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 Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:46 pm
All are by me! Excuse my crappy like spelling.
Gaurdian Angel, set on Fire
Lite up by my desire
Cast you crown upon the ground
Stoop down, look around
Threw the evil is the Light, never lost
Just hold to Tight.
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Love is a promise ones bound to keep
Love is a secret, burried deep
Love is an angel hovering near bye
Love is what is, what will be and why.
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It's awful when you're waiting for something and it just never arrives
Now it is ten times worse, thats what it's like to wait for death
You hear every tick of the clock
Every foot on the floor
Every one of your breathes, trying for more
Then in an instant everything is well.
All the pain is passed, and there you dont dwell
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it is mid-summer
I walk across the rocky terrain
Trying to reach the other side
Where I climb into green grass
Thick trees that cover the land
Lead me to the mountains
I walk slowly
I hear the beep of a car
A jeep roars by- leaves
me
In a cloud of dust
as others in my life have left
Does the ground have no end?
Will the grass come no closer?
I reach
The ledge
I climb and the mountians are so near
I am up
Yet the mountains still seem so far
I have come so far
Do my eyes fail me?
Am I to reach out-
Will I touch nothing?
I regret my action
I think of turning back
it is to much
the green grass
Tall mountains that climb
Into the blue sky
I have no choice
The mountians call
my name
As I stand- I stare
I am so relieved
That I sigh
I have caught up
With my life
I have finally caught up
With my life
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Snow swivvels to the left
Then to the Right
Never leaving my sight
I watch as the snow piles on my cold, dead body
Maybe not dead, not yet,
but I've been ready to die for a long time.
It's suprisingly warm under the snow...
Almost enough to make me want to live on
Almost
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The endless sky is whirling on the wings of a broken wind
Dust and rock as far as the eye can see
The baby blue sky flies to meet brother purple
The hole I put there people explore
Please dont sig me up
Dont touch my sky
Dont say your sorry when you did
I am the hole digger
i am the wing mender
I am the wind rider
I am the sky painter
I am all, yet you know of none
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I pull my coat closer to ease the cold
The wind howls at me
Please leave me alone!
A wolf cries to the full blue moon
Others take up the chorus
I close my eyes and try to sleep
but nauters out to get me
I've done nothing but try to escape a cruel world
Whising for sleep is useless
For it wont come
Nor with heat at that
So I rise to my aching feet
And march on to the cover of the tree's
I find the song singers
And hold my ground
Squesing my eyes tight, I wait
For a lung
It never comes
I feel a cold tongue on my hand
Acceptance at last
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The bitter taste of cold
The wind at my face
The night trips me
The dirt eats me
The branches shred my clothes
The sun rises to reviel my shatterd, tatterd appearnce
I dont go to the village that I come to first
Willingly or not they have given enough
So I go to the next
Only far enough to get what I need
Then back
To the tree's
Where I'm safe from questions
Questions need answers
And it's to soon to sit and remember...
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The mask I wear, I hold it tight
I change it so people like the thinkgs they see
And maybe, someday
You'll see me
And maybe you'll like me for the things you didnt see
The person who was hidden
I might even see the light of day
Maybe... you have a mask held tight?
Never very far from sight
But until that time
Wont you please let me be?
And let me keep it
The mask you see
I hold it close
I hold it tight
I wear it both day and night
As I get to know you
1 by 1 I peel them off
Alowly, but gradually
They come off
I see the light
Then you're gone
So I put them back on
My armor
Where no one see's my tears
Wood, metal, brass
Without them?
I might not last
For pain and heart break I cant stand
When I get close to having them off
You leave
And they go back
They itch and smell
and hurt like WELL!
Whats this I see?
You will tkae off my mask for
Me?
Oh what a friend you have to be!
Please take them off!
I want them not!
wait
Just one left
May I take it off?
Now please like me for me
The mask I wear
No longer there, just me
I'm clean and bare
Oh the pleasure
Of standing in the light and air!
No longer you see the mask I wear
It's me
I am what you see
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More still coming... feel free to critique!
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:05 pm
Continued...
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A blank piece of paper
You influence the lines
But never really have a choice
Not after they're down
You live with them
And use them
Trying to make them helpful...
Kind of like something else.
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Green grass below me
Blue sky above
People around me
Chatting, each voice competing
Competing with one another
I listen to the babble
Hopeing
Hopeing I never sound like that
Soudn pointless
Hopeing to be more
To be more important
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I run to the horizen, and far after it
Always chasing, something, never catching it
Always running, staying only a step ahead
Never knowing
Knowing what I'm chasing, or being chased by
What a life
Never enjoying the sceanery
It always passing before me but I am to preoccupied to notice
Always running never resting
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Run, Run, I run as a stag through the country side, and fields
Hopeing to out run time, hopeing to disappear
I come to the herd
When they see me they do not flee
Curiosity get the better of them and they come to interrogate me
The stranger who interrupted there feeding
There nuzzling is welcome as they are soft and gentel
I'll stay with them as long as they're safe
I will cause no more troubel
I've lost track of how much time I've spent with the herd
I feel the pain of my losses
it comes back as I'm accepted and loved
it reminds me of when...
Of a time I have tried so hard to forget
Of a time of family and friends, of love
But they're gone
because I couldnt protect them
because I was scared
because I left when I got scared
for my sake, for my own worthless life
I left them to be murderd, to be killed to be sacraficed
All for what I had done
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My diary
It's privet
Yet I can never seem to find it
Oh yes
there it is
In my Brothers Hand
That must be why
i dont write it!
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more still coming...
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:31 pm
The gallent knight went forth, not back
he surved his queen should foes attack
Until he drew his last short breath
An arrow in the back
Had ended all that
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Tiny, invisabel, just a speck
Never found, what a reck
Stole my heart, and set it down
The stomped it into the fricken ground
Tiny, invisabel, just a speck
Freazin' cold, lost, alone
years are gone
But I'm still here
Shard of glass will mix with tears
Tiny, Invisabel, Just a Speck
Pieces of the heart you recked
Pick on up, and toss it down
Go to hell
Get outta town
You aint comin' back for another round
You're Tiny, Invisabel, Just a Speck
And I thought I was a reck
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Listen up!
Listen good!
No one ever understood.
And I didnt think they would
Hard to say, hard to hear
It's not easy on the ears
What is said is just that
What is done is in the past
But what is coming
What is near
That, my dear, you may fear.
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All for now
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:49 pm
Okay yeah thats all the okay-ish ones I can find for now feel free to Critique, or correct, in any way shape or form, I really do enjoy it, dont ask why!
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 12:57 pm
These are quite good. The two things I find lacking are: Rythm ((I have this obsessive compulsive thing where if something rhymes, it should either have rythm or have no attempt towards rythm with nothing to make you think you made a mistake with the tempo)) and spelling ((I know I typo a lot in comments but when I submit finished works I always run them though a word processor spell check)). These seem almost like spells, a lot of them. Very neat!
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2004 12:52 pm
JenniferStarling These are quite good. The two things I find lacking are: Rythm ((I have this obsessive compulsive thing where if something rhymes, it should either have rythm or have no attempt towards rythm with nothing to make you think you made a mistake with the tempo)) and spelling ((I know I typo a lot in comments but when I submit finished works I always run them though a word processor spell check)). These seem almost like spells, a lot of them. Very neat! Thanks, thats the best thing I've ever herd about my poetry. Sry baout the spelling, my word processer is on the frizz. As for the rhyming, I'll work on it, thanks!
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