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Orienla of Rel Devon Captain
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 Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 6:17 pm
Hey everyone. I finally posted my story in our fanfiction forum. It's 13 chapters long (ch 14 is in the works). I'm pretty desperate for feedback, so if you read it or have any input, just put it here or PM me.
I savour suggestions and constructive criticism - just remember, when I read your writing, I'm always nice about criticizing. I've put a lot of time and effort into this fanfic, so I ask that you please be gentle.
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:36 pm
YAY!
I'm sure you are aware that I've been waiting for the next chapter.
Such a cliffhanger. I love it so far!
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Orienla of Rel Devon Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:41 pm
Haha. I'm so happy you like it! It's such a romance tale so far, but action is on it;s way!
I feel like it's way too detailed...like I'm including a lot of unimportant stuff. But then it's only 27 pages or something like that in MS Works (arial, size 12). Any thoughts?
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 11:03 am
The detail just makes it flow better.
I, personally, wish I was more detailed in some of my work.
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Orienla of Rel Devon Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 11:35 am
I've nearly got Ch 14 done!
It's been pretty slow, but sometimes I find it hard to remember that the story is still relatively short compared to the actual Harry Potter novels. But I had an absolute epiphany for a new story, so this one might take a back seat for a bit.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:16 pm
Excellent! I like all of the details, it reminds me of myself... sweatdrop
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:41 pm
Mariposa85 I've nearly got Ch 14 done! It's been pretty slow, but sometimes I find it hard to remember that the story is still relatively short compared to the actual Harry Potter novels. But I had an absolute epiphany for a new story, so this one might take a back seat for a bit. i can't wait for chapter 14! but, i am excited to hear that you'll be working on something new. :}
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 1:15 pm
I love this story! Can I be your #1 fan? blaugh
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Quotable Conversationalist
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Orienla of Rel Devon Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:39 pm
Thank you so much guys! It feels really good to get positive feedback on it!
Yes, Ramshackle, you can be my #1 fan LOL and when something gets published and I'm famous you can run my fan club LOL
tourniquet, whats the ETA on the next chapter of The Better Black?
Thanks waterstone - the details are my iffy part. Sometimes I think I'm being far too detailed!
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:30 pm
Mariposa85 Thanks waterstone - the details are my iffy part. Sometimes I think I'm being far too detailed! Don't worry! 3nodding The details are the best part (besides the entire story) It can never be too detailed.
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 8:21 pm
~Throws confetti~ I was waiting for you to write more. What you have so far is awesome. blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 1:20 pm
Have you had any developements in the story?
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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Orienla of Rel Devon Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 5:53 pm
Tor Petty Have you had any developements in the story? not recently...since the baby started walking and decided to hit the terrible twos a year early, things have gotten rather hectic...hard to sit down and write a story with one eye on a rampaging sherpa. LOL. rofl Anywho, I'm at a block anyway. I'm not sure where to take things now.
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 8:36 pm
3nodding
I understand.
Just checking and making sure that you're not holding out on us ><
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carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
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