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[Ralph]
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:13 pm


I wrote something. No one has posted in the Artist's Studio in two months so I'm posting it here so people will actually see it. xd

It was posted to my FO blog so I'm just c/ping rather than putting a link. If that bothers you then it's really too bad. ;]

So here it is. 1k to whoever can guess who they're supposed to be:


There is no color here. The gray stage stretches forward into empitness, the lip falling off into the abyss. Nothingness. The gray curtains hang forlornly, stirring ever so slightly. The heavy fabric ripples. The prince stands on the stage, his arms spread. He holds the rolled script in one hand and his head is tipped back.

His mouth is agape as if waiting for something from the sky to drop into it. His hair falls back from his face and rests on his back, a bird's nest resting on the back of his neck. His eyes are close and he seems to be at peace. He stands there, looking up into the emptiness. No spotlights. No stagelights. No footlights. Just the dark, the reaching dark, above the arch. Gray, insipid light pisses onto the dull stage. The prince, though, is in vibrant color. His body seems charged, alive. More alive than the rest of the stage. He lowers his head, a smirk appearing on his face.

"Come forth, Ophelia!" he calls. "Come forth!"

Ophelia sits near the lip of the stage in a pool of gray light. Shoulders stooped and body small, Ophelia raises a weary head. Blue eyes stare out blankly at the prince. Ophelia opens his mouth and only bubbles come out.

Pop.

Pop.

Words echo in the theater.

"I'm here."

The prince places his hands on his hips and stares directly at him.

"Come here."

Ophelia speaks once more, using a sad, delicate voice, rather than bubbles.

"I'm here. I can hear you here."

Ophelia sits in the pool of light, staring at the prince in the foreign darkness. Their eyes meet.

"Poor Ophelia," the prince says.

"Prince of Denmark," Ophelia replies. "To be or not to be. That is the question, isn't it?"

"Come out of the light, Ophelia dear."

"I must like it here. It's wet."

"It's light."

"Darkness, light, there is no difference. Man's internal struggle?"

"You're reading too much into it, Ophelia dear."

"You're not reading enough, my Prince."

The prince drops the script to the ground. It falls slowly, unfurling in the air and floating softly to the ground. Swaying.

"Come forth, poor Ophelia."

"Come here, dear prince."

The insipid gray light retreats to darkness. Only Ophelia is seen on the stage, illuminated by the pool of light. The gray light looks almost blue, casting a strange glow upon his face. He blows bubbles once more.

"Dear prince."

The prince's voice comes out from the darkness, speaking softly and sweetly, like a lover.

"Poor Ophelia."
PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 11:09 pm


Looks like a dead Hamlet and Ophelia to me.

Mooby the Golden Sock


Bogus_Burger
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 12:32 am


Damn you Mooby, posting my guess. Well, if it's not fair to double-guess I'll think way to far into it.

They're both the same person:

Ophelia is the conscious whereas Hamlet is the unconscious. Each wills the ego to dwell in its own realm but the ego needs both of them at least to a certain degree, to remain stable.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 3:59 am


Ophelia and Hamlet is the most obvious, literal (it you would) interpretation.

They're representing other people (hence why I refer to Ophelia using 'his' at one point).

[Ralph]
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Mooby the Golden Sock

PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 9:15 pm


k fine, it's William and Hamlet. Or maybe William and Jay Sherman.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 9:18 pm


Mooby the Golden Sock
k fine, it's William and Hamlet. Or maybe William and Jay Sherman.


xD

Still no. Other than the names/references, it has nothing to do with Shakespeare.

[Ralph]
Crew


Bogus_Burger
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 7:11 pm


Could it be Santiago and the fish from The Old Man and the Sea? If not, Ahab and the whale?
PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 7:21 pm


Bogus_Burger
Could it be Santiago and the fish from The Old Man and the Sea? If not, Ahab and the whale?


No and no.

Good guesses, though.

[Ralph]
Crew


Orange Blossom
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:08 pm


hmm... is it God and Satan?
PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:12 pm


Estragon and Dimitri! (I know that's wrong but those guys are great)

Bogus_Burger
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[Ralph]
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 7:40 am


Bogus_Burger
Estragon and Dimitri! (I know that's wrong but those guys are great)


GoGo and DiDi! xD

It's not them. But they ARE great.

@Blossom: Not them either.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 12:42 pm


So it's a couple of musicians maybe. The question is, which musicians?

Bogus_Burger
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Orange Blossom
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 12:45 pm


Is it Mick Jagger and Keith Richards?
PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:01 pm


Orange Blossom
Is it Mick Jagger and Keith Richards?


No.

But I could see why you'd think that. xD

@Burger: yes, it is two musicians.

[Ralph]
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:52 pm


And power-hungry Slytherin loved those of great ambition...|>

---|No idea who they are, but I do really like the writing. (You should be posting in the TLS Story if you haven't already!)|---

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