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1. Be literate, that means 3 lines per post! Writer's block is ok every once in awhile but not on every single dam post.
2. Be descriptive.
Rule Broken
Homer walked around the ship then sat down.
What the hell? Yea thats the appropriate response, thats so dull, who would want to answer to that? Thats actually breaking 2 rules at once.
Rule Not Broken
Homer paced up and down the ship nervously. He then stopped and walked over to the rail of the ship and looked out at the open sea. He still wasn't over the whole lost at sea thing. His face had a worried look and someone could easily tell by looking at him he was a nervous wreck. He then walked and sat on the floor, now even feeling scared. He didn't have anybody to be with, nobody to comfort him, he was alone and scared.
Wow, now isn't that much better? Somebody would actually reply to that post. It's descriptive and doesn't break any rules! Almost perfect.
3. Please, just please! No text talk.
Rule Broken
he walked in to the buildin and looked around and said wassup ya'll, ow ya doin?
Wow, do you know hard that was for me to actually type up? Well yea, thats breaks every single rule so far.
Rule Not Broken
He walked into the building and looked around, "Whats up everybody? How are you all doing?" He said.
Thats much better, but it still has to be more descriptive and longer.
4. This is a PG-13 role-play. So if you decide to have a night on the bed of love then take it to PM's...please. Romance is allowed but don't break the last sentence rule.
5. Violence is aloud but no killing somebody without their permission.
6. Follow the profile skeleton that I have put on the application center.
7. Post the profile skeleton in the application center and wait for me to PM you with an approval.
8. Have Fun!
