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 Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:34 pm
Forever
is something you believe in
when your very young
you think forever with your family
forever with your friends
but...
forever ends abrutly
at any moment or time
ending all your dreams and hopes
forever in time
this is something i wrote after loseing one of my best friends
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 9:58 pm
it reminds me of somethings that happened in my life
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:56 am
this is a beautiful poem. it literally brought me to tears once I read the ending. I'm close to losing my true love to cancer, so this is so very near to me. you are a great poet and I can't wait to read more of your work! ^^
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:17 am
Yeah, thats pretty sad man. I'm sorry to hear that.
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