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I took everyone's advice and rewrote my fanfic. I put more detail and cuteness! The one person who had a great impact on my was someone who told me it was bad rather harshly but she did give creative critisism. I regret replying to her post angrily as it was very immature of me. But Here it is with more detail. CREATIVE CRITISISM PLEASE!!!!!! And chapter 2 will come soon so never fear. Be warned that i will modify a bit because i did not plan on showing it to the public so i wrote some stuff that some people would find........ ANYWAY ENUFF OF MY RAMBLING ON WITH THE FICCY!!!!!!


Rated T for minor swearing! GET OVER IT!

Rukia Kuchiki was not afraid of anything. She didn’t flinch at the sight of big, ugly snarling hollows and wasn’t afraid to crush a tarantula. She was sound asleep in Ichigo’s closet when she suddenly awoke with a cold shiver down her spine. She shooed it off then went back to sleep.
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Meanwhile, far away at the Soul Society, Renji was concocting up a foul green liquid. “ Once Rukia is afraid of everything, she will cling to me for support.” he said. He fantasized of Rukia clinging to him for support while Ichigo sulked in a corner.

Renji chanted some unfamiliar words and the liquid floated through the walls, defying the laws of physics. The foul liquid floated all the way to earth and dissolved into Rukia’s skin. The stinging pain awoke Rukia with a start. The dissolved liquid left a dark purple mark. Suddenly a cricket jumped out and landed on Rukia’s arm. It far more bigger than any normal cricket.

Rukia stared at it in disgust. The potion started to take effect. Rukia screamed and bolted out the closet. She fell on Kon and awoke Ichigo abruptly. “ Rukia what the hell are you doing!?” Ichigo exclaimed. “ C-c-cricket!!!!!!!!” Rukia yelled. “Shutup! You’ll wake up the whole house! And since when are you afraid of tiny bugs!?” Ichigo said. “ But it was big and hairy and-and- Ichigo kill it!!!!!!!!!!!!!” cried Rukia. “ Fine! Fine! Just let me go!” Ichigo said. Rukia squeezed Kon to her chest, a place he had only dreamt of being. “ It must be a blessing from the heavens! Ah they’re so soft.” said Kon.

Ichigo expected it to be a big insane flying roach {{ yes they are real. I have seen them}}.
But it was a small cricket only slightly bigger than most. He killed it and threw it away. He turned around, about to yell at Rukia. But her eyes were bigger than ever and full of fear. Ichigo was immobilized by such a cute face. “ Ichigo can I please sleep with you tonight?” asked a red faced Rukia. “ WHAT! HELL NO!” Ichigo said blushing redder than a tomato. “ What? Please Ichigo! I’m scared. I don’t want to be alone” Rukia cried. Ichigo could not say no to such a cute face ( who can). “ Alright! Just-just don’t-” Ichigo started. “ ICHIGO THANK YOU!” yelled Rukia. She glomped Ichigo and crawled into his bed.

Rukia was asleep in less than a minute. “ Good night.” Ichigo said. Ichigo looked into Rukia’s sleeping face. He never knew she could look so relaxed. He gave her a goodnight kiss on the forehead then rolled over and went to sleep.

cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!