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Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 7:39 pm
"wow... dad.. what is this place?" a young girl about 14 asked as she looked to her father, he was a tall man, in his 40's "this is where i have been for the past few years.. in a sleep like mode.." he replyed. "wow... this place is huge.." the girl looked around more, she was in shock, and she liked the new place to explore. she was walking along when.. "ouch!" she tripped over a random robot... "ahhh!!!" she screamed at the robot, "what is this?" "brandy, are you okay?" the man asked her "i'm fine dad..." "there is something i must tell you.. about this place.. it is not just my home... it is home to five other humans, and there dog... that keeps krapping on my desk...." brandy laughed, "so why did you bring me here?"
the man's eyes went from green to red, "i need help. these kids keep trying to stop me, and i need your help to stop them.." his eyes turned xana, then went away. "sweetie.. i siggned you up for school. the cadic accademy." brandy's eyes got big, and watery looking, "really? i have always wanted to go to school but mom said no..." she got a sad look on her face, "i miss mom.." the she said "it's okay.." the man said trying to comfort her, "annie would have wanted me to do this.." he said as he sat next to her, he hugged her, "it's okay.. don't cry.. you will like school. i know you will." he got up, and accidentally he dropped his laptop. "daddy you dropped this..." the laptop was open, "project carthalage? xana? daddy, what is xana?" the man said with a laugh, "that's my name. xana. but i want you to call me james okay sweetie?" "yes daddy.." said brandy as she stood up and handed her father the computer. "when dose school start?" "in an hour. i will help you get ready."
20 minuets later
"you look great!" xana said as he looked at his daughter, "black is your colour!" she was wearing a black skirt, with a purple top, and a black coat over it. the purple top made the blue in her eyes stand out. her hair was jet black. "are you comeing with me for my first day?" she asked "no, sorry sweetie, i have plans.." "ohh... okay then... " she felt sad "here, call me at lunch." xana handed her a cell phone and gave her a kiss on the cheak. "have a good day at school." "i will!!" she gave him a hug, and started twards the school.
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Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 11:11 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:48 pm
because i am being lazy and don't want ot go on to krapolaonastick, i will make the post with my mule...
next chapter will be done on or before friday, main charictors will be added...
and one other thing i would like to add...
please forgive my spelling. my computer has no spell check on it what so ever, and i have the spelling level of a 5th grader... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 7:24 pm
xana103 because i am being lazy and don't want ot go on to krapolaonastick, i will make the post with my mule... next chapter will be done on or before friday, main charictors will be added... and one other thing i would like to add... please forgive my spelling. my computer has no spell check on it what so ever, and i have the spelling level of a 5th grader... sweatdrop 's ok... i have spelling problems too... i would probably give my english teacher a heart attack if i never used spell check...
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:08 pm
MiaIkumis#1Fan xana103 because i am being lazy and don't want ot go on to krapolaonastick, i will make the post with my mule... next chapter will be done on or before friday, main charictors will be added... and one other thing i would like to add... please forgive my spelling. my computer has no spell check on it what so ever, and i have the spelling level of a 5th grader... sweatdrop 's ok... i have spelling problems too... i would probably give my english teacher a heart attack if i never used spell check... same here eek i sorta spell check.. but not really... sweatdrop dude.. if my enghish teacher read the story i am wrighting (too odd for the guild) she would freak... not only from the randomness of what i wrote, but the massive grammar errors.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:18 pm
krapolaonastick MiaIkumis#1Fan xana103 because i am being lazy and don't want ot go on to krapolaonastick, i will make the post with my mule... next chapter will be done on or before friday, main charictors will be added... and one other thing i would like to add... please forgive my spelling. my computer has no spell check on it what so ever, and i have the spelling level of a 5th grader... sweatdrop 's ok... i have spelling problems too... i would probably give my english teacher a heart attack if i never used spell check... same here eek i sorta spell check.. but not really... sweatdrop dude.. if my enghish teacher read the story i am wrighting (too odd for the guild) she would freak... not only from the randomness of what i wrote, but the massive grammar errors.... sweatdrop OMG that just reminded me... this one kid in class nicknamed 'human-dictionary/thesaurus/library catalog', cuz he knows EVERYTHING about english, the library, grammar... he wrote this musical... and its grammatically correct nd stuff cuz he shows it to the teacher, the class, me, and anyone who is (unfortunate enough) to be in his path, and its correct spelling and everything... ... but its about leprochans who work at a parody version of mcdonalds and murder people because they are mind controled by aliens playing monopoly. o_O whatever you wrote cannot be more random than that... or as distrubing...
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:24 pm
my storey involes a where wolf, a fairy, and a 14 yearold killing her dad. and a few other things that are a little graphic for this guild..
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 7:17 pm
krapolaonastick my storey involes a where wolf, a fairy, and a 14 yearold killing her dad. and a few other things that are a little graphic for this guild.. hmm... pretty random, but it doesnt creep me out as much as the whole leprochaun-alien-monopoly-mc donalds thing... probably because you dont walk around my school singing and dancing out parts of your story between classes... o_O
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:15 pm
chapter [2]
brandy slowly walked to school. she got there, but was lucky enugh to hear the bell ring.. "oh no dose that mean i am" she said when she got cut off, "ditching class" said jim, he stod infront of her. "you where about to ditch school wernt you.." "no, i wasn't this is my first day here" brandy tryed to explain but was cut off again "yeah right.. like i am going to beleve that. you are going to the princial's office!" said jim as he grabbed her hand and dragged her ot the principal's office.
"what is your name young lady.." said delmas "brandy sovey." "she was about to ditch school" said jim but he got cut off my delmas "this is a new student jim." he looked from jim to brandy, "i am sorry if jim scared you at all." he moved the mouse on his computer, and wrote some stuff on a pice of paper. "here are your classes. jim, i would like oyu ot take her to the first one. 6th grade math with mrs.mayor." "yes sir.." said jim.
"okay now students take out your.." mrs.mayor began to wright on the board, but the class was loud. then there was a knock on the door. she walked over and opened the door, then a monster jumped out and ate her brains!!!! no... i wsh.. then brandy and jim walked in. "this is a new student, i hope you all make her feel welcome." then jim walked out. "okay take a seat so i can get on with the lesson plan." the teacher said in a not nice tone. brandy walked over and sat at a table behind millie and timia. "hi" said tamia. "hi" said millie. "what are we working on in this class?" brandy asked, "i don't know. the teacher is evil. and we arn't learning anything." said millie. "where are you from?" "i am from" "brandy! what is the awnser to 7,934 times 3,982?" the teacher said in a 'i am smarter than you are tone.' "31,672,528." brandy said after less than a second of thinking. "wro... correct...." said the teacher. "how did oyu do that in your head so fast? that is like 9th grade math." "the awnser just hit me..." "how did you do that?" "i don't know, i just knew the awnser..." BLADLININGINGIINGINGINGINGIJNGINIGNGNINGING!!!!! the ball rang, time to go to lunch.
"jeremey what are you working on?" odd asked jeremey as he began to eat. "nothing.." jeremey replyed he went back to looking at his computer.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 11:14 pm
good.
also, its 31,593,188... i think... and trust me, doing math that fast is WAY above 9th grade level...
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:01 pm
MiaIkumis#1Fan good. also, its 31,593,188... i think... and trust me, doing math that fast is WAY above 9th grade level... i suck at math myself.. i have a C in that class. the only thing i can do really fast is the thingy with the triangles.. what is that thing called.. the pathagorian theroum? i know i spelled that wrong... but ether way i am good at that. and in the storey, when the teacher went ot open the door... after that part, highlight the letters.. i got board and wrote something
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:50 pm
xana103 MiaIkumis#1Fan good. also, its 31,593,188... i think... and trust me, doing math that fast is WAY above 9th grade level... i suck at math myself.. i have a C in that class. the only thing i can do really fast is the thingy with the triangles.. what is that thing called.. the pathagorian theroum? i know i spelled that wrong... but ether way i am good at that. and in the storey, when the teacher went ot open the door... after that part, highlight the letters.. i got board and wrote something heh... my average in geometry is 97... sweatdrop my parents suggested i join the math team though, nd everyone is really nice, but being a 9th grader in a room full of advanced upperclassmen makes me feel somewhat stupid in comparisson...
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 12:08 pm
MiaIkumis#1Fan xana103 MiaIkumis#1Fan good. also, its 31,593,188... i think... and trust me, doing math that fast is WAY above 9th grade level... i suck at math myself.. i have a C in that class. the only thing i can do really fast is the thingy with the triangles.. what is that thing called.. the pathagorian theroum? i know i spelled that wrong... but ether way i am good at that. and in the storey, when the teacher went ot open the door... after that part, highlight the letters.. i got board and wrote something heh... my average in geometry is 97... sweatdrop my parents suggested i join the math team though, nd everyone is really nice, but being a 9th grader in a room full of advanced upperclassmen makes me feel somewhat stupid in comparisson... it's like how i feel about wrighting and posting here. compaired to zaber i am like a first grader, wile he is like a 10th grader
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