I think I agree with the person above about the hat, just draw it a little lower, and it should be okay.
Uhmm, I'm not an expert on complex poses, so don't take everything I say seriously if you don't want to.
In my opinion, you have a good idea of basic anatomy, and some proportion! I didn't see anything wrong with the girl other than the eyes on her face not being perfectly aligned, but I couldn't really tell until I drew in the guidelines XDD
You can ignore the staff I drew in, but it was going to be a suggestion to make the guy seem more protective of the girl. I don't think it worked >___>
Uhmm, more about awkwardness. I think it's strange that they are so far away? Like, even for him holding her, they've got a foot between them.
So I tried to move her a little closer. I don't think it helped either. But I tried to draw in the hat, and kind of failed.
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I know there is probably like, no way you'll go back and change whatever I've critiqued you on, but it's always nice to know for the next picture >___> (Well, you can just ignore what you don't like I said. ) I really hope I don't sound too nitpicky or rude >___<;
But other than that, I love the dynamic wind in this picture too! It's pretty exciting, like he's rescuing her from some evil monster/mob. Whatever it is, it definitely tells a story, and it's so cute ^^ Also, good job on the costume designs of the character too! The details aren't too gaudy that they are distracting, and they offer a good balance to the picture!
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