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Brooklyn Rage

PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 4:05 pm


This is set right after Eclipse ends. This is my first time so....enjoy, and tell me if I should continue or not. mrgreen


"NO!" Charlie roared. "But dad seriously Im eighteen I can marry who ever I want, whenever I want!" I replied, trying to be calm. "YOU WILL NOT MARRY THAT BOY!" He screamed even louder that before. "Oh and If It was Jcob would you be okay with it? Im an adult now dad, you cant make me do anything!" I bellowed back at him. "YOU CANT MARRY ANYONE WHEN YOU LIVE UNDER MY ROOF!" Charlie screamed so loud I was sure the neighbors could hear. "FINE THEN I'M MOVING OUT!" I roared back. All the reddness went out of Charlies face. "No..." He whispered. "Then let me marry Edward." I replied calmly. Charlies face flushed slightly. "NO. That final." "Fine, If you need me I'll be at the Cullen's house." I said cooly. Charlies face went ashen as he stared into space, wondering what he was going to do. I stomped up the stairs and ran into my room, Edward was already there with my suitcase packed. Without saying anything I ran into his arms and he hugged me and said softly "Im so sorry." Then he was gone. I snatched my suitcase and ran downstairs, knowing that just outside my Edward was waiting for me. "IF YOU WALK OUT THAT DOOR, YOUR NEVER GOING TO BE ALLOUD BACK IN THIS HOUSE!" Charlie screamed in front of the door. "Im sorry." I whispered. I silently slipped by his frozen figure and walked out the door, into Edward's car and began my new life, as a outsider.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:34 pm


i like it, but my ONLY ONLY PROBELM is that its all in one paragraph.....it kinda messes me up a bit....

lildarkangel3001


Brooklyn Rage

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:21 pm


lildarkangel3001
i like it, but my ONLY ONLY PROBELM is that its all in one paragraph.....it kinda messes me up a bit....
Oh ahah, I'll fix it when I do the second part....now I need to find time....... xp
PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:43 am


I walked outside, silent tears trickiling off my face. I could see the Volvo parked just down the road from my house. I ran to the car and jumped in slamming the door, hoping that Charlie could hear my defiance.

Edward started driving wordlessy till we got to his house, "Bella..." He started. "Edward, no. Ok, I picked the right path. I dont care what you say, I love you and I will give up anything to be with you. I could never feel the same way to Jacob. I love you more than life its self, and If Charlie cant get over that well...thats his problem." I argued.

Then it seemed as if Edward now understood how much I loved him, that I was willing to give up my familiy for him, his face seemed to light up slightly as he hugged me and whispered "Welcome to your new home." He then softly kissed me apon my lips and I opened the car door and walked out toward the Cullen's house.

Alice looked out and softly said while hugging me "Im just so sorry." I hugged her back and forced a smile and truthfuly said " You know what Alice? I think Im going to be ok." She smiled one of her brilliant smiles and led me in to my new home.

Brooklyn Rage


Brooklyn Rage

PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:01 pm


(note!!! This is from Jacob's POV!!!!! And my last post, I hated the ending so this time I'll make it better!!! Sam)



Running, I can hear the pads of my feet against the forest floor. Running this is all I can do until I am far enough to create a new life, and leave Jacob Black behind. In our pack, I am the only one who is changed, which is good so no one knows what Im doing.

Suddenly Sam enters my subcomcious and after reading my thoughts he states angerly "You cant run away from your problems! Now just because Bella is getting married DOSNT mean your life has to end! You will always be Jacob Black, no matter how far you run, we will still be able to find you."

After his little statment he left my mind. I dicided it was time to find out where I was, I peeked my head out from the trees and saw I was on a farm. "WOLF!" A distressed farmer screamed. I ran back into the forest, going as fast as I could. Three gunshots rang out behind me but I kept running, but I didnt run too far, I still didnt know where I was.

About a half an hour later I slowly sneaked out of my hiding place in the trees. It was starting to get dark, it was dusk. I looked around and saw that I was obviously somewhere in the North, the tree's were losing their green color and their leaves were falling on the ground. I suddenly felt content, like this was somewhere I belonged.

Suddenly I hear a woman scream "ELIZABETH!" I looked around and saw a sixteen year old, auburn haired girl slowly skulk into her house. Before she went in though, she turned around for one last look outside. I noticed she wasnt the skinniest but, that was okay. Suddenly her hazel eyes locked on to my frozen figue, and something happened.

Suddenly I felt dazed. my mind, which was lingering toward Bella, suddenly found Bella totaly unimportant. All that mattered now was that girl, Elizabeth I thought happily. I wanted to run up to her and hug and kiss her. All I could think about was her, not about my pack or my old life.

Suddenly it came to me, I couldnt believe it. I wanted it so badly to be Bella, but I dont care about her anymore, I hope her and Edward has a good life. She suddenly sighed and closed the door, "NO!" I wanted to yell out, but she was gone. Suddenly Sam came back into my mind and said "Congratulations, you've imprinted. Now you have a reason to stay in Wisconsin." I was frozen, I could just stare into nothingness, wishing she would come back out. Sam's words echo'd in my head "imprinted...."
PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 4:41 am


Ok since I totaly messed up this fanfiction, Im asking that it can be deleted plllleeeeaaassseeee???? Thankyou.

Brooklyn Rage


Granite-angel-art

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:12 am


I think it was ok .... it's a good idea about what might acually happen
but you know I thought charlie would not be one to argue
he might be mad that Bella's leaving .... but he wouldn't totally flip out on her sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 3:41 pm


Twilights-angel-of-love
I think it was ok .... it's a good idea about what might acually happen
but you know I thought charlie would not be one to argue
he might be mad that Bella's leaving .... but he wouldn't totally flip out on her sweatdrop
*smack* Megan how many times do I need to explain??? I messed this one up so Im not adding anything you 'tard.

Brooklyn Rage


suicadal_thoughts_102

PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 6:38 pm


its good
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 6:03 pm


In-Love-Freak
Twilights-angel-of-love
I think it was ok .... it's a good idea about what might acually happen
but you know I thought charlie would not be one to argue
he might be mad that Bella's leaving .... but he wouldn't totally flip out on her sweatdrop
*smack* Megan how many times do I need to explain??? I messed this one up so Im not adding anything you 'tard.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ........... ok but I still liked it ..... razz
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Granite-angel-art

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