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 Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:39 pm
I've been typing my Gaian story for a couple of days now 3nodding Please Read and review. I know my story is pretty lame but bear with me okay?
Bold: When someone's talking
Italic: When someone's thinking
Characters
zz_snoozy_zz: My best friend who's sort of n00bish xd
hlbsquirrel: My animal lover best friend
quixsie: My crazy won't-shut-up best friend
L o L i t a B a k a: My spazzy best friend
Kaggie101: My rich-looking avi sister
Madolline: The kinder/cuter version of Snarkeh
Snarkeh: The anime-lover friend
spike_ventikes: Big brother role model
orange7: hlb's older sister
punk9: LoLaka's younger brother
All of us saying something together
NPC
Other characters
And of course, me mrgreen
NOTE! Sometimes it would take me longer to post my story because there are many colour codes and I have to do them all. Bear with it.
Updates
1/22/2007 - First Chapter Posted!
1/23/2007 - Second Chapter Posted!
1/24/2007 - Third Chapter Posted!
1/26/2007 - Fourth Chapter Posted!
1/27/2007 - Fifth Chapter and Sixth Chapter Posted!
2/1/2007 - Seventh Chapter Posted!
9/13/2007 - Eighth Chapter Posted!
9/15/2007 - Ninth Chapter Posted!
9/17/2007 - Tenth Chapter Posted!
8/14/2008 - Eleventh Chapter Posted!
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:40 pm
Chapter 1 Beep beep beep bee..-slam-! "Damnit it! That's my fourth one this week!"Hi! My name's MZJ. As you could tell, I'm not a morning person. I especially hate my alarm clock."Ugh! That's another 95g down the drain!""MZJ, are you okay?"asked my friend zz_snoozy_zz.That's zz_snoozy_zz but we call her snoozy for short. She's one of my four other roommates. snoozy and I have been best friends since we were in kindergarten. snoozy is a better morning person than I am."Yeah, I just broke my alarm clock.""Again?"
I blew a raspberry at her."Anyways, get ready. We're going shopping today.""Fine."I looked at the clock I had above my bed. 7:00 AM GST (Gaia Standard Time) I went to the bathroom, brushed my hair, brushed my teeth and washed my face. I don't take showers in mornings because I'm afraid that I'll fall asleep while I'm taking one. I changed into my purple outfit. I'm a purple person. My goal on Gaia is to collect every purple item. I went downstairs and saw hlbsquirrel, quixsie and snoozy.Let me explain to you all my friends. hlbsquirel (hlb for short) is another of my best friends. She likes to collect yellow stuff because yellow is her favourite colour. She has a Mochi Puppy called Nadda. I gave Nadda for hlb as a gift. She's wearing a white nurse outfit. (Which I have but purple) quixsie is my loud best friend. She's weird and creative. quixsie has the tendancy to buy and sell her clothes, which really is annoying."Good morning!""Morning!" everyone replied."How much pancakes do you want?" quixsie asked me."5" I replied."Where's LoLaka?" hlb asked.L o L i t a B a k a is her name. LoLaka for short. LoLaka is my japanese lolita best friend. She has the most monthly collectible items out of all of us. Although, my sister Kaggie101, might beat her at that."Here I am!" LoLaka yelled."How much pancakes do you want?" quixsie asked while giving me my pancakes."10!""Are you sure?""Yup!" LoLaka replied as she sat on a chair next to me.I started eating my pancakes. If you're wondering why all my best friends are in my house, it's because they couldn't get a house in Towns before they were all taken. So, they're staying at my house. We're called the 5 BFFL because we are the bestest friends on Gaia. I finished all my pancakes and dosed it down with Coke. quixsie gave LoLaka her pancakes and started devouring them."Where are we going today?" quixsie asked as she drank her coffee from her mug."I want to go Gambino Outiftters. I have enough gold to buy about three more purple items. And I need to go to the Faktori because I smashed my alarm clock again.""HR Wesley. My Gwee burned all my black bras""Durem Depot. I want to buy some of the Gunner stuff.""Barton Boutique. I want to see Rufus again.""Well, I wanted to go to Barton Jewelers. I have enough gold to buy a Gold Sweetheart Pendant."We sighed together. We may be best friends, but we have too many different tastes. That's why we love each other so much. ^^ We all have special gold collecting skills. I do lots of Jig-Saw and posting. snoozy does many random posts. hlb does polls and posting. quixsie sells the stuff she doesn't need anymore and LoLaka gets her gold from commenting on profiles and spazzing a lot."How about this, we all go to the stores we want to go and come back go to my sister's house at 12 PM to eat." I suggested.Everyone nodded and I went to the telephone. My sister Kaggie101 is my little sister but she owns a restaurant. The restaurant is her own house. Oddly enough, she has a house next to mines.Ring...ring...-pop-"Hello?""Hello, Kaggie, it's me, MZJ.""Hey MZJ! What's up?""Not much, hey, could me and the BFFL eat at your restaurant at 12?""Sure! You know that you guys could come over anytime ya know.""I know, but I'm just making sure.""Okay, I have to go now. I need to open my restaurant.""Kay. See ya later.""Bye!"I hung up and did a thumbs up to my BFFL."Then it's settled. We meet back at Kaggie's restaurant at 12 PM GST."Chapter 2 We all set our watches and left the house together. I walked down the streets of my neighbourhood. I have very nice neighbours. Once, someone gave me a Caramel Cheesecake for no reason. I started skipping until I started stepping on soft sand. Gambino Island. Home of the Gambino Casino. Before I could even go to Sasha's store, I went to the bank to see if I have any trades. Meredith owns the bank and is the only accountist. I don't know how she manages to get all the trades done. I waited in line for 5 minutes until I went up to her."May I help you?" "Yes, is there any trades for MZJ?"Meredith looked at her computer and looked at me."No, sorry.""It's okay."I left the bank and went to Gambino Outfitters. Ahh...Gambino Outfitters. When I was new to Gaia, Gambino Outfitters had all the clothing I need, cheap too. I went into the store and saw the bright and happy Sasha."Hey MZJ! How may I help you today?" she asked."Hi Sasha. Do you know where all the Purple Pimpin' items are?""Let me see..." Sasha looked around the store."Nope sorry, do you want me to get you the items at the back?""Sure!""Which items?""Royale Purple Pimpin' Jacket, Royale Purple Pimpin' Platforms and a Royale Purple Pimpin' Cane.""I thought you already had a cane.""I did, but hlb's dog, Nadda chewed on it.""I see...be right back."Sasha went to the back of the store. I looked around to see if there are any new purple items. Nope. Once I get the items I asked Sasha for, I'll finish getting all the purple items in Gambino Outfitters. I was standing by myself when someone tapped my shoulders. I turned around. It was Gino Gambino!"Hi...um, is Sasha here?" Gino asked."Yup! She's just getting me some stuff at the back. She'll be back soon.""Oh, okay."About two minutes later, Sasha came back."Hiya Gino!" Sasha flirtatiously said."Hey.""I'll be back in a moment. I just need to give this stuff to MZJ."Sasha put all the stuff on the counter and calculated the total."That'll be 42,500 gold."I took out my purse and gave her the gold."Thank you! Come again!"I took the shopping bags and left the store. I looked at my watch. 9 GST. Let me see...from here to the Faktori would take me about half an hour for me to walk. It would take me about 30 minutes for me to buy all those alarm clocks. 15 minutes from the Faktori to the restaurant. That gives me about an hour and 45 minutes extra. I looked around Gambino Island. I could always go to the Casino. I need about 4000 more tickets for one of the purple item prize there. I went in and told Lex, the guy who's the host, my account and he gave me my tokens I saved. I went to a quiet room to play cards.
-One hour and 45 minutes later-
I went out the room and cashed in my tickets. 2000 tickets. Great! I would only need 2000 until I get the purple prize! I looked at my watch again and started walking to the Faktori. When I arrive, I could smell the smoke and oils from the robots that were working there."Hello ma'am. How may I help you?" Bildeau asked."Could you show me where all the alarm clocks are?""Right over here, ma'am."Bildeau started walking to the clocks section. Even though I've been here numerous times, I could never find the clocks section. We went past by the kicthen and goth aisles. We went to the bedroom aisle and found the clocks. I looked around and found the purple alarm clocks. I took about 10 of them and gave it to Bildeau."That'll be 950g ma'am"I took out my wallet and put all my gold into Bildeau's slot."Thank you ma'am"I took the boxes and put them in the bags I got from Sasha and started walking to the restaurant. I went by Aekea and the Housing Commision. I had to cut through Durem and Barton to get to my neighbourhood. I checked my watch. Hey! I'm 20 minutes early! I shrugged and went inside my sister's restaurant. It was called the 'Cat Café' I looked around and saw many Gaians talking."MZJ!!!" Kaggie said as she glomped me."Hey Kaggie...could you let go? You're choking me..." I started gagging."Oh, sorry" she said as she let go.I breathed for a minute and turned to her. My sister, the 'rich avi' She was wearing her Angelbow, ORLY?, Pixie and her Ice Whip. She had her Coco and Gwee next to her and her Momo around her leg. She looks richer than I do!"Do you have a table for us?""Duh!"She took me to a table next to the window that had a 'Reserved' card on it. I sat down and waited for my friends to arrive.Chapter 3 It was 10 minutes after I came in the Cat Café when quixsie showed up. We started talking. About five minutes later hlb and snoozy came together. It was 12:00 PM GST and LoLaka's still not here. 12:05...12:10...12:15... quixsie, hlb, snoozy and I looked at our watches."5...4...3...2...1..."BAM!"I made it!" LoLaka said as she entered.We all sweatdropped. LoLaka is always late and she always make a big entrance of it. Sort of like Naruto. Gai-sensei and Rock Lee doing the 'Dynamic Entry' XD LoLaka went up to us and sat down."What took you so long?""My Gwee decided to scorch some stuff in HR Welsey. Man, Edmund won't shut up. What's worse is that the fact I have to pay all the stuff Gwee burnt. I had to pay about 15k!!!""That sucks.""Yeah, as well, I'm banned from that shop for a month. That's the last time I'm bringing my Gwee shopping." LoLaka said as she flicked her Elemental Hair."Meh...atleast you still have the Guild."The guild we always go. The Randome Sweehearts Guild. It's the guild we mostly hang out. LoLaka and I joined already but I still have to get snoozy and hlb in. XP I'm a crew member and same with my sister. Actually, Kaggie was the one who introduced it to me in the first place. ^^"What can I get for you guys?" Kaggie asked.Well, speak of the devil."The usual" we replied together."Okay! I'll be right back."Kaggie left and we started talking."Guess what? I saw Gino at Gambino Outfitters!""No way.""Yes way.""What was he doing?""He was looking for Sasha.""Oooo!" everyone said."I wonder how long have they been going out?""6 months?"We shrugged and kept on talking."Oh yeah! I saw orange7 and Spike_Ventikes at the fountain of Barton."orange7 and Spikes_ventikes. Other known as orange and spike. orange is hlb's older sister and spikes is like my brother. I've known him since I was in grade 3."Do not bring up orange."orange and hlb may be sister's but they're not as close as me and Kaggie. When they get near each other, they get really annoyed and cause conflict."Your order's here!"Kaggie placed some flan in front of quixsie, pizza for me, strawberry cheesecake for hlb+Nadda, ice cream for snoozy and one of everything for LoLaka+her Gwee."Thank you!"Kaggie left and we started eating our food."LoLaka, I have no idea how you could put all that food into your stomach." quixsie commented."And what's that suppose to mean?""I mean, how could you possibly all that food in?"LoLaka looked at quixsie and slit her eyes. Evil look. LoLaka has a evil look if she feels like she's going to bite you."Nevermind""That's what I thought."I started laughing silently. It's so much fun when LoLaka does that. XD My friends looked at me and started laughing. When I start laughing silently my friends start laughing too because it looks like as if I'm hyperventilating. XD We stopped laughing and went back to eating."Excuse me..." someone said as they tapped my shoulder.I sighed. Another tapping person? I turned around. All of us dropped our forks/spoons/knives/food and gasped."Oh...my...god!"Chapter 4 "Madolline!!! Snarkeh!!!" we all exclaimed.We rose from our seats and started hugging them. Madolline and Snarkeh are our friends. They're a year older than us so we don't see them as much."Hey! How are ya?" Madolline asked."Good, you?""Okay...I guess." Snarkeh replied oh-so cooly."What'cha been up to?""Oh nothing, trying to catch up on homework. XP""That sucks.""Yup.""So, why are you here?""We decide to browse around the towns to see what's new and I saw LoLaka comming in here so we followed.""Stalkers!" LoLaka said/yelled as we smiled."You know this is my sister's café, right?""No way!" Snarkeh exclaimed as she hit me."Oww...""Anyways, we gotta go. We have to study for our English Exam.""Aww...""Yeah, but we'll hang out after that okay?""Sure!""See ya!""Later!""Bye!"Madolline and Snarkeh left and we resumed back to eating. We finish eating and left some gold as a tip to my sister...even if she does protests. We went back to our house and checked our PMs. We went inside and put all our stuff away and sat down on the couch. We sat there for awhile and did nothing. I looked at the kitchen clock, near the living room and it was only 4:00 PM GST. I sighed again and tried to decide what to do."So...what do you wanna do?""I dunno, what do you wanna do?""I dunno, what do you wanna do?""I dunno, what do you wanna do?""Let's play Jig-Saw."All my friends looked at me and shrugged."Sure, let's go."We went out and I locked the door. We were talking and walking until we went to the Jig-Saw place. We got a room and locked it. LoLaka chose the one with the Gaians at the beach easy mode. quixsie did the weekly puzzle hard mode. both hlb and snoozy did the puzzle with the NPCs normal mode, and I did the same puzzle as LoLaka but insane mode. We were in that room for about three hours talking until we were bored. Besides, our hands started hurting. LoLaka recieved 500g, quixsie got 800g, hlb and snoozy got 1k each and I got 4k. I'm teh master at Jig-Saw! ^_^ We went back home and it was 8:00 PM GST.quixsie went to the kicthen because it was her turn to cook today. The rest of us went on the couch and watched TV. At 8:30 PM we went to the dining table and sat down waiting to be served. quixsie came in the room and gave us a plate of spaghetti. Dog food for Nadda and some moolatte for Gwee. We sat down and ate the spaghetti in peace. It was really good. quixsie went back in the kitchen and came back with a Caramel Cheesecake. Again, we ate in silence and quixsie took all the dishes. It was already 9:00 PM and we went to our rooms. We changed into our pajamas and went to sleep.Little did we know, there were shadows behind the windows...Chapter 5 It was another bright sunny day and another alarm clock broken. I went downstairs and sat down on the kicthen island. It was LoLaka's turn to cook today. I took some Honeynut Cherrios from the counter and put it in my bowl and started eating it. Yes, I know. I eat my Honeynut Cherrios without milk. That's how I like it. LoLaka gave me a slice of toast with butter on it and a glass of apple juice. After I finished I eating I put my dishes in the dishwasher.I went outside and checked my PMs. Spam, spam, chain, ...a PM from Horse lady and Heir_of_Darkness Tsuyu. Horse lady, my walking contradiction friend. She's a lot like me. She's the same age. A month older but two days younger than snoozy. I replied to her PM and read Heir_of_Darkness Tsuyu's (Tsuyu) PM. Tsuyu is my twin on Gaia. She looks exactly like me! She's a dark red version of me though. XD I finished replying the PMs and went back in.I sat on the couch."I'm booored!""Yeah, me too.""There's nothing to do."We sighed together and tried to think of something to do."Do you wanna go fishing?""Sure, it's better there than being bored to death here.""You guys go, punk is coming for a visit."punk9 is LoLaka's younger brother. punk for short. He's a very nice kid...but sometimes like wrestling with LoLaka for the randomest reasons. xd
"Okay. Just don't wreck the place like last time okay?"Last time we left LoLaka and her brother to themselves, they really trashed the place. It was so messy! It took us a week to clean eveything, from the food to the burn marks."We'll be okay!""Fine. Come on, let's go."We all went out and went to the Ole Fishing Hole to get our rods and bait. We decided to do to Bass'ken Lake because we're all beginners. It was 1:00 PM GST when we got there. We started fishing near the lighthouse. It was 6:00 PM. I got 34 blue basses, 10 green basses, 27 brown basses, 549 red guppies, 351 orange guppies, 240 yellow guppies, 38 cans, 37 boots and 26 tires.
snoozy caught 24 blue basses, 35 green basses, 24 brown basses, 315 red guppies, 244 orange guppies, 274 yellow guppies, 34 cans, 36 boots and 14 tires.
hlb caught 54 blue basses, 27 green basses, 51 brown basses, 526 red guppies, 254 orange guppies, 356 yellow guppies, 35 cans, 37 boots and 51 tires.
quixsie caught 57 blue basses, 54 green basses, 34 brown basses, 348 red guppies, 315 orange guppies, 312 yellow guppies, 36 cans, 54 boots and 24 tires.We, the 5 BFFL, have a tradition. We have the: Bass award, Guppy award, Trash award, the Worst and the Best Fisher award. Bass award: 500g. Guppy award: 300g. Trash award: 200g. The Worst and the Best Fisher award: 1k. I usually provide the gold. ^^Bass award: quixsie
Guppy award: Me
Trash award: hlb
Worst Fisher award: snoozy
Best Fisher award: hlb"Snoozy, you suck.""Shut up! The fish weren't biting today!""Sure..."We walked back home. To our surprise, the lights were closed. We looked at each other and continued walking to the house. We opened the door, and wouldn't believe what we saw inside...Chapter 6 Blood. That's all what we saw. Blood. I started breathing heavily. I can smell the cold blood and the air was bloodish as well. hlb went to her knees and puked. snoozy and quixsie started gagging. As for I, I started trembling. I looked outside the house. The houses in our neighbourhood were empty. It was pitch black. I went to my sister's house. There was a note on the door that said: 'Gone to a concert. Be back soon.' I checked out the other houses, all the doors had the same note.Was this planned?I went back to my house. hlb, snoozy and quixsie were still there, but now crying. I patted their backs."Let's go in."We entered the house slowly. We covered out mouths and nose with a hankerchief so the blood won't come to us as much. Blood was stained on the walls and blood sloshed onto our shoes. We checked every room to see if we could find LoLaka. So far, no luck.All the doors were opened except for one. The basement. We went to the kicthen to get some flashlights. We opened the basement doors and slowly walked down the stairs. There wasn't any blood...except on the stairs. We heard heavy breathing. The breathing got deeper and louder. We searched everywhere. There was another door. I touched it and felt something slimey. I looked at my hand. Blood. Fresh warm blood.My heart started beating faster and I continued to open the door. It felt like a eternity. When the door finally opened something fell out. I jumped back. hlb, snoozy and quixsie quickly came over. We slowly steered our flashlight to it. When the light finally reached to it, we gasped and dropped our flashlights.It was LoLaka! Covered in blood and heavily breathing."LoLaka!"We pulled her up. snoozy went upstairs to get a blanket for her. When snoozy came back, LoLaka was breathing normally, but, she wasn't alone. She was clutching her brother punk in her arms. She was unconscience. First thing we did was to call 911. We started crying until the police and ambulance came. They took LoLaka and punk in the ambulance. We stayed for some questioning from the police. After the questioning we went straight to the hospital. After an hour in the hospital, hlb, snoozy and quixsie went to sleep. I was still worried. I clutched my hands near my heart and started crying.Oh god! Why didn't I stay? Wh.."Umm..excuse me?"I looked up. It was a doctor."Yes?" I answered as I wiped my tears away."Are you a close friend of L o L i t a B a k a and punk9?""Yes.""I don't know how to say this, but L o L i t a B a k a has..."Chapter 7 The doctor took a very long pause. I started twitching."What does she have?""I'm afraid that she's lost consciousness. She will never open her eyes again."I looked at him, then at the ground. I started trembling and burst into tears. The others were awake."Hey MZJ, what's wrong?""Lo...LoLa...LOLAKA'S NEVER GONNA OPEN HER EYES AGAIN!!!" I yelled out.I started sobbing again. It only took my friends five seconds to figure it out and sink it all in."Oh...""My...""God!"We started crying together for a good full 10 minutes. We calmed down a little. The same doctor came back."Would you like to see L o L i t a B a k a now?"We nodded and followed the doctor."How's punk9?""He's fine, just a little knock on the head. He'll be back up by tomorrow the least."That calmed our mood for awhile. We kept on walking. All we heard was the clacking of our shoes. The doctor stopped and turned to the right. LoLaka's room. He opened the door and let us in. There we saw, LoLaka in her demonic-angelic sleeping mode. We walked to her and looked at her. She was sleeping so beautifully, yet so pale looking. We started crying again. How could she be unconscience?Snoozy turned around and looked at the doctor."Um...doctor? I would like to know how did L o L i t a B a k a get unconscience?"The doctor looked at snoozy and then looked at his clipboard."Well...I got this report from the police saying that there was a knife with blood on it, on the ground. When I took L o L i t a B a k a to the X-ray room, i found a slit in the back of her head. It almost slit her brain but just barely. She's very lucky if she's still breathing. She lost a severe amount of blood. About 60% of her blood was lost. "Our mouths dropped a little more and we looked at LoLaka again."I'm sorry, but you'll have to leave. We need to examine her a bit more."We nodded our heads and left the room. We went to punk's room and patted his head. He was a nice kid, rowdy, but nice. We left the hospital and slowly walked home. By the time it was a quarter past midnight, we were back home. The policemen were still there. One of them spot us and quickly came over."I'm sorry, but you'll have to sleep at another place."We nodded. We're too tired to do anything else. The policeman gave us keys to a hotel nearby. We started walking but the policeman stopped us again."Before you leave, you must see something."We looked at each other and followed the policeman. He took us to the back of the house. We saw many flashes and a couple of detectives. "Look."The policeman pointed to the wall. We looked at it and gasped. It read:I have taken one life but didn't finish the job. My thirst and hunger will not be finished until I get all of you. I will be lurking in the shadows watching every move. Until I get what I want, I will not stop the blood shed. This is only a warning. If you do not give me what I want, everything you love and everyone you love will perish to their deaths.It was a horrific note, yes, but that didn't freak us out. This note, was written in LoLaka's own blood.
Chapter 8
It was morning and none of us got a wink of sleep. We were either:
a) worried about LoLaka
b) couldn't get that message out of our heads
c) the blood of LoLaka
or
d) all of the above
If you picked all of the above, you're indeed correct.
I got up and went into the kicthen. I was so tired that I ate the spoon instead of the cereal. gonk I looked at my friends to see if they were okay, as if that would happen. They were emotionless, as if someone sucked the soul out of them. It hurts just to look at them like that. I heard a small whimper on the ground. I looked down, it was Nadda. Nadda whimpered and clinged onto hlb. She looked at Nadda for a moment and pets her. I looked around some more because that was a bad habit of mine.
-knock knock-
I stood up really quickly and answered the door.
Is it the police, the killer or the doctor?
I opened the door and I saw spike, orange, Madolline and Snarkeh!"MZJ!!!"Immediately, I was glomped at. I heard some sniffling (which was probably from Madolline, Snarkeh and orange) and I directed them into the hotel room that the police let us stayed in. They went into the living room (I know that hotel rooms doesn't have a living room but go with the flow, okay?) while I was getting some tea in the kitchen. "MZJ, who was at the door?"Whoops. I forgot that my BFFL were still in the kitchen.
"Go see for yourself."snoozy, hlb and quixsie went into the living room. I took out a tea kettle and some tea the hotel clerk provided for us. Just before I could even get the mugs, I heard loud screaming and yelling. I giggled.
orange and hlb must be at it again.
I took out eight mugs and put the tea in. Finally, I took the tea kettle and put the boiling water in the tea mugs, and put the tea mugs onto a tray. I only just got a step into the living room and felt mixed vibes. Angry, upset and confusion. I felt a shiver throughout my back and continued serving everyone tea. They all said thank you and we drank the tea in silence."Hey MZJ, where are the treats. As the hostess, you have to serve us treats." spike said in a ha-ha-I-don't-have-to-do-it voice.
I stuck my tongue at him and he laughed.
spike has always been there for me, just like an older brother. He can make me laugh with his awesome voice, and I don't mean singing voice, I meant the mimicking voice. He can mimick almost anybody's voice and puts humour into them. That's what I like about him. (If you get any funny ideas, don't. I only find him as a brother and a good friend and nothing more.)
I got up and went into the kitchen to find some treats. I looked through the counters but couldn't find any. I sighed and was about to give up and remembered that the police gave us some cake. I opened the fridge and found a marble cake with buttercream frosting that was untouched. I took it out and grabbed a couple of plates and forks. When I went back into the living room, everyone was a bit more cheerful. quixsie, being her usual self, was talking....a lot and everyone was listening attentively. Except for spike though, he was just nodding and saying "uh-huh" as if he wasn't listening but he actually is. Everyone smacked him on his head after they got tired of his annoying-ness. I giggled and served the cake to everyone. They took their cake and notioned for quixsie to start with her conversation again."As I was saying, there was pools of blood everywhere!!! And it smelled nausiating and bleh..." quixsie shuddered and made a throwing up gesture."Yeah! It was really creepy! Blood was stained everywhere!" "Hmm...""What's wrong Snarkeh?""It doesn't seem logical to me.""What do you mean?" hlb asked raising her eyebrows."How is it possible that there was blood everywhere?""Dunno...just is.""You see...the average amount of blood in a female human body is approximately 3.3 litres of blood.""The house had WAY more blood than that.""Exactly. Then how is it possible for the whole interior of the house be tainted with blood. Only about one possibly two rooms can be painted with the blood.""So you mean...""Yes, all that blood isn't LoLaka or punk's."We all gasped. How can we be so dense? There was no way our house could be bathed in LoLaka or punk's blood and they'll STILL be living.
"So, what are we going to do?""I think we sh-"There was another knock at the door. "I'll get it." hlb said as she left for the door.
We waited patiently for hlb to come back so that Snarkeh could continue with her statement. hlb came back with two police men."Can we help you?" quixsie said impatiently."Yes, we do believe we have some shocking news for you.""And that is...?" snoozy said as she rotated her wrist to indicate the police men to go faster. "We believe that...."Chapter 9 "Yes...?" This was reaaaallly getting annoying."We confirmed that the blood from within your house is not L o L i t a B a k a's nor punk9's""No sh*t sherlock." quixsie muttered."If, it's not LoLaka's, then who's blood is it?" "We took a DNA sample of the blood and it was confirmed that it was blood from several canines."When the officer just finished his sentence, hlb fainted. "AH! hlb! hlb! Gaia to hlb! WAKE UP!!!" her sister called yelled.hlb's eyes snapped open."Dogs?! DOGS?! Why would someone do such a thing?""Calm down, the blood wasn't taken from living dogs. It's highly possible that it was blood from dogs that passed away."hlb sighed and sat back down for the officers to continue.
"What else do you wish to inform us about?""Yes...it seems we have interviewed all your neighbours. All of them said that they had tickets to go to a concert."No duh! There were notes on the doors!"Please continue with your theories.""We asked one of your neighbours, Kaggie, for evidence that she went to the concert...""And she came back with a letter that states she's going to a concert with back-stage passes." the other officer replied."Do you still have the letter?""Right here sir."The officer gave the letter to spike. He coughed a little and started to read the letter."Dear ma'am or sir, congratulations! Your neighbourhood scored tickets AND back-stage passes with the new and upcoming band 'K-Lixt!'..."spike stopped and laughed."Pfft!!! K-Lixt! What a lame name!""SPIKE!"We all whacked him on the head."OW! Fine, fine." he looked back at the letter to regain his spot."One of your neighbours won our contest to score back-stage passes for the winner and their neighbourhood they reside in...""That's strange. Who would host a contest like that?""Dunno. Continue please.""Please be at the concert at the Gaia Arena by 5:00 PM GST. Concert ends at 7:00 PM GST and then you have only half an hour to meet the singers and musicians. We hope that you have fun and enjoy the concert.""That all?""Yeah.""Was there a signature or something?"spike looked through the letter again."No...was there a return address from the letter?" he asked the officers."Actually, no. Kaggie brought the envelope as well, but there wasn't a return address.""Do you have the envelope with you?""Right here." the policeman said as he handed the letter to Snarkeh.That's another thing about Snarkeh. She's logical about almost EVERYTHING!"Hmm..."She analyzed the envelope's outside and looked at the place where you're suppose to lick the envelope."It wasn't licked, that's for sure. It's one of those envelopes that you peel off the tape...sneaky..."She opened the enveloped carefully."AHA!""What is it?" we rose to our feet and crowded around her."Inside, this envelope has the 'G' symbol.""The 'G' symbol...but that symbol belongs to....""Yes, it belongs to the most powerful man on Gaia, Gambino!"Chapter 10 "NO WAY!!!""Look in it for yourself."snoozy snatched it from her and looked inside."She's right, no doubt about it! This is definately Gambino's mark!""Let us see that for a moment."snoozy handed the envelope back to the officers."Amazing, we didn't realize that...we have to go now. This needs thorough investigation."With that, the policemen left."Wow Snarkeh! You're amazing! Has being a detective ever crossed you mind?""No, but being logical is the key to everything."There was a long silence after that. No one really has to say and continued eating their cake."Hey...what happened to LoLaka's gwee and punk's UFO?" I asked out of the blue."Now that you mentioned it, I haven't seen them. I believe that they might be in the police station until LoLaka or punk claims them back or something.""I guess we should take a visit to the hospital, huh?""Yup."We put down our plates and I collected them and put them into the sink. I grabbed a bowl and put some dog food down."Be good okay Nadda?" she barked and started eating the food.
I drowned the plates and left off into my little hotel room. I wore my 'Miss Lavender' Dress and put on my Velvetine Neck Ribbon. Since it was a little chilly, I wore my Violet Winter Wrap and grabbed my Sakura Cloak that I love. I put on my White Stockings and slipped my Fancy Slippers on and headed out the door where everyone was waiting for me."That took you 3 minutes, 5 seconds and 78 milliseconds to get dress and come out." spike said as we stopped his stopwatch.
"Shut up. You take forever changing in gym class.""Yeah, and all you really have to do is change your shirts. Girls however, need to change their ensemble. We have to look presentable ya know.""Whatever." he said in a snobby-rich-girl voice and waved down his wrist.
We rolled our eyes and exit out the hotel. It was a silent walk the whole way through but orange thought it would be fun to push spike into the fountain in Barton. And she did."Pfft!!! -More drowning and splashing sounds-""spike, you do realize that you can stand on that thing, don't you?""Huh?" spike stood up and turned 20 shades red."AHAHAHAHA!!!!"Everyone who was near Barton started laughing too, making spike more red than he was already."That was very VERY mean!""Aww...poor, poor spikey-wikey." hlb said in a baby tone.
We all started laughing again and spike marched off to Barton Boutique and came back wearing a Gun Metal Black Long Coat, making him looking like a soaked FBI agent. We laughed even harder and I almost tripped."Don't trip yourself in those high heels." he said as he stuck a tongue at me.
I stuck my tongue back at him and we continued walking with spike makine 'squish'-ing sounds. xd
-At the Hospital-
We went to the front desk and asked if we could visit punk and LoLaka. The receptionist said that LoLaka was still being testing but we could visit punk. She led us to punk's room and opened the door."Hey punk!""Hey guys.""How are ya buddy?""Okay I guess, just a little drowsy.""Well, that's how you feel if you're playing Mortal Kombat all night." Snarkeh said as she directed her head to the TV."Hey it's a fun game...YES! BLOODY FATALITY!"Even though we can't do it, you can pretty much see the sweatdrop on our heads.
-knock knock-"Come in!"The door opened to reveal the doctor."punk9, your behaviour and health is back to normal, you may go home now.""Actually, he's gonna stay in a hotel.""Okay. Now, come and sign the release forms."We all went down and signed out punk. "So, where are we going?""We're going to police station, we need to collect your UFO back and LoLaka's gwee.""Okay!"-At the police station-
It was a regular walk to there. We entered the doors and saw police(wo)men hard at work. There was papers going back and forth and lots of telephone calls coming in, typical. We walked up to the desk and asked where we can claim punk's UFO and LoLaka's gwee."Just wait one moment." she said and went to the back.
We turned around to look at the chaos. There was something moving in the bushes but I ignored it. Probably a cat or something."Here." She came back with a silver key, a gold key and a cage. She took the gold key and opened the cage to reveal LoLaka's gwee. He was really happy to come out and started flying around the police station. The policewoman gave the silver key that was imprinted, "UFO" and gave it to punk. He took it happily and again, we had to sign out forms. We left the police station with LoLaka's gwee and went outside to get punk's UFO."FINALLY! It's been like forever since I was on this!" he said happily and turned on the engine.
While punk was hovering on his UFO, we were walking."AHHH!!!!!!!! -BAM BAM BAM- -yelling- -silence-"
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:43 pm
Chapter 11 We looked at each other, worried. We stood still for a moment until punk spoke."What was that?" he asked."I don't know, but let's check out." spike suggested.We agreed together and walked back to the police station. spike hesitated but opened the door. We braced ourselves for the worst but nothing. There was scattered paper on the floor and officers looking puzzled. spike went up to the head of police."What happened, sir?""Oh, one of our officers saw a mouse and she has Musophobia." the head of police answered."What's Musophobia?" snoozy asked."A fear of mice. She was so scared that she started shooting at it. Don't worry, no one was hurt, just a dead mouse."We all gave a sigh of relief. At least it wasn't something really bad.
We left the police station and headed back to the hotel. spike said that if punk stayed with girls too long, he would lose his manly-ness. Of course, with that said came with punches. orange, Madolline and Snarkeh left. So it was just me, snoozy, hlb and quixsie. We watched TV because there was nothing else to do."Yesterday night, there was a stabbing..." -click-"The night before, during the times 5:00-7:00 PM GST..." -click-"Blood was everywhere...." -click-quixsie turned off the TV."Geez! What's with these people?! Don't they have anything else to talk about?!""Calm down quixsie. Maybe we should go somewhere so that we could relax a little.""Relax? Relax?! How could we relax when one of our best friends is unconscious?!""Well, if she could talk to us, she wouldn't want us to worry, right?"quixsie sulked a little."You're right. But where could we go?""Wanna go to La Victoire? Maybe we could buy something for her." snoozy suggested.We all agreed and headed out to La Victoire.-At La Victoire-
"Let's find something pink for her." I suggested.
We started browsing around the shop for something nice and pink for Lolaka...even though she might never see it."May I help you?" asked Flynn."We're looking for something nice and pink.""We have a lot of selections for you then! We have the Biancamella, an evolving item that can transform from a fairy to a dress, a corset to cotton candy. The Birthday Cupcake, a special treat for someone's birthday. The Enchanted Book can make a Cinderella out of anyone. The Grace of Aphrodite gives you a pleasant feeling and smell. The Heartstring is small but adorable. The Long-Stem Pink Rose is very popular amongst girls of all ages. The Magical Girl's Pink Uniform is perfect for anyone who wants to feel like a hero. My Friend Cupid leaves you heart-struck. The Piggy Plush is just plain adorable. The Pink Heart Chocolate Cake is very delicious. The Pink Sweetheart Teddy can go anywhere with you. Last but not least, the Year of the Pig for people who were born in 1995, 2007 and so on. That's all that is pink and nice. If there's anything else I can help you with, just let me know."Flynn went back to the cash register and we were debating which item we should buy for Lolaka. We finally decided to buy everything Flynn suggested and we each bought something for ourselves too. hlb bought an Angel Imp Plushie, quixsie bought a Chicky Hoodie and snoozy bought a DandiiDooDad Spore. I was still looking around to find something for me and I was drawn in by Alruna's Rose."Buy it" Someone whispered.
I turned around and found no one around me. I looked back at the rose and hesitantly looked at it. It was a black rose with a purple aura. It was purple, so I decided to buy it and add it to my purple collection."I must warn you about Alruna's Rose. Dr. Singh told me to inform anyone who buys this. It may be dangerous for your body."I blinked."Well, here you go. Have a nice day and come back soon!" she said.
We all went back to the hotel and put all the gifts out on the table. It was about 11:00 PM GST and we decided to go to sleep.
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:47 pm
Reserved for Chapter 21-30?
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:28 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:07 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:43 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:00 pm
I want chapter 10! > biggrin
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 9:42 am
sweatdrop Woops. Kinda forgot that I was still writing this story.
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 5:39 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 5:37 am
*poke poke poke pokeeeeeeeee*
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:00 pm
JOSIE ITS BEEN MONTHS NOW! COME ON!
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 6:17 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 5:16 pm
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