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PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 1:53 pm


She was exotic
and also a narcotic
who eventually became psychotic.

Her name was Jane
she lived on Main
which made her go insane.

Out of six, she was the first-born
a capricorn
she wished to be unborn.

Every tear she shed
was a step closer to her deathbed
she was hanging by a thread.

The objective
was defective--inefective
from her perspective.

The blood running down her arm
was a great deal for alarm
she didn't mean any harm.

Filled with dread
she bled til she was dead
it was said.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:15 am


Wow excellent poem, it has the same rhyming scheme as the poem there once was a man from nantucket. But it is a bit of an odd combination of a humorous rhyming scheme and a quite gory poem, but strangly it works. Good work smile

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