he's called Hero.” Yoochun walked into the conversation. “Hey baby.”
Heh heh Yoochun is sucking up...wait. Did he just say 'baby' as in this girl is his girlfriend?
“Hey Yoochunnie oppa! I was just dropping by and saw umm Hero doing his job. Pretty amazing at it.” She chirped.
“Oh, Micky aren't you going to introduce us?” She asked and winked at me without Yoochun noticing.
“Oh Jae Joong, this is Ivy, Ivy this is Jae Joong. No hand shaking!” Yoochun laughed. I then saw a fellow cop running towards me.
“Hero! There's another gang fight near the Red Hotel!” He shouted.
“Alright, well I guess I'll have to leave to work! Bye Ivy.” I turned away from her and walked to my car, not looking back.
[end of POV]
[Ivy's POV]
I sighed and saw Yoochun looking at me. Uh oh, I couldn't have fallen for Hero already.
“Something wrong?” I asked. Yoochun shook his head and laughed. I looked at him puzzled.
“Hey, you just look so cute when your in thought. Anyways what are you thinking about now?” He asked me. I wouldn't say 'I'm thinking about Hero right now.' because that'll just mess things up. Is sighed again and thank god for the other cop who has an assignment for him.
“Oh tell me later babe, oppa's gotta do work! See Ya!” He called out. I nodded my head and turned away to start walking home, which wasn't very far, well maybe 15 blocks away but I could take a bus right?
[end of POV] 3:00 pm The Memorial Hotel Activity: Arrange Marriage?
At the lobby of the Memorial Hotel, the hotel the Jung family owns...
“Waeyo?” Hye Bin sounded confused.
“I just don't love you, omma you should stop this! This is the 5th time. First Sunday which almost got Jae Joong to kill me -cough his first crush cough-, then Stephanie, then Eun Hye..thank god that didn't work out, and then some girl I can even remember her name. And now Hye Bin. Sorry Hye Bin, but I just don't wanna marry you.” Yunho scowled.
“Yunho, my dear successful son, please let omma be happy and marry Hye Bin-sshi? Hm? Omma just wants you to have a family before it's too late.” His mother sighed.
“You shouldn't force Yunho though.” Said his father.
“See, dad agrees with me!” Yunho then sat roughly on the couch and yawned.
“It's alright, I don't love Yunho either.” Said Hye Bin.
“Bwoh?” Yunho was a bit shocked, most girls would instantly fall for him anyway. What made Bin change her mind?
“I love another guy, Micky Yoochun!” She awed.
“No wonder, everyone just loves Micky Yoochun.” Yunho mumbled as he rolled his eyes. Feeling his ego a bit crushed he headed down to his room.
“Where are you going?” His mother asked.
“Home, oh don't bother coming home to check on me tonight, you guys need to worry about the Memorial hotel, which we own right?” His father then smacked Yunho on the head.
“Of course we own it! Now go home..Your mother and I are staying at the hotel for 3 months due to long...long.. evaluations.” Yunho nodded and walked out.
4:00 pm Yunho's Room Activity: Doing the Job
[Yunho's POV]
I got home to find everything was...the same.
“Damn it, I thought she'll actually come and clea--” Before I could complete my sentence, loud knocking was heard on my window. I went to open it and Seul Gi just jumped in.
“Your--”
“It's only 4 pm, calm down man. I'm not late. In fact, I'm super early. Damn...” Seul Gi talked to me in slang.
“I guess your right, alright you can start by cleaning my room.” I then sat on my chair and watched her making the bed for me. “Ya ya! The blankets aren't straight!”
“...Shut up.” Seul Gi mumbled she then started to picked up all my clothes and threw it in the basket...
finally she was done.
[end of POV]
5:55 pm Still in Yunho's room Activity: Cooking
“Ya, you done making food yet?! I'm getting hungry!” Yunho shouted.
“Wait! It's almost done!” Seul Gi then stirred the rice and served Yunho rice porridge.
“Rice porridge?! This isn't very...well better than nothing.” Yunho shrugged and he quickly finished the bowl.
“Bwoh! So quick..” Seul Gi gasped. “You pig!” She then headed back the kitchen to think of something. 'Should I poison him?' she thought. 'Nah, not good enough for this guy.'
“Not thinking for killing me are you?” Said Yunho who was behind her.
“Y-Ya...no! I was just thinking about what to make thats all.” She mumbled. 'Damn it!'
“Well here's a suggestion, fried rice. It's simple and you can make it.” Yunho laughed and walked out of the kitchen.
“That stu--” Before Seul Gi could continue, Yunho threw a cook book at her.
“And if you have time...in less than an hour, make me some western food!” Yunho finally left.
“Argh, why did I go for this instead of 'stealing'.” She then looked in the book and started to make spaghetti instead of fried rice.
Few minutes later...
“Done!” Shouted Seul Gi as she was stirring the home made sauce, it was very hot.
“Oh great, finally.” Yunho then sneaked behind her and poke her sides causing her to jump and almost hitting him with a hot wooden spoon. “Ya! You are trying to kill me!”
“Hey you can't just walk in and invade someone's space, let alone coming to poke people randomly!” She shouted.
“Your the one to talk, who's the thief hm?!” Yunho remarked.
“Aish! Here's your damn food, go serve it yourself. My hours are done.” Seul Gi was about to stomp off but Yunho stopped her.
“Thats what you think..” He smirked.
“Bwoh?! What now?!”
“Your going to live with me for 3 months.” He grinned. “It's going to be soooo much fun.”
Seul Gi then backed away and thought to herself, 'NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!'
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:09 pm
Hey im new in this guild and so far i really liked the stories. I like how you made Seul Gi's personality different than most of the other fanfics i've read on soompi. Dont get discouraged, because im waiting for your next update!
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