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 Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 7:42 am
My Loneliness
Out of the abyss of my loneliness,
I cry.
In my solitude,
I hurt.
Bring me sanctuary,
Bring me hope
So that I may find the light and reach out
…..
And feel
…..
And live
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:34 pm
I like it. It's very concise, and doesn't have more than it needs to get the point across.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:36 pm
Nice.Thats all im saying.Personaly though i find that solitude helps me gather myself but thats just me.And honestly im just posting my oppinion everywhere cause i have nothing to do and am way BOOOORED.
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