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 Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 2:18 pm
My new story PPL!!!!
RATED: PG-13 (language,and kissing thats it!!!!!)
AUTHOR: Raven (BRAVA!!!!!!,XD)
NOTES: I DO NOT own MCR!!!(although I wish!!)
More notes: If you don't like stories filled with love,tragedy,friendship,vampires,revenge,and death this isn't the story for you!
Enjoy! mrgreen
CHAPTER 1
LIFE............
What exactly is it??
I've heard the word throughout these crime ridden streets before..
but never actually understood what it means.
I have pondered this several times, over and over again.
"WHAT DOES IT MEAN!?!" I find myself screaming out loud
I look at the people just casually passing by on the sidewalk...... not a care in the world. Other times they panic and worry about horrible things.
Oh the things I have seen.
World War 2............... 911........... and so much more past that.....
As the world goes on I sit and watch it revolve around me.
Taunting me. Changing.
I look on the street to see a small child getting pulled hard on the arm by a strange looking man. Probably a kidnapper.
"GET IN THE DAMN CAR!!!!!" the man yells.
"MOMMY!!! HELP ME! ANYONE!!!!!!!" the girl screams.
so helpless......so young
I feel no pity though.My eyes have a flicker of hatred in them
as I have those same memories that torture me every night until I finally find peace.
Flash back
"MAX GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF MY CHILD!!!!!!!"
"You know he has my blood! He has that blood lust in his eyes. You can't hide it forever!!"
" HE IS NOT ONE OF YOUR KIND! HE WILL NEVER BE!! MY LITTLE BOY IS PURE!!!!!! LEAVE US ALONE!!!!!!!" the woman again screamed
The man still holding the fragile baby lifted it up by its foot dangling upside down and pointing to the mark of a cross on his right arm
"DO YOU BELIEVE ME NOW!!!!!!!! HE HAS OUR KINDS MARK!!!!!!!! HE IS ONE OF US U VILE WOMAN!!!!!"
He threw the baby to the woman. When she caught the baby she screamed at the cross birthmark on his arm. She screamed and instantly dropped the baby on the cold hard ground.
The woman sobbing continuously at the thing that was her baby.
"It can't be! You Lie!"
She looked at the crying baby on the ground. Lifted his mouth open and right from the roof of his mouth, a single fang.
"No!" she screamed again.
The man tried to calm her down,but she wouldn't listen. He reached for her neck and sunk his teeth into it. The life draining out of her eyes.
as the man left he put a single cross on the baby's neck and queitly stalked off.... leaving no trace of his presence.
end flash back
I cringe.. and try to erase the thoughts.
Trying to ignore what I am.
But I can't!
I am doomed to walk the earth alone for eternity.
As who I truly am.
Me.
Frank Iero,
the only pure vampire left.
don't be shy!!!!!! tell me how you like!!!!!!!!!PLZ!!!!
NOT ANOTHER CHAPTER UNTIL YOU GET TO THE NEXT PAGE!!!
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:47 pm
DUDE! I always knew Frankie was a vampire! Teehee, this is good!
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:20 am
xd
ME 2!!!!!!!!!
PLZ GET DEYN TO COMMENT!!!!!
i WON'T DO ANOTHER CHAPTER TILL THE NEXT PAGE!!!!
IT GETS BETTERER!!!!!! eek
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:53 pm
I can't. She's not commenting anywhere. Tear tear.
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 4:17 am
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
COME BACK TO US DEVYN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I KNOW U CAN READ ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 8:39 am
She's probably just busy.
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 11:06 am
EEEP! MY FRANKIE IS A VAMPIRE?! YESH... I'M SO READING THIS STORY.
DUDE, MY MOMS' FRIEND WENT CHRISTMAS SHOPPING FOR ME, AND SHE WANTED TO BUY ME A HOODIE WITH FRANK IERO'S FACE OUTLINE ON IT, BUT THE DAY SHE LOKED AT IT AND DECIDED TO WAIT, IT SOLD OUT. I WAS SO SAD WHEN SHE TOLD ME YESTERDAY. I WAS LIKE, "NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!"
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:24 pm
Sorry to hear that!!!!
LOLZ
I'd throw a fit!!! blaugh
story will come whene the next page comes!!!!!
mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 4:53 pm
Ah! This is so good! please continue!
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 4:53 pm
Hmm.. This is a very interesting story. I would be very pleased if you continued. I'm just being a little nosey, but do you use a spell checker? If you have it, I'd preferr Microsoft Word. Or if you don't have a spell checker, you could get someone to edit it. smile Just here to help.
I like the plot so far. Continue, please. smile
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:40 pm
xd
Thank you for the advice!
I do admit my spelling sux! xd
Although I do not have spell check and their is no one that can really edit my work...
I mainly keep my stories a secert
xd
get to the next page ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:52 pm
I'll edit your stories. I would be more than happied to. Just let me know if you want me to. And I'm trying! I'm trying!
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 10:05 pm
C'mon! Let's get to the next page!
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 4:19 pm
I think this is the last comment before the next page!
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 4:21 pm
Ok no..........
this is the last comment
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