Ok so I need to know what you guys think about this poem I wrote for my English class. It had to be a sad love poem, if it were up to me it would be a different subject Please tell me what you think ok.

We've been through the good and bad
You've seen me cry, you've seen me laugh
You've held me when I felt sad
I never thought this day would come
I thought our love would last
But I was wrong
Never did I think you would hurt me so bad
But that day has come, I should have known
So for me to say this hurts my heart
But I'll just say what I have to say
And that is,
Good-bye...