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 Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:54 am
ok people, think you have any original songs that you've written that you think LP would be impressed with? wanna share them here?
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:58 am
heres something that iv written, nothing to really brag about, just something to get the ball rolling.
anger, fear fill inside
thoughts, ideas fill my mind
no sign or feeling of being kind
you can't hold me by your side
things you say degrades my heart
this world i hate, i want to see
the reason why i can't fly or be free
there's only the feeling of falling apart
i don't have a choice but follow your rules
to sleep as endless dream
and not let my tears come out of my dreams
would not be acceptable to your rules
no more life, no more fear
either way, i will no longer be here
again. nothing to brag about -_-' but yea, just to get things started. so dont be shy, cause you'll know that yours is at least better than mine.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:59 am
there is a similar thread to this.
if anyone posts any of the songs that would belong in the other songs threads, then this one will be nominated for deletion.
thank you, have a nice day xp
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:59 am
dragon revenge there is a similar thread to this. if anyone posts any of the songs that would belong in the other songs threads, then this one will be nominated for deletion. thank you, have a nice day xp i thought the other one was for paradies. this is for original stuff.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:23 am
TamerRyu dragon revenge there is a similar thread to this. if anyone posts any of the songs that would belong in the other songs threads, then this one will be nominated for deletion. thank you, have a nice day xp i thought the other one was for paradies. this is for original stuff. remember this is gaia, some people dont always read everthing, they just post. lol.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:27 am
dragon revenge TamerRyu dragon revenge there is a similar thread to this. if anyone posts any of the songs that would belong in the other songs threads, then this one will be nominated for deletion. thank you, have a nice day xp i thought the other one was for paradies. this is for original stuff. remember this is gaia, some people dont always read everthing, they just post. lol. true, very true but they'll know its about songs/poems or something along those lines. thats really all this is about. all i want to see is some stuff that people have written.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:36 am
This is by me, I love this song to bits, and I want it to be my single:
Watch You Fall
Hate is just an emotion, not an ocean,
shouldn't drown you even if it was,
Desperate times call for desperate measures,
But you never knew when the time was right,
So you screw up all the time, and take me down with you,
But I won't be there to help you back up again
{Chorus}
I'm taking all the pain, and the shame,
maybe even the blame,
so I can watch you come crashing down
To the ground, people standing all around,
While you lie there looking so profound.
I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet,
So don't be afraid, I will return
I fell on my own, and I made it back up,
Scratched my hands, didn't cut my wrists.
I know you think life is puttin you down,
But you gotta work up the courage to stand again,
Maybe someone up there is tryin to screw you over,
Just never let them get the job done
{Chorus}
I'm taking all the pain, and the shame,
maybe even the blame,
so I can watch you come crashing down
To the ground, people standing all around,
While you lie there looking so profound.
I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet,
So don't be afraid, I will return
Fallen and you can't get up/Don't deny it you'll be fine,
All it takes is a little time/For the wounds to heal,
Spread your wings and Fly/Don't let them see you cry
I don't really wanna see you fall, but you gotta learn from your mistakes
I'm taking all the pain, and the shame,
maybe even the blame,
So I can watch you come crashing down,
and I'll be there, to help you back up,
But you gotta learn to stand on your own two feet
I'm down, you were broken, But we're not out yet,
So don't be afraid,we will return.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 5:39 pm
Wolfessa Zelia Mirror This is by me, I love this song to bits, and I want it to be my single: Watch You FallHate is just an emotion, not an ocean, shouldn't drown you even if it was, Desperate times call for desperate measures, But you never knew when the time was right, So you screw up all the time, and take me down with you, But I won't be there to help you back up again {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return I fell on my own, and I made it back up, Scratched my hands, didn't cut my wrists. I know you think life is puttin you down, But you gotta work up the courage to stand again, Maybe someone up there is tryin to screw you over, Just never let them get the job done {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return Fallen and you can't get up/Don't deny it you'll be fine, All it takes is a little time/For the wounds to heal, Spread your wings and Fly/Don't let them see you cry I don't really wanna see you fall, but you gotta learn from your mistakes I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, So I can watch you come crashing down, and I'll be there, to help you back up, But you gotta learn to stand on your own two feet I'm down, you were broken, But we're not out yet, So don't be afraid,we will return. OOhhh I really like that!
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:46 pm
PurpleBubble Wolfessa Zelia Mirror This is by me, I love this song to bits, and I want it to be my single: Watch You FallHate is just an emotion, not an ocean, shouldn't drown you even if it was, Desperate times call for desperate measures, But you never knew when the time was right, So you screw up all the time, and take me down with you, But I won't be there to help you back up again {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return I fell on my own, and I made it back up, Scratched my hands, didn't cut my wrists. I know you think life is puttin you down, But you gotta work up the courage to stand again, Maybe someone up there is tryin to screw you over, Just never let them get the job done {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return Fallen and you can't get up/Don't deny it you'll be fine, All it takes is a little time/For the wounds to heal, Spread your wings and Fly/Don't let them see you cry I don't really wanna see you fall, but you gotta learn from your mistakes I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, So I can watch you come crashing down, and I'll be there, to help you back up, But you gotta learn to stand on your own two feet I'm down, you were broken, But we're not out yet, So don't be afraid,we will return. OOhhh I really like that! Merci Bucket ^-^ All copyrights are by me, lol theft and burn, hehe
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 5:07 am
PurpleBubble Wolfessa Zelia Mirror This is by me, I love this song to bits, and I want it to be my single: Watch You FallHate is just an emotion, not an ocean, shouldn't drown you even if it was, Desperate times call for desperate measures, But you never knew when the time was right, So you screw up all the time, and take me down with you, But I won't be there to help you back up again {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return I fell on my own, and I made it back up, Scratched my hands, didn't cut my wrists. I know you think life is puttin you down, But you gotta work up the courage to stand again, Maybe someone up there is tryin to screw you over, Just never let them get the job done {Chorus} I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, so I can watch you come crashing down To the ground, people standing all around, While you lie there looking so profound. I'm down and broken, But I'm not out yet, So don't be afraid, I will return Fallen and you can't get up/Don't deny it you'll be fine, All it takes is a little time/For the wounds to heal, Spread your wings and Fly/Don't let them see you cry I don't really wanna see you fall, but you gotta learn from your mistakes I'm taking all the pain, and the shame, maybe even the blame, So I can watch you come crashing down, and I'll be there, to help you back up, But you gotta learn to stand on your own two feet I'm down, you were broken, But we're not out yet, So don't be afraid,we will return. OOhhh I really like that! I can agree to that!
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:21 pm
Quote: Merci Bucket ^-^ All copyrights are by me, lol theft and burn, hehe Merci bucket? What the hell? Last time i checked it was Merci Beacoup... lol! I wanna say that to my French teacher and watch her flip! "Merci Bucket Madam!"
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:59 pm
I wrote a song at school today called "I don't have to wait on you" but I'm not gonna put it on here,it sucks big time. xp
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x.Marsh[mel]low.x Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:52 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 8:56 pm
PurpleBubble Quote: Merci Bucket ^-^ All copyrights are by me, lol theft and burn, hehe Merci bucket? What the hell? Last time i checked it was Merci Beacoup... lol! I wanna say that to my French teacher and watch her flip! "Merci Bucket Madam!" LMAO, it's fun being Canadian, and abusing the french language. now the language I really want to learn is spanish.. I know one great line, hehe: Tangos de grandi locos fiesta del pantaloms!
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 11:39 am
Mel your amazing....I wish I was talented like you!
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