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PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 2:39 pm


Title: ChangMin's Beloved Pocky
Pairings: YunJae & YooSu
Rating: PG
Form: Oneshot
Genre: Comedy
A/N: After many edits I'm satisfied, finally! ^______^ <3
I'm rather fond of writing ChangMin related fanfiction recently. Probably because he's just so young and different hehe. This was my first ever fanfic that I wrote a few months ago. And it has now met my standards enough to be posted here! Hope you all enjoy ^____^)b

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"Where's my strawberry pocky?!"

The wake up call could be heard throughout the entire apartment.
ChangMin's cry of anger.

"My pocky...my precious pocky...my last box!" ChangMin cried.

The kitchen was in a mess, there were cupboards opened, contents spilled all over the floor, JaeJoong's fine cooking utensils all over the kitchen.
The sun shone through the kitchen window on such a dump.

"The box was here yesterday! I swear it was here!" ChangMin was on the brink of bursting into tears.

'Maybe...maybe someone took it! Maybe someone did this as a joke...it could either be YooChun or JunSu! Those jerks!' Thought ChangMin.

He stormed his way to YooChun's and JunSu's bedroom.

He pushed the door open with so much force that it seemed that the door would break off its hinge, it creaked.

Such a painful sound awoke the sleeping JunSu from his deep slumber. He eyed groggily at the tall figure at the doorway. He rubbed his eyes so he could focus on the intruder, only to find ChangMin flaring.

ChangMin gave JunSu an evil glare, JunSu could only reply to this with a face full of confusion and fear.

"JunSu hyung! Where's my pocky?!" ChangMin flared through gritted teeth.

"Pocky? Why would I take your pocky?"

"DON'T LIE!"

ChangMin jumped onto the bed, in front of JunSu. Spreaded his arms out cornering JunSu to the wall. Their faces just inches away from each other.

"But Minnie..." JunSu sobbed in fear.

"Don't lie to me...I'm warning you..."

ChangMin pummelled his right first through the wall right next to JunSu's head, showing the rage that was boiling inside of him. This goes to show never underestimate the youngest of the group, especially his nuclear punches.

On the opposite side of the wall YunHo and JaeJoong awoke from such racket and stared at the hole in shock, they climbed out of their beds immediately to examine ChangMin's destruction.

The hole was getting bigger as chunks of plaster broke off the wall.

"Aish...ChangMin..." JaeJoong shook his head disapprovingly.

"Yah! ChangMin! Don't hurt JunSu!" said YunHo alarmingly.

YunHo and JaeJoong climbed through the hole and into the room that JunSu shared with YooChun.

"But hyung~! JunSu stole my pocky!" ChangMin aimed an upset look at YunHo.

The leader, YunHo, was the only one who could settle down ChangMin at a time like this.

"You shouldn't jump to conclusions ChangMin" YunHo gave ChangMin a warning look.

"But...but I could smell strawberry pocky coming from his mouth!" ChangMin pointed his now bleeding hand to JunSu's face.

"I'm innocent!" JunSu squirmed, tears started forming in his eyes.

"Where's YooChun anyway?" JaeJoong asked.

The members heard the front door open and slam shut. YooChun was home.

He stepped into the room holding a large bag that seemed to be full of rectangular boxes. Everyone went silent at his presence.

He gave a blank stare at the hole, then at ChangMin, then at the crying princess of his life.

"Heyy...what's the commotion?" he asked nervously, breaking the silence.

"Speaking of the devil..." JaeJoong uttered under his breath.

"Chunnie~!" JunSu seeking an opening from his enclosed space and sprang from his spot and leapt into YooChun's arms.

"What's wrong Su? Your eyes are red, did someone make you cry?" YooChun swept a tear from JunSu's eye.

"Minnie was being mean to me, he accused me of stealing his stoopid strawberry pocky!" JunSu pouted and pointed ChangMin instantly.

"Is this true?" YooChun gave a concerned look to his dongsaeng.

"Yes, I searched every part of the kitchen just for my pocky. So I thought somebody like you or JunSu may have took it...seeing as you two seem to like to have....midnight activities with each other..."

Once JaeJoong heard the word 'kitchen' he dashed out of the room and sprinted to the kitchen.

"OH MY GOD! MY KITCHEN! MY BEAUTIFUL KITCHEN! CHANGMIN HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY KITCHEN!"

Everyone heard JaeJoong's roar of outrage all the way up the cooridor.

JaeJoong stormed back to the room and glared with murderous intent at ChangMin.

"What?" ChangMin gave a puzzled look at JaeJoong.

"ChangMin you idiot" YunHo sighed and slapped his forehead.

"Don't act like you don't know Shim ChangMin. YOU know that you shouldn't go anywhere near MY KITCHEN touching MY STUFF. Especially that special set of utensils that my parents gave me when I debuted! YOU should've NEVER touched them! YOU HEAR ME? NEVER!"

JaeJoong was at his climax now. YunHo leapt from ChangMin's side and embraced JaeJoong tightly in his muscular arms.

"Calm JaeJoong...he's still young and still has lots to learn.."

"YOUNG?! LOOK AT HIM JUNG YUNHO! HE'S TALLER THAN US! MATURE AND STONG TO THE POINT THAT HE CAN SMASH THROUGH WALLS WITH THOSE FISTS OF HIS! CAN YOUNG BABIES DO THAT?! NO! LAST TIME I CHECKED THEY WERE SMALL, IMMATURE AND WEAK! WEAK DAMNIT!"

"Jae...Boo-Jae...clam." YunHo cooed into JaeJoong's ears.

JaeJoong buried his head into YunHo's warm chest and cried softly.

YunHo carried JaeJoong out of the room.
The others watched them silently as they left.

"So..yeah...my pocky...." ChangMin slowly eying the remaining two.

"CHUNNIE PLEASE EXPLAIN TO CHANGMIN THAT I'M INNOCENT!" JunSu grabbed onto YooChun's shirt and shook him frantically within his hold.

"OK. OK. Stop shaking me Su..." YooChun tugged JunSu'a hands away from his shirt.

"Alright. I confess. It was I that took your pocky ChangMin. Not JunSu. You see...I was a bit peckish last night and went to look for a midnight snack. I found your pocky box and thought you wouldn't mind, so I took it back to my room and ate half of it and fell asleep. And I guess JunSu found the box next morning and thought it was mines. And you see...we have this thing where whatever is mines is JunSu's and whatever is JunSu's is mines...So JunSu must have thought it was mines and ate some of the pocky when I was gone."

"That was ChangMin's pocky..? Wait...why weren't you here when I awoke?" asked JunSu.

"Oh, I was at the shops to buy more pocky and snacks so I can use it as apology to ChangMin for taking his pocky without asking."

"Oh...so...ChangMin. What do you say to me now? Hmn?" JunSu threw a smug look at ChangMin, arms at hips, triumph.

"Erm...YooChun hyung...can I have the pocky now?" ChangMin slowly turned his gaze back to the older member.

"Cos I'm starving and I don't think JaeJoong hyung would cook my breakfast anymore" ChangMin replied.

JunSu gave a blank expression and stared open widely at ChangMin for a couple of seconds as YooChun handed the bag of pocky to ChangMin, and ChangMin began devouring the first box of strawberry pocky hungrily.

"Ch...Chunnie~! ChangMinnie didn't apologize to me for making me cry!"

Tears started to form again from JunSu's eyes.

"I'll apologize in place of ChangMin for you"

Yoochun gave a wink as he swept away JunSu's tears and kissed JunSu's left cheek.
JunSu giggled and hugged YooChun's waist tightly like a satisfied little kid that finally got what he ever wanted.

The 3 of them walked out of the room and crept into the living room where JaeJoong was sleeping peacefully on YunHo's shoulder on the couch.

YunHo turned around and put his finger on his lips indicating that no noise was to be made.
Slowly, YunHo lifted JaeJoong's head and put it on the couches arm rest, without waking JaeJoong up.

The 4 of them started to sneak into the dining room when...

"JUNG YUNHO! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HERE ALL ALONE?! I MIGHT GET MOLESTED BY SOME FREAK!"

The outburst caused everyone to jump, they thought JaeJoong was awake now and tiptoed back to JaeJoong's side to find him sound asleep, odd.

"JaeJoong hyung must be dreaming..." ChangMin said, munching on his 3rd box of pocky.

"No ChangMin dear. I am actually wide awake 'pretending' to be asleep just to hear what you guys might be talking about me behind my back..."

JaeJoong shot up from the couch and grabbed ChangMin's neck.

"Now ChangMin. You are going to put down that pocky box and apologize to both me and JunSu for making us cry." JaeJoong wore a mental expression, his facial features were twitching like mad.

"Oh and don't forget, you must apologize to manager hyung for the damage you made to that wall back there..." YunHo added in.

"Yes, that too..." JaeJoong tightened his grip on ChangMin's neck, making ChangMin turn pale.

"H..hy...hyung...let...g...go" choked ChangMin.

"JaeJoong, I think you should let go before you kill him...if you don't you and JunSu would never get that apology." YooChun advised JaeJoong.

"Teehee! ChangMin's turning blue!" said JunSu giddily.

JaeJoong dropped ChangMin to his knees, ChangMin gasped heavlily and rubbed his neck as it turned red from JaeJoong's deadly hands.

"I'm...I'm sorry JaeJoong hyung for messing up your kitchen and making you cry like that.." croaked ChangMin.

"..and JunSu...I'm sorry for accusing you...and making you cry too..." ChangMin looked up at JunSu with watery red eyes, choking as he said the words.

"We accept your apology ChangMinnie!"

JunSu kneeled down and took ChangMin into a warm hug. JaeJoong did the same and embraced the two lovingly.

"But if manager hyung makes us pay for the wall bill you will have to be the only one that pays for it." JaeJoong whispered into his ears and a devious smirk appeared on his porcelian face.

ChangMin broke the hug and looked at JaeJoong oddly for a few seconds and realized what he meant.

"Oh that...eheh..well...I am a student afterall..." ChangMin looked away nervously.

"DON'T TRY TO GET OUT OF IT SHIM CHANGMIN! YOU WILL PAY FOR THE WALL SOMEHOW! THIS IS EXTRA PUNISHMENT!" screamed JaeJoong.

"Better obey JaeJoong hyung's words...Or you'll find yourself starving outside this apartment for the next 3 weeks..." JunSu whispered into ChangMin's ears

ChangMin shivered and nodded his head in agreement.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:44 pm


OMG and LOL!!! xd
That was hilarious!

Fav parts:
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This goes to show never underestimate the youngest of the group, especially his nuclear punches.


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He gave a blank stare at the hole, then at ChangMin, then at the crying princess of his life.


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"...So I thought somebody like you or JunSu may have took it...seeing as you two seem to like to have....midnight activities with each other..."


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"OH MY GOD! MY KITCHEN! MY BEAUTIFUL KITCHEN! CHANGMIN HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY KITCHEN!"


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"YOUNG?! LOOK AT HIM JUNG YUNHO! HE'S TALLER THAN US! MATURE AND STONG TO THE POINT THAT HE CAN SMASH THROUGH WALLS WITH THOSE FISTS OF HIS! CAN YOUNG BABIES DO THAT?! NO! LAST TIME I CHECKED THEY WERE SMALL, IMMATURE AND WEAK! WEAK DAMNIT!"


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"JUNG YUNHO! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HERE ALL ALONE?! I MIGHT GET MOLESTED BY SOME FREAK!"

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:50 pm


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I liked the touchy JaeJoong character xDD
PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:04 am


HAHA, ChangMinnie was soooo cute! i understand his love of pocky, though the wall-smashing thing might be a bit hard for me...LOL, jaejoong was SCARY...Minnie's poor neck...

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:51 pm


I loved it. Lol.
I love the couple moments. biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 11:23 am


lol. I think that is the funniest fanfic that I have ever read. I was reading it at work and I had to hold my laughter in and so tears started pouring down my face and my mascara ran. Omg. That was hilarious. Jejung was the best.

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