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Wolfram Lee Ysud

PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 11:11 pm


So far:

This leaves the guild or the hands of my mistress, Trespassers W, i will make sure someone is banned.

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Name: Levi Maccabeus Codeyn (pronounced Coh-deh-YEEN)
Age: 35
Status: Rogue (Lone Wolf)
Minor History: Brother of Judas. Former member of a mercenary clan who have ancestral roots with the Zealots from Christ's time. Shunned and declared unclean by elders (one of whom was Edmund) who felt him not in control of his strength and wrath. Second successful test subject of what is currently codenamed G-Origin.
G-Corp Codename: Samael

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Name: Judas Gabriel Codeyn
Age: 32
Status: First-rank Warrior (Chieftain)
Minor History: Brother of Levi. Voluntarily-exiled member of same mercenary clan. First successful test subject of G-Origin. Possible that he knew or may be LabtechX.
G-Corp Codename: Israfil


Basic plot - Judas was previously employed by G-Corp, but he has a darker history and much deeper involvement than originally lead to believe.

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A council. Dark room. Four men in ceremonial garb: white robe, red sash across torso, sandals (worn from use). Arranged in a circle, compass points

Two men, both with similar features and scars, one raven-headed, the other a head of honey-blonde. Nude from the top up, ceremonial tattoos covering their torsos. Standing at military attention, at their sides ceremonial weapons – scimitars, daggers. The weapons of an ancient order.

A beckoning voice – “Ye sons of Blazing Thunder.” – echoes in the chamber. The apparent leader, from East. “Ye both, the last of your clan, whose name means Blazing Thunder, have shown yourselves the pride of your ancestry. Your feats have in fact amazed your elders.” A pause. The men still at attention. “However, we have seen issue with one. … Levi, step forward.” The raven-head stepped north-bound. “You are strong, but you are too headstrong to know that not everything requires strength … However,” pausing, “your brother, Judas,” … At that cue, the honey-blonde one stood at attention. “… He knows the path of hashashin. The code of the assassin requires one to be clever and careful. For as our elders and ancestors have written, It is better to be weak, swift and smart than to be strong, slow and careless.” The men lowered their hoods behind their heads, one of which (the speaker) had a scar on his forehead in the shape of an “x”. “Therefore, it is our decision that Judas be blessed with the rank of Chieftain.” The speaker stepped forward with a bottle of oil and a container of myrrh. Anointing Judas with the mark of his tribe, his clan … his family. Worshippers of Eirmehz.

Levi, his eyes clothes, betrayed a face full of rage, the very reason he was not chosen. The elders underestimated his speed. Quick enough to grab at one arm … not fast enough to grab the other as the free fist struck the head elder with a punch to the elder’s right temple.

The elders caught him post-assault. However, Judas had the right, as chieftain, to say what he did that would damn his brother to a fate worse than death. Words that were on the mind of the head elder. “As is the right of Chieftain, my first command over the caravan will be as thus.” He pointed at his brother with a finger that burned with judgment and anger. “I, Judas Gabriel Codeyn, hereby decry Levi Maccabeus Codeyn as a son of Cain, a lone wolf and pariah. He shall no longer be honored as if among the living.” A ceremonial turning away. “Leave, you murderous son of a dishonorable parentage.” It was at this that Levi stored out, unceremoniously furious, and wrongly. “Hear me, clan of Codeyn. You shall be the last of your kind.” With a single finger raised towards the 5 in the chambers that were contained within an elaborate tent, Levi walked out, alone, into the desert.

The room was ceremoniously cleaned to remove the presence of the “unclean one,” the violent rogue. They all knew he was going to return somehow … some way … that would require rituals not yet even created to handle such a violent and harsh being.


The main story occurs 15 years later, current-day
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:36 am


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Sounds interesting - so what exactly is it you want help with?

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Koneko Koji


Wolfram Lee Ysud

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:29 pm


Writing the rest xd
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:35 pm


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Hmmm... do you have any specifics?
Like local village names, countries, alliences etc
Local drinks, foods, garments etc

If you can give me some names, charas you want involved = and perhaps a vague idea of some other player created charas, I'd be happy to take a shot at it. 3nodding

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Koneko Koji


Wolfram Lee Ysud

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:56 pm


Actually, i was thinking of a group called The Sons of Blazing Thunder. An assassin's guild in which the Codeyn brothers (the last in existence) and Edmund are/were members. An article i wanted put in would be something called the Edicts of Blazing Thunder ... basic laws of an assassin clan.

i'm going to be crucified for doing this, but i want to have stated within the plot that Judas was LabtechX. The reason X was chosen wasn't that he was a variable, chaotic force, but that he was originally an eXperiment. The idea is that an entire village was slaughtered by Levi recently. The result of this slaughter was a significant reading of energy output caught by a G-Corp computer and Judas, both confirming that Levi is no longer Levi but the G-Corp weapon Samael. It's only later in the story that the reason for the reading is revealed.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:26 pm


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Hmm, so maybe a quick something like -

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Edmund was slumped over his coffee, the break room strangely empty for the hour between shifts - usually techs coming off duty laughed and caught up with the ones going on, chocolate and caffeine dolled out to those who'd need to be vigilant during the night.

The overhead PA system crackled to life, and a deep voice, more suited to barking out commands than whispering public service messages, called out, "Edmund to the control room please - Edmund to the control room."

Downing the last cooling dregs of his drink, the scar faced man stood with a grimace, "I'm getting too old for this," he muttered a little bitter as his joints creaked and popped.

Leaving the room, he headed down the dimly little corridor, his eyes adjusting to the red emergency light that illuminated all but the main junctions. Turning into the comms room, he opened the door and grit out, "Report."

"Edmund," a tall blond man was leaning on one of the large computer banks, the gold of his earrings glinting in the light from the monitors.

"Judas," he acknowledged the man who he'd been partnered with long before he took on the respectable facade of shop keep and confidant to the richest man in Gaia, "What's wrong."

Judas moved towards him, all loose limbs and overly-casual grace - the uninformed observer would see a pretty faced boy of a man, innocent and hard working - it was only those who knew how to look that knew better.

"There was an unconfirmed energy reading caught on Sensor Bank 4 - it doesn't look good."



What do you think?
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Koneko Koji


Wolfram Lee Ysud

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:04 pm


A good one ^w^

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Judas continued. "Edmund, how long has it been since you last saw the Son of Cain?" His facial expression turned to one of thoughtful suspicion, a look in which Edmund you could predict the next statement. "I would dare say 15 ... no. Twelve years ago. You know that." He paused, wondering if his own suspicion was correct. "You don't possibly mean ...?"

"The readings are similar to the initial readings for Samael. I would have to check the details soon." The tension was in the air. "Funny how ... " Judas paused, hoping and wondering if Johnny wasn't listening in somehow. "It's weird that it took my taking a different persona in order to hide my involvement in G-Origin. Levi would have tried to kill us both if he knew we were directly involved." Edmund was stunned. Levi? Still alive? Surely ... but he decided to speak first, think later. "While it is regretable that Bucho had to die in your place in order to continue G-Origin, one would only wonder what would happen if anyone with such a high concentration of Virus in their system would be killed in such a way."

Judas glared at the aging Scot. "You know that I would have died, plain and simple. The only cure for this breed of virus is high-energy heat. A nuke, basically." He pointed at the results. "We both know this is Le- ... no. If the reading is this high, Levi is no more. The virus is kicking in." A puzzled look. "But how? Why so soon?"
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:15 pm


I don't think my direct writing will be of any use to you, what with compatibility problems and inconsistency, but I can definitely help write out plots and characters and such.

The assassin's guild thing sounds interesting.
So are the Codeyn brothers and Edmund the last of the Sons of Blazing Thunder?
If I knew a little more about character relationships I could go crazy and write/plan a brief history of the guild and why they're the only ones left and such.
I think I'd enjoy that.
=O

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Wolfram Lee Ysud

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:52 pm


imma spoil it a bit. Judas and Edmund exiled themselves to work in G-Corp (then a pharmaceutical company), but the other elders allowed for this, not knowing of G-Origin. Levi comes back a year after the exile and destroys the home settlement (including remaining elders), thanks to his hiring on a group of mercenaries (Gee, what a coward).

Basically, Levi is a madman with enough power to take on the Crazy 88, O-Ren Ishii, Bud, Elle, Vernita and Beatrix all at once. Judas has the same power but has the mental stability of a Buddhist monk. They're opposites on the same spectrum as far as self-control is concerned.

Again, Levi and Judas have the same strength level, but also the same amount of G-Virus in their system. In fact, same strain - G-Rosalie. These two were the first successful test subjects, but that's because the brothers are immune to the virus. Naturally immune. They're naturally-birthed freaks of nature whose immune systems have the capabilities of destroying or permanently keeping at bay any virus. (Like those people who NEVER get sick, only more extreme)

However, Levi doesn't know that his brother was involved ... only Edmund, Johnny, Labtech123, Labtech13 and ... you guessed it - LabtechX.

And i already hinted enough ^w^
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:18 pm


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Edmund couldn't help but interject. He was intrigued by Judas' puzzled look. "What if he actually died, instead of our having considered him as dead to the clan?" The blonde shook his head, turning to Edmund. "The only way we can prove that is video surveillance, and we would have prior gotten word of his death. His vital signs have been stable for the past 12 years." Judas opened his eyes wide, an expression only fitting to be called the "Oh, s**t" look.

"What if he tapped the virus ... "

Edmund knew what Judas was talking about, and it scared him. "Well, we did test you first in the project. What if he has the same properties as you? I mean, you both have a special immunity to the virus." The blonde barked at him: "ALL viruses, thank you. And i know where you're going with this." He looked down, apparently tired and worried. "My apologies. But if he went activated Samael in the same way I activated Israfil ..." He stopped. A dark, self-defeated aura.

Wolfram Lee Ysud


Wolfram Cecilia Ysud

PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:42 am


i know we're inactive ... but we can still write this!!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 9:26 am


I'm not very proactive, so if you ever need something, just tell me to do it.
=P

Lord Hermes Falshed


Wolfram Cecilia Ysud

PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:53 pm


Writing the Edicts of Blazing Thunder. i'm actually trying to promote the idea of using illustrated prose for the next story update
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 4:48 pm


Like, Gaia story update?

Lord Hermes Falshed


Wolfram Cecilia Ysud

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:43 am


Polynikes Hermes Pathos
Like, Gaia story update?
yup.

And it seems Fleep liked our idea.
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