This story was inspired in my head and it's a new different twist to it. This is the first chapter please comment and give me your opinions biggrin

The Secret
Chapter 1 The Beginning towards the end

Looking towards the California, as the pilot lands the jet. Looking out in the window as the sun going down. Looking out the window as the sun goes down. Her companion few seats away, looking out and in thought . As the plane landed and the pilot said
“ We’ve landed Ms. Amelia and Mr. Cullen, you may step out now.” the pilot told them over the speaker.
“thanks” she said to the pilot.
Amelia, a vampire, long black hair, blue eyes that stands out to other people. She’s about medium height and very beautiful, attractive body and face. She already has someone that belongs to her, forever.
Her companion, Edward was a whole another story. A very sad, but at the end everything will be alright .
Amelia and Edward got off the plane, outside the airport. Edward goes towards the car, the passenger side, as Amelia went towards the driver side and got in and started to drive,
“ You ready, Edward, it’s your first time doing this, but you’ll be great at it.” she told him.
“ Yeah, I’ll so my best.” he said as he looked out the window.
“ I know you miss her, I can’t even mentioned her name because it hurts you to hear it, right”
Amelia said driving at top speed as they got closer to the house.
“Yeah it does, ok, it hurts, I just hope she can be happy without me.” Edward said.
“She won’t and your family either and don’t you-” she got interrupted by Edward.
“ I know, I don’t tell them where I was, but for me it’s the best, it’s best for them not to know or they’ll come and ask why I left. I don’t want to replay that in my head.” he said and shook his head,
“ I know, it hurts you and I can feel it too, remember.” as she tapped her head towards the gate of the house,
“ I hope that little breather we took, gave you sometime to think and writing, too.” she said, push the buttons for the code and the gates opened.
“Don’t worry, everything will fix itself up.” she said with mischief.
“What do you mean by that.” he asked.
“ You’ll find out soon enough.”
As they approach the beautiful mansion, with beautiful statues adorn the outside and water fountains as well. She parks the car inside the garage and both of them come out of the car.
“Seriously,” he said “ What do you mean by that.”
“Oh, Edward you ask many questions.” she replied and went inside.
The mansion was beautiful, plenty of rooms to sleep in, and indoor pool and outside and a garden with rose bushes decorating it. There were Amelia’s private room, where she sit there and relaxed. A recording studio was built in the back, which was added when she moved there and updated with the best equipment.
“Yeah, we will record, later, ok, I need to rest.” she said.
“Yeah, for the child, right?.” Edward said out loud.
“ Yeah, now don’t say anything or else.” she warned him.
“Speaking of which, where’s Mark?” he said.
“Oh, he’s doing an errand for me.” she said as she went upstairs.
While, Edward went to play the piano for a new song.

Because I think I should continue... I've written other chapter