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 Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:42 pm
Imma postin' some new s**t because Blackie told me to ;D
But I don't mind at all. Here's some of my stuff. XD
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Coloured version: [x]
WIP: [x]
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:51 pm
the hair that's swinging around looks really heavy for hair and it comes out of his head from strange positions...
edit: waitwaitwait ive got more
the arm on the naked guy is really really thick for such a skinny guy, it looks like it could be a leg
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:55 pm
the structuring of those curls makes my head hurt but your colouring is nice :3
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:55 pm
avoirdu the hair that's swinging around looks really heavy for hair and it comes out of his head from strange positions...
>_>
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 10:51 pm
Iminey the structuring of those curls makes my head hurt but your colouring is nice :3
Thank you for saying something nice at least.. >_>;;
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 11:45 pm
DELICIOUS NAZIS avoirdu the hair that's swinging around looks really heavy for hair and it comes out of his head from strange positions...
>_>
she was giving a critique yyou should be thankful @______@
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:57 am
the last one is uhhhh creepy. the head is too big and the hair doesn't look like hair.
also the arm on the naked dude is too thick.
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:09 am
ya no offense but this isnt exactly the best place to post artwork if you only want ppl to say something nice sweatdrop
i like to look for good things in art here as well as the bad, but then again i am a paula in a guild full of simons...
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:26 pm
It kind of looks like the different features of the faces are arranged randomly? I think you need to get a better feel for how far apart you want to draw eyes, and how the mouth relates to the nose and jawline.
Do you draw underlying structures at all or do you go straight to final lines? It kind of seems to me like you don't use underlying structures and you might benefit from doing so.
I do agree that your coloring is nice. I think that if you strengthen your fundamentals that you have a real chance to produce good work. You seem to be willing to put the work in, so I look forward to seeing you improve.
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