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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:20 am


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Long time running quest. <3

Contents:

[.Introduction and Contents.] <- YOU ARE HERE!
[.News.]
[.Current Funds.]
[.Essence and Soul.] (Essence altered)
[.Semi Custom Profile.] (Updated)
[.Guardian Profile.] (Updated)
[.Role Play Sessions.]
[.Fun Stuff.]
[.Mini Art Shoppe.] ~ON HIATUS~
[.Empty.]
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:21 am


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Monday, March 1, 10 - I was still doing tweaks and everything I think I've done enough now. Would like crits on OC mainly. And what people think of the slightly altered fel essence. I wanted something more cohesive with the soul. More of a match.

Friday, February 19, 10 - I've been gone a long time. I like my idea but I think I might have a new one that is just on the verge of fruition. But I'm also nudging the original fel essence around.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:22 am


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Items At Current Lowest Marketplace Price

Carol of Ol' Nick 3rd Gen - 190000
DandiiDooDad Spore 4th Gen - 11500
Captain Ara's Nestegg 3rd Gen - ???
Picolitrosso's Urn 11th Gen - 899999

Black Drome Egg - 80000

Hard Cold Gold:
130k


Approximate Total - 1,311,499
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:24 am


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Fel Essence: Bloodlust Soaked Moonlight
Occasionally one may look to the sky and see a bloated blood-red moon. Always that moon was ever an auspicious sign, a bad one at that! But during that dreadfull storm that full, red moon's blood drenched rays were irrevocably changed into something more sinister that lurked in the darkness. Once a red blanket of light hovered about the forest the next day there were no living things save the trees the next day as bewildered hunters and forestmen wandered the blood drenched grounds. It has mostly dissapated, yet Kyou was able to find the last vestiges of the lustful light and place it in a vial.


Soul: Werewolf
Info on Soul: Wiki Link!

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Dragonspeech

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:33 am


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Name: Solexus (if male) or Dia (if female)
Gender: Either!
Fel Essence: Bloodlust Soaked Moonlight
Soul: Werewolf
Abilities: Inciting berserker rages, increased strength, possibility of Raevan's were-form at final stage? Bound by the phases of the moon. As it wans so does the abilities, as it waxes...
Food: Moonlight, the most nutritious from the full moon. Anger/Lust. Smell of blood. (A true conniaseur - able to distinguish blood sugar levels and types.)
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

I could care less about gender and looks. smile I'll take whatever Kyoupi wishes to do for the Soul and Essence combination. Free Reign FTW, because I dislike putting contraints on artists.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:37 am


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(Submitted in the Character area.)



NAME : Xaria Anise Weaver
GENDER : Female
AGE : 22
OCCUPATION : Part-time Retail Sales, Part-time College Student
RACE : Human
LIKES : Baking, Chocolate, Handcrafts, Gaming, Music, Outdoors, Reading, Writing, Witchcraft
DISLIKES : Spiders (Arachniphobia - self explanitory), Sports, "Mishandling of Sharp Objects", Fire, Horror/Scary Movies, Choking (Pnigophobia or Pnigerophobia, fear of choking or being smothered.)
HEIGHT :5'5"
WEIGHT :228 lbs.
LOOKS : Ash-blonde hair halos about her shoulders in what used to be a sporty scene style slightly gone to seed. A moon shaped face complete with an acestral throwback of fair irish skin and dimpled cheeks when smiling complete her face. Expressional grey-blue eyes twinkle behind cat-eye shaped glasses. She mostly tosses her hair into a ponytail either low at the neck or high atop her head for simplicity; generally dressing in semi casual attire with an array of 'nice' shirts. Those with a patterned look or well fitted to her "more to love" bodily figure. (Including a vast horde of earrings for any occasion.)

PERSONALITY : Seemingly at the mercy of the moon's pull, Xaria is prone to bouts of depression from her history. However, Xaria tries to stay upbeat to go so far as to force niceities, truly believing that if one smiles enough when sad, one does become happy again. All in all, she displays a loving and loyal, caring and kind personality, always there to lend a helping hand even when she is stretched beyond her own limit. (Being from the utter difficulty of saying "No"!) But tends to be clinging and overly sensitive. A tried and true Cancerian if one were to believe in astrology. Silly and childish reactions occasionally crop up from now and then but whatever she sets her heart out to do she is usually determined and tenatious enough to finish it all the way to the end unless there is a confrontation of some sort.


HISTORY : In a brief overview - Xaria had an average childhood in a very respectible average family, up until she became older where puberty usually starts. Somehow during her schooling a switch was flipped, and who once were her friends started to ignore her and jeer her unrelentingly. Socially she became rather stunted and shy for the longest time. Despite the loving assistence from teachers, parents and only brother, it wasn't until she was able to reach her bottom - trying to commit suicide just a year before entering high school, that she was able to wake up enough to want to cling to life's thread. In that moment she had quite a life altering event involving some very important core beliefs.

Like her good natured parents after high school they urged her to become the first one to go to college. She was obviously not ready. Despite the changes in life. Her brother graduated high school a year or so after, and directly went to a university for being a vetinarian since he had so loved animals. After turning 22 Xaria had sat down and gave some thought to what she really wanted to do in life. She's now gone back to college for Massage Therapy, and precariously living at an appartment complex with her little buddy Taelisen, a little rescued dog and Charlie a tuxedo cat of whom she had also rescued from the same local shelter.

Living Arangements: Small appartment building in Barton Town.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:39 am


PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:41 am


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From random contests and gifts and such that I've collected over the course of the years... (Hah being lazy again and using a banner for my potential journal. xD )


Whisper of Roses Gifts I recieved -

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Dragonspeech

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:42 am


Post 9 - Gingie's Mini Art shop!


Will Reopen soon enough.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:52 am


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Aphismet

Hilarious Receiver

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:00 am


Nice concepts, I like that all your ideas are very different from one another in the Concepts post! all four Raevans have different personalities. biggrin The only think I'm unsure of is the burning branch essence, since eternal flame (Lazarus') is very similar, the only difference being that a branch is involved in yours. wink It should be good to check with Kyou to make sure she doesn't think it's too close, maybe?

Otherwise, good stuff! biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:13 am


I wasn't sure what his essence was, So I will change it to something else. It I can figure it out. Thanks though! And thanks for the comment. heart

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Rapidashtrainer
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:18 am


(( Rapid likes the Living Fossil concept because it tickles her to imagine a minature of a fossilized T-Rex skull rattling about demanding food and air. One question though, does it poop? XD

And, good luck in your quest! =D ))
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:23 am


Thank you and well I'm not sure, But If I eventually choose that one or one of them I'll be sure to RP it or... not happening.

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cibarium

Noob

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:54 am


Ooo, yay, another quest thread! I'm kind of fond of the Carnivorous Mushroom- eating living flesh instead of dead matter is a pretty cool idea. 8D I sorta picture it still eating like a shroom does and dissolving the meat off the hand of some poor sap who tries to pick it up instead of having teeth, though.

Living fossil... ummm... it might be because I woke up not too long ago and haven't eaten breakfast yet, but this one's kind of iffy. Vashtya's Growing Amber is already kind of a living fossil, and there's a Raevan named Kalec whose fel essence was derived from a dragon fossil. And then another quester has a Living Bone that recovers from every fracture it takes. '_'a

Aphi already covered what I have to say about the Ever-burning Branch. This concept is one of those that's really interesting on its own, but then there's the fact that there's already three Raevans that have fire somewhere in their makeup (Lazarus' Eternal Flame, Zul's Lava Ice Rock, and Kaurii LeFay's Raevan with the Inverted Flame). It might be different enough from those to still work, though.

Golden Bough is sorta amusing just based on how a Raevan feeds off of the element that its fel essence is, so one with this would probably have very expensive taste! D8 Beyond that, very cool idea and reminds me of that one story about the guy who turned everything he touched into gold and ended up starving to death or something like that. And the poem 'Nothing Gold Can Stay'- this one sure did, though. :V TAKE THAT ROBERT FROST!

You have a very nice collection of souls to go with your concepts- except the domestic cat; there's already a Raevan with a black cat's soul. I'm glad to see someone stepping up to the in-character challenge of getting the soul of a dragon, though!
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