Wow i really like your story.
at first i was just looking for something to pass my day of boredom and i saw your post on the guild, and to tell you the truth im not a big jacob supporter, so i wasn't really going to read it.
then i decided that i was willing to give it a chance and something told me that i would like it. and i im glad that i did chance a few minutes to start reading it cause once i started reading it i couldn't stop. i was sitting at my computer for almost 2-3 hours reading your story and my mom almost got soo annoyed, that i refused to stop for a second, the she almost grounded me. lmao
i think i liked it because i could see somthing like this actually happening in the twilight seires except for some parts that are truely fan fiction. but i love it and i hope you continue writing.