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Lastevent

PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:57 pm


OK here is the poem section and the judge committee is made up of 4 people including Halonuke.. Me (lastevent).... Rain.... and TBA,.. (yeah we are still looking for judges) the judging works like this we vote for 1st 2nd 3rd then those tree people will compete again for the finals which the grand prize will be 3k..... anyways the judging will be executed random time so we find no cheating! thank you for participating...
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* one poem per person
* no spamming or page stretching
* no cybering
* no flaming (teasing)
* poems MUST BE ORIGINAL!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 10:58 pm


a life lesson
How you gonna know if you don’t try?
You gonna live life to the max or just wait til you die?
Regrets always happen when you don’t take that chance
So take the risk and grab every opportunity in both hands
Don’t be scared of failure because you learn by every mistake
And just one of these days it could be your lucky break
Don’t let it pass you by and leave your future to fate
Cos someday when you look back it could be too late
Follow your dreams don’t expect them to look for you
Precious life is so short, don’t ever just make do
Take in every waking moment of your life and peruse
It’s all about the decisions you make and paths you choose
So you take a wrong turning and you are on the wrong road
All the problems are stacking up and you’re carrying a heavy load
Don’t despair because in life the streets ain’t all one way
Get rid of your baggage and you can start a brand new journey


Don’t keep anything to yourself tell everyone how you feel
Those feelings can weigh heavy and become hard to conceal
If you feel like laughing, laugh as hard and loud as you want
Be the person who you are and want to be, don’t ever put on a front
Think and be positive about who you are and where you’re from
Let every experience good or bad make you more strong
If people f**k you about don’t be hating cos hate takes up strength
Just keep a mental note and always keep them at arms length
Don’t let hurt from past relationships stop you from forming new
Everyone is different don’t let it stop people from getting to know you
Give your heart don’t hold it back for fear of it being broken
There is no better feeling than when the words ‘I love you’ are spoken
Make love as much as you can and in as many places that you dare
Everyday make just one person smile to show them you care
Enjoy life to the full because it is over far too fast
Make sure your own life journey could never be surpassed
Jheremy aka Lastevent

Lastevent


Mizu no Muchi

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:30 pm


My Girlfriend and I
Me and you,
Together we stand,

Completely in love,
Hand in hand.

Forever with me,
Forever in my heart.

Beside me always,
Right from the start.

Never regret,
And always forgive.

Be with me till the end,
For as long as we live.

Through thick and thin,
Good or bad.

Remembering the love,
And times we've had.

As I reach deep down,
And grasp some hope.

It won't always be easy,
To learn to be cope.

Be there for me,
As I will for you.

Say it to me,
And I'll say it back, too.

As time passes,
We may slowly drift away.

But always come back,
To redeem our love another day.

With me, in me,
From the bottom of my heart.

Together for always,
And never to part.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:36 pm


Pieces of Soul

Autumn leaves fall like grains of sand
in an hour glass
counting the second, minutes, days
Until winter comes to pass
Opening its white wings of death
Where the colors die
and only the sophisticated white and black are left
Is that you? Are you winter? Why?

I offered you pieces of soul
For red roses and petals.
Repair yourself, so your whole
for red roses and petals

I'm waiting to give you your rose back
Because my vision is begining to crack
Call me gaurdian, call me friend
I'll be waiting till the end.

Are you winter, the one season I fear
I lie in on my closet floor stained with tears
I don't get it, why can't I help you
Why don't you want to hear my truth
Your to good for color? Just white and black
like a silent movie, when can I give your rose back
Call me a gaurdian, call me your friend
Pieces of soul for red roses and petals
I'm waiting till the end.

Chocolate Pollution


UnwellPsychosis

PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:37 am


Confusing paths that lead.
Another souls becoming lost...
Another true friend is thrown away...
At one point I loved to be by you.
Now all I want is to be far from you.
Everything will soon be torn and strained.
Yet I keep breathing.
Im always dreaming your there,
sleeping next to whats left of me.
You were everything I asked
Then you lied and threw it all away.
I wish I could stop being torn.
I wish no one would strain whats left.
And yet now all I wish for is
Everything but you.
To continue breathing is my hell.
To continue watching is my hell.
Being torn and strained will be forever.
Eternity in this love that bares.
All the life youve found in your new friend.
My eternity of pain bares this love.
Always wandering this confusing path.
Ill always be across the roads from you.
Darkness is all I wait for...
Breathing for light is all I want.
This shadow will eventually cover me.
My last dieing breath.
All Ill say is that I truely loved.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 1:08 pm


Move on (poem)

Sun shining down,
yet I can't see it,
because shadows stay above my head.

My heart aches,
trying not to drown,
in murky waters,
full of dreadful memories.
My mind can't prevail.

Like a ship,
tossed around on the waves.
Slowly I sink,
as darkness sets in.

Though darkness brings peace,
so I can fall asleep.
Instead of lying in my bed,
wide awake with bloody memories,
running through my mind,
replaying images,
I cannot fight.

You never know what you have,
until it is gone.
Brothers and parents,
are worth more than life itself.

Don't fight death,
let it swallow you whole,
fighting death,
is also called suffering.

Suffering.
something i must go through.
I couldn't stop them.
I let them die.
I am ashamed.

Yet I will attempt,
To let go of the past.
because I think of death,
more than most should.

That is why,
You must move on,
after a death,
or you might willingly,
meet death again.

sanjigirl


Fweeev2

PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 6:13 pm


~Darkness within~

As darkness falls, so do I,
into despair, my tears I cry,
for life is void and nill to me,
dead am I? Or so it seems,
at least to me it feels that way,
to never see the light of day,
in the dark I try to hide,
the emptyness I feel inside,
a shadow of my former self,
within my walls, do I need help?
Will anyone come to my aid,
or will I die with all my pain?
Now as I walk the night alone,
to wander and to roam,
with only the moon to light my way,
my path is gone, but I can't stay.
I know not where I'm bound to be,
but for now I take my leave,
never knowing what lies ahead,
will I survive or will I be dead?
As I roam the dark of night,
wishing that I could take flight,
to leave this place of despair,
where would I go? I do not care,
as long as I am far away,
so I may try another day,
to find the path I need to roam,
that will lead me to my 'true' home. ~fin~
PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:41 pm


A THING OF THE PAST

i knew your love would never last
and now im just a thing of the past
it usted to be just you and me
but now she's more important i see
i usted to be your one and only
now im just sad and lonely
all you do is make me cry
but i still love you so i try i try
when were together alone at last
im still treated like a thing from your past
id die without you and if you cant tell
then ill have to say good bye...fairwell
im dead and u still havent cried
so i tell myself i tryed i tryed
you said our love was just a game
but when your hurt you call my name
tortureing you is just so fun
and i felt alive as you pulled out that gun
your screams of pain are just so sweet
if i was alive theyed help me on my feet
now you call out for me screaming in pain
but im now gonna come rember...im just a game
we knew that we would never last
and now im over you...your just a thing from my past

Hella Spooky

Generous Lunatic


halonuke

PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 10:07 pm


the contest has now been opened, go there now to see who the winner is.
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