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Gerard Way003 InThe Flesh

PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 11:08 am


rated for swearing & violence
some of my fanfics you probably know that I like to talk through the main character
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I'm just going to talk through Gerard for once.(SQUUUEEEE!!!!)
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It's early like about 6 am in New Jersey. I guessed it was too early to leave for school so I decided to play with my dogs first. I am a real dog lover. I have three dogs all inhabiting my house. I know one of my dogs hate me & my lifestyle but I still love him anyways. Like at around 7:15 I left the house. My dogs were whimpering begging me to stay but I felt I had to leave anyways. I arrive at school surrounded by my cat loving friends Bob,Ray,Mikey, & Frank. They weren't really talking to me that much since I got my third dog.

In the hallways I met a new girl next to my locker. "Hi I'm Gerard." I said cheerfully. "Hi I'm Laura. I'm new here." she responded. "So you wanna go out tonight?" I asked. The minute I asked she froze up. "Uhm...uh...sure...pick me up at 7?" she asked. "Okay. 7." "Oh yeah can I bring one of my dogs?" she asked keenly. "Oh sure!!!I'll bring one of mine too!!!" I sprung up cheerfully. "Okay see you tonight at 7!" Laura responded cheerfully. As I was walking away I was whispering under my breath "YES!YES!". The only thing I could thing about was our date tonight. I was so anxious that I lost track of time & it was almost time to go pick Laura up. Luckily I forgot that I already did everything. You know leave food for the dogs,bring a leash....

I brought flowers & candy. Laura just lit up when she saw me. "Hi...are you all set?" I asked. "Um...oh....yeah..." Laura responded off guard. "Okay let's go." As she was coming out she was tugging on her dogs leash. It was a chihuahua. It was cute but stubborn. "What you should try doing is holding down this button & then tug." I demonstrated for her. "Oh thanks." As we go on our date we decided to have picnic in one of the parks nearby by candle light. The date went great!!! "Oh thanks for taking me out." Laura thanked me. "Oh no problem. So Sat. night at 8?" I asked. "Oh sure." she said with a smile on her face. "Ok goodnight." said I. As soon as the door shut I heard a piercing scream. I guessed it was Laura's.

After the years go by Laura & I grow closer & closer together & my jealous dog became more envious. So one night my dog bit me & injected some strange DNA. The next 3 days I became all slugish & moody.
Then I suddenly fell asleep & when I woke up I felt oddly strange. I jump out of bed (still strange) & go to my full body mirror to find myself as a dog!!! I was wondering "What the hell happend to me?" as I panic. I was nowhere to be seen & Laura was getting worried. She was calling everyday to check up on me & tried to see if I was home. I gave her a key because we felt so close to each other. She just bardges in to find me as a dog. "AWWWWW.....CUTE!!!!!GERARD GOT ANOTHER DOG!!!!" she squeeled. "but wait...it has a resemblance of Gerard though...EVEN CUTER!!" she went on gushing & saw my dog tag necklace she gave to me. "I guess Gerard got another dog tag & named his new dog Gerard I guess." she went on picking me up & hugging me.

Laura hung around for a while waiting for the human me to come back. It was night fall & Laura fell asleep & I fell asleep on her. But around midnight some tall men with black suits came & tied Laura up,put a blind fold on her,put masking tape on her mouth,took a knife & held it against her throat guiding her to their car. I barked seeing that I might be able to wake the neighbors up. After about 3 barks they kicked me & I whimpered. I kind of stalked them until they got to a peer. They got on a boat & sailed off. I was just staring off into the distance at Laura the love of my life...gone. After a few feet the boat springs a leak!!!! The men just ditched Laura & swam away. I doggie paddled my way to Laura to save her. I guessed she knew I was there & hung on to me.

I doggie paddled back to shore. as soon as we were on land Laura took her blind fold off & saw me. She was in a shocked state suprised. Laura called the police & as soon as she did I left the scene. I hop back into bed wondering what I'll do now. I woke up feeling strange again. This time I hung on to the dog tag necklace. When I noticed that I was actually hanging on to something I ran to the mirror to see if I was human again. I was human again! I ran down stairs to see Laura sleeping on my couch. I just sat down in an empty space next to her. As soon as I did she woke up & questioned me about where I've been & about my 'new dog'. "You won't believe me if I told you." I told her after she finished. "JUST TELL ME!!!!!" she exclaimed. I told her about everything that happend to me & stared at me blankly. "Uh yeah...are we still set for Fri. night's date?Great." Laura defensivly said walking to the door. "Oh wait. I meant to give you this last date." I said stopping her. I gave her a beautiful locket with both of our names carved in it & a picture together. "Oh Gerard it's beautiful. Thank you" she reacted also followed by a short clining.

She left & it felt good to be human again. It was a week away from Friday & Laura told me her dog bit her & she felt moody & sluggish....well here we go again....
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rewritten later & going to be in a different post
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 12:06 pm


IRK...MAYBE MAKE YOUR STORY A LITTLE MORE DETAILED NEXT TIME? IT WENT REALLY FAST AND I REALISE IT WAS A ONE SHOT AND ALL BUT IT GOT KIND OF CONFUSING AND ALL. JUST A LITTLE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM FROM A FELLOW WRITER.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:00 pm


I REALIZE THIS WAS A ONE-SHOT, BUT IT MOVED MUCH TOO FAST. YOU SHOULD PROBABLY MAKE IDEAS LIKE THESE THREE-SHOTS OR FULL FICS.
DESPITE THAT, I LOVED IT. IT WAS WEIRD AND UNEXPECTED. heart
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:03 pm


Well...that's what you get when you give me a lot of soda....

Gerard Way003 InThe Flesh


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:20 pm


THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GIVE ME A LOT OF COFFEE. heart COFFEE=YUMMERFULZ. heart
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