warrior_of_boognish
Oi, a good usefull reference outweighs ANNY bad juju.....well to me anyways
anywhooooo....
Aside from random structural and proportion problems (the first one in regards to the connection of the head to the neck, inner left arm being a bit too long)....your linework really could use some tender lovins....in terms of tightening it up and stablizing it.
When you're laying down your lines right now particularly on your figs, you're giving the impression that you're uncertain to where and how things should go and look, leaving things sloppy and hazy. The remedy would be to more concise with your strokes....being absolutely certain to how you want that particular line to flow instead of randomly tossin things around in the general area. Sure this doesn't have to apply all the time (in regards to quick drills, thoughts and gesturals)...its something you should push for when you're crankin out finished pieces...less mess to clean up...
this is what i like to see :}
what nova posted however isnt like anything useful or constructive
(can a mod delete it from my thread?)
also my sketches are very very messy mostly because
i dont really see a point in making them all pretty when im just going to ink over them later and then color them in a chaotic style..
i imagine its hard to give crits to someone stubborn like me
( i have been in my habits for a loong time now )
i really dont know if i could relearn the whole correct drawing process
and stray from what ive already learned on my own terms
or im just scared ill suck idk :{
i guess if i wanted to show black and white and sketch art for serious
(instead of finished colored pieces)
i would care more about being exact and clean :}
the anatomy pointers ******** i didnt even think about how her neck and s**t contributes to how wonky it looks i feel so silly lmao
i will definitely go and try to fix that xD
