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 Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:26 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:29 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:33 am
They're beautiful!!!
I especially love how you added that soft glow touch. Fabulous! =D
Only things I can see for yout o work on would be the foot curve (where the leg curves into the foot at the ankle. It seems a little too high to me), and the eye placement. They seem a bit low on the face.
I think the 'Skater Gurl' is my favorite!
Otherwise, they're amazing! All so cute!! whee
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 11:36 am
thanks
the skater gurl is my fav too i was so proud of how she came out :3
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:52 pm
They're really good but I suggest putting the folds more on the outside edges of the clothes instead of the stomach area.The skater girl's right leg seems abit to far out. I love the second one alot, it's cute
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:54 pm
i love the one of the couple hugging
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:30 pm
Tuskiyo i love the one of the couple hugging thanks :3 it was first good pic of a couple hugging -_- took meh awhile but im happy it came out good :3 if only i had photoshop nowz >:/ lol
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:39 pm
The top image, the girl with the ball in her hand? Not only is the ball lopsided, the face is as well, it looks a bit like the jawline is actually higher on one side than the other, and the arm lifting has no collar bone indention. The way you drew the collarbone it looks like her shoulders are pushed back and the perspective is that you're looking up at her, you should lower the collarbone somewhat. The folds... I'm not even touching that, not to sound rude or anything, I don't want to be hypocritical because I'm not that good at them myself.
Miya Sandra picture - The golds are pretty good, but her head actually looks too big for the body, and the left eye is actually pushed too far off to the side. The hands don't even look like they're bent, either, they look a bit like stubby appendages. The feet, as well, the shoes, mainly, look like they're coming off and pushed forward. There's a good set of tuts on that, actually. <3
Skater Gurl - she has no ankle on the right hand side if you were to face the same firection she is, the one without the mesh stocking? Yeah, she has NO ANKLE at all, that is called a Cankle and can seriously be torn apart for that. It's a pain to figure out how to draw, this much I know myself, so don't fret about it. The folds on the shirt don't look real, either, they're like... Too poofy on the inside, it's best to draw folds on the outside on the outline as well as the inside to make it feel more real. I like the skirt though.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:15 pm
Very, very nice.
I love your style!!!
I think your main problem lies in eyes and clothes folds.
The eyes are too low, and I notice you shy away from drawing both.
If you don't draw both, you'll never get better at it!
The clothes folds, I feel, you just add too may in the wrong places. ^^
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:45 pm
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