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 Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 3:11 pm
Okay. I'm working on a story. Below is the prologue. I just want to know what you think. I've given the rest to members of my family, and a couple friends, and they all say it's great, but for some reason, I still doubt myself. I don't know. Anyway.
Over 30% of the population is at least 1/4 demon, angel, troll, were-wolf, and pretty much any other mythical being you can think of. They are known as “Dark” beings because after dusk is the only time they can venture out in relative safety. They are outcasts. They are hated, feared, and hunted. They are my people. For my name is Lily and I am one of them.
Does it sound interesting?
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 8:53 am
It's not my style,
but from a literary point of view,
it sounds good.
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:44 am
He destroyed my life...
It's as good idea for a base..
It might be an idea to put a bit more of a description of each of the beings..
And maybe a little description of how they came about..
Now I will destroy him.
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:21 pm
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