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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:30 am
Well.... I feel like writing a vampire story here... so nobody post! Ummm... but I gots me alot of inspiration for this... so its gonna be vampires and humans and stuffs....
Its based on romance, And I already thought of a real good ending thats kinda sad and emo-ish.... I think it'll be really good... [the ending at least....
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:35 pm
I'll spoil the ending- still haven't named the story or decided what happens first, but I've got the ending few paragraphs....
"I got this for you.." Ramsey whispered, blood pouring out from him rapidly, threads hanging from his hands. "It's my own..." His eyes were half closed, glazed over in his dying moments. His heart, contained in his blood stained hand, was still pumping out his blood, forming a dark maroon puddle in the shaded area of the lighthouse top. The feeble threads, his veins, arterys, his life lines, lead to his chest as blood cascaded down his front. His mouth started to leak the red liquid he had once drunken to stay alive. His empty left hand hung stiffly at his side, his forefinger slightly twitching.
The girl with blood red hair's face lit up in horror and tears as the strobe light of the tower lit up her perfectly clear, pale face, glowing with jewl-like tears. She cried and slumped to her knees as the pale faced, glazed eyed boy infront of her did in unision. "Why?" She half moaned, half cried the question.
"Becase you are my one and only, my love, my soul, my life." He responded, a slight smile crossing his mouth, his chin now scarlet as well. "Take it..." he said, pushing his heart to her, staining he shirt with yet another red blur. "Keep this, and remember me... As your's faithful, forever... I love you, please, preserve my existance, take the little blood left of me, keep my heart as a symbol as my love for you, and keep it close..."
Olivia slumped against the wall, tears running down her face even faster than the blood billowing from the man's chest. "Please no... I can't... I can't..." He hickuped from her tears mornfully. "I can't do this... I can't live without you..." She fell forward, suported by the bleeding lover's stiff arms, hugging his deeply. One of his veins snapped at this and he winced in pain as it to started spilling it's share of blood.
"Do it... For me... For my memory..." he said, holding her forward painfully, staring into her eyes hazily. "Before I die and my blood goes bad and my memory lost..."
She cried and sunk her fangs into his neck, tears running down his back. From the light of the tower it might have seemed that they were deeply intwined into a kiss, but they were not. She stumbled back, crying even harder than before.
"No... No... I can't..." She said, the boy barely alive now.
"You..... Must..." he said, repeating his urgency as he slumped down farther on the wall. "Hurry..." he moaned as she made another bite. His eyes closed, a small hint of a smile on his face, he was now, and forever on, dead. She cried as she broke off the last strands attached to him, the heart shriveled from the loss of all the blood. She put it in he bag, crying and holding her hair, staining it even redder.
"Why...?" She kept repeating, rocking back and forth and shaking, suddenly, her head shot up and her eyes wide, memorys not her own playing in her head.
Flashes of moments together, kissing, sharing meals of human blood, all of Ramsey's memorys. then finally, as if in slow motion his final moments, Ramsey running up the stairs to escape murderous enemys and finally getting to the top. He knew she would be here, she had to come- she must. Suddenly blood seemed to slash into her eyes and Ramsey's hand was in his chest, wincing in pain as he dug around for the right organ to give to his one true love. His eyes grew wide as he reached it, yanking it out and severing thread like veins. he pulled iut out and grimmaced. It was right- right for love- His one true love, Olivia.
Oliva.
Love is but only Olivia....
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I haven't decide who these 'enemys' are, but I might add them dragging away Olivia and murdering her..... Ummm... But they're both vampires, and they were deeply in love, and being hunted for some unknown reason.... Ummm... enjoy? Wait Thats supposed to go at the begining dammit!
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 2:20 pm
Chapter One The Hunters The dull silver gray hairs swiped through his fingers as he rubbed his head before holding his hands back over the fire, his tipless gloves seemed to be orange from the fire's glare, although they were green. The garbage can flared with flames that reached towards the sky, releasing repulsive fumes into the air. However, it mattered not what the fire smelt like, but the warmth. The man had no shelter, no money, no family... Nothing. His mother, too, was like this, dumped on the side of the street after not being able to preform at the club she had worked in, being pregnant. The father? He knew not, only that he had left the mother on the streets, no longer wanting to be with her now that she was pregnant. His mother gave birth in a back alley, noone slopping to help, noone caring. Why help the weak pass on their traits? His mother died on the side of the street, the baby surviving, getting picked up by an orphanage, a poor one at that. The orphanage had enough money to feed him, but not enough for schooling, or helping him onnce he was too old for the orphanage. The man frowned, his eyelids drooping as he recalled these memorys, his horific past. He smacked his hands together and zipped his jcket back up. He left the fire alive, too lazy to put it out, casting shadows down alley-ways and streets. He looked down an alley-way near to the fire, seeing a shadow, like another person. "Who is that?" He croaked, his first words in a long time, his voice cracking on each and every word. He had his hands to his sides, clenched into tight balls, in protection. The shadow stepped slightly closer to reveal that it was a woman, slender, curved slightly, large breats... The figure leaned against the wall of the alley. He stepped forwards, trying to take a closer look. The woman was wearing tight jeans and shirt, the shirt seemed to strain over her breasts, buldging over what looked like double 'D's. The shirt was low cut, long, blood red hair hanging over her shoulders, bundles of whivh hung in front of her. She stepped forward, flicking the hair behind her back and walking forward towards him. She placed her hand on his face in a seducing way, staring into his eyes, moving her head forward as into kiss him, showing pearlwhite teeth... Blood. It splurted from the man's sorrowful neck, splashing gleefully onto the georgous face of the woman. She released her fangs, the body dropping to the cold ground, a small trickle of blood dripping from two small pierce marks on his neck. The woman whiped her mouth of the small amount of blood and skipped back down the alley gleefully. "Just going to leave him their, eh?" A voice from a fire escape said down to the blood-haired girl. The man was tall and muscular, leaning on the hand rail and smiling down at her. His short brown hair was spiked, and a topless prostitute humg over the railing, her back bent awkwardly, dead and bearing the same marks as the other victum. "Oh, quite, Leone, and what are you going to do with that prostitute?" She said back in her defense, pointing out the dead body that discusted her so. Had he slept with her first? She wondered, disgusted how he used woman, even if they were prostitutes and she felt they deserved it. Leone recognised the look. "Aw, come on Olivia!" Leone said, tossing the body easily onto the ruffled sheets of the bed indoors. "You're the one going and looking for bums!" He said, frowning slightly at her glare. "At least I give them what they were expecting, not tricking them!" He said, remarking at her style of feeding. "Hmph!" Olivia murmered, folding her arms and leaning on one leg slightly more than the other. "Yours is none better!" She said, frowning at her brother that barely resembled her. "I guess I'll go get rid of that one." She said, skipping away from her brother to the corpse of the man. She dragged him to the fire he had started himself and, with difficulty, lugged his body into the flaming can, cremating him, unnoticed by human kind. Leone watched the flames lick the sky with their ashes, sending tiny lights into the sky, as if to help the heavens see their way at night, but dissapeared before reaching the height. He stared at them intently, the rest of the world dissapearing.... "Did you hear me?" Olivia asked, shaking Leone viciously. "What? Sorry... Didn't catch that..." Leone stated, blinking to bring him back to earth. "I asked what you were going to do with the body!" Olivia reppeated, anoyed. "Why do you always drift off like that?" "Sorry..." Leone said, closing his eyes and scratching the back of his head, slightly embarrased. "I don't know... might stage a different killing... What do you think?" "Pft! I'm just making sure the town doesn't find out about us vampires!" Olivia fumed, glaring at Leones gentle green eyes. "Fine! I'll bury her somewere!" Annoyed at his sister's constant nagging, Leone walked away, his hand burried in his pockets almost as deeply as the prostitute would be into the soil... He reached the building he had broken into were he murdered the prostitute and quickly climbed the stairs and jumped through the window, even though the door was still ajar. He slung the body over his shoulder, her lifeless corpse shaking with each step, still stripped topless. He jumped down the stairs and landed in the alley, walking back farther into the alley. :Hmmm..." He said as he realised it was a dead end. He ripped a few bricks out and replaced them with the body, cramming it into the whole in a disgusting contorted fashion, the body dillapitated. "Thats gross." Olivia said, causing Leone to jump. "And the smell?" She had snuck up on him without him noticing, continueing her nagging as always... "That sucks for the paople who smell it, doesn't it?" Leone said rudely, ramming the first brick back ing place, picking up another. Olivia only shook her head and frowned at him. "They'll find that body I bet..." She said, rolling her eyes and walking away to find a spot to hide during the day, as to not get scalded by the light of the day...
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 2:54 pm
(Ybbor, I'm going to copy that into word so I can correct the mistakes and then I'll add to it before posting the next bit ok? Going through it carefully should help me get ideas. ^_^ Feel free to delete this once you've read it.)
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 3:07 pm
((I shoulda read it over more carefully... Sorry! Next time it shall be better! >.<))
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 2:56 pm
Chapter One The Hunters [continued] Leone slapped his hands together, brushing off dust from the bricks. He examined his work carefully, checking for any body reminence. He found a small piece of flesh handing out between the crack of two bricks and frowned. He ripped the piece off and ate it, slightly dried out from lack of blood. He smirked at the taste and gulped it down and turned down the alleyway. In the distance, he saw Olivias rough outline in the under a street light. Damned lights... He thought as he blinked, not used to seeing in light, more acustomed to his night vision. He finally decided to jog up to her, to figure out were she was going to hide for the night. "I have no clue were I'm hiding tonight, Leone." Olivia said, used to her brother always asking were she was going. "But you always do..." Leone wined, upset that she didn't know were she was going, meaning he didn't know were he was going. "Time you figure out things for yourself!" She replied sharply, as if stabing an arrow into his back. Leone wined softly, looking around, trying to see a good hiding spot, spotting a two storry house for sale, a sign infront bearing the phrase 'Must Sell now!" Bellow it, it described the contents, two bedroom one and a half bath, the ussual in this town. He looked up to see a small wooden pane, just big enough for a human, or should he think vampire, to fit through. The pane had been nawed away by squirels and birds, probably a place to sleep for the harsh winter months soon to come. Leone smiled, scaling the building easily and squeezing himself through the hole to find himself in the atic of the house. He signalled for Olivia to come up, considering her gaze never left him as he had climbed. She crawled up, slightly more difficult for her then it had been for him, but fit through the hole much easier. Leone pressed a finger to his lips to signalise silence, looking around to find the attic room completely empty, aparently from the move, the only other thing in the room was a small nest in a corner, some resting animal burowed inside, probably nocturnal as well. Silently as a cat, he opened the hatch door and jumped down silently, landing easily on the carpeted floor bellow. All the doors were ajar, stripped clean in the one-story house. "Must of already moved out..." he whispered to himself, still checking inside every room for any signs of life. All clear. There was nothing at all in this house. He jumped slightly to reach the ladder and pull it down the ascend into the atic, why take chances down stairs when there might be people here in the day? He pulled back up the ladder and closed the hatch, smiling at his sucess, keeping his voice down, just under regular speech and above a whisper. "Theres no one here." He stated bluntly to Olivia, who had sat and leaned against the wall next to the wooden pane, as to not get afected by the sunlight during the day. "But there might be some people here during the day, the house is for sale, so we're staying up here." Olivia blinked in surprise of her brother's sucessful find. "Alright." She said, maintaining the same voice sound. "So we'll be fine up here." She said, letting her eyelids droop slightly. She yawned, covering her mouth to muffle the noise slightly. "I'm going to sleep..." She said, resting her head on the cold,wooden floor boards. "Night..." With theese words, the sun slowly rose fom the hills past the pane, shedding light over the landscape. Leone's eyes shut tightly, leaving small slits to see through. He put his hand infront of his face in protection, dashing over to a corner were there was no sunlight, protected from the rays. His hand was redened slightly from the sharp rays and he frowned. Stupid sun... He murmered, tossing his thick jacket over the pane, blocking the rays and leaving the room dark as he drifted off to sleep....
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:58 pm
Chapter OneThe Hunters [continued] Sirens flared and lights flashed... In a flurry of red, blue, white, and gold, a mixture of police lights and cameras, could almost blind anyone who stepped past the floresent tape that marked off the small alleyway; a crime scene. There had been a noise complaint of loud barking comming from the end of the alleyway. A large Husky with miss-match eyes, one blue the other a bright green, who was barking, not at an animal, but at a wall. A plain, mortar cracked wall. A few hours into the investigation, they picked up a terrifying smell. They bricks were cautiously ripped from wall, until it slowly stated to reveal what it hid.... The body stank horribly and made the police officers retreat at the first wiff of it. The bodie seemed well pressurved, but drained of all of the blood. There were two small puncture markings on her kneck; her short, tight denim skirt was ruffled, her underwear missing, as well as a covering for her breasts. "It seems she was a prostitute." A man with a receeding hairline, flecked with gray, stated, shining a small light on the prostitute's body. "It's odd, however... There are no stab or gun shot wounds.. She shows no sense of struggle or heart attack... It seems the cause of death was from these two puncture marks," He said, running a circle around the marks on her kneck with his gloved finger, "As if she was... biten...." He stood up and tucked the flashlight away in his front pocket. "I want an optopsy report right away." He said, and with that, the hunters had become the hunted.
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:44 pm
Leone's eyes snapped open when he heard laughter. Almost instantly afterwards his eyes turned to thin slits in the dim lights. He growled under his breath as he flexed his stiff, burnt hand. Time to investigate. Not standing up fully, in an odd half squat, he made his way to the hatch that lead to the rest of the house they had taken shelter in. He opened it a crack and almost dropped it when a thin beam of light shot across his eyes. But just before he dropped it he shot his hand under the door so that it wouldn't make any noise. His eyes were watering as he opened the door again to find the source of the previous laughter. There was another burst soon after he had looked, but it wasn't because they saw him. There were three people standing by couches in the sitting room, a bottle of wine uncorked. They were each holding a glass of wine and laughing. The loudest of the laghter came from a woman, at least, if not more, than six months pregnant. Among here was a man, probably the father of the child, and the realator selling the house. The pregnant woman probably shouldn't have been having any alchohol. Ah well, her problem, not Leone's. Leone blinked several times after closing the trap door with the tiniest of all sqweaks, not audibly over their laughter. He leaned back away from the prior light. Seems like we won't be here too long.... Might need to find a new place tonight... He pondered, not wanting to tip off the mortals bellow. Although there was no red mark, the line of light that had shone over his eyes had made his skin feel stiff, almost like the opposite of how a human would get a tan mark from wearing sunglasses in the sun for too long. None the less, Leone proped himself against the wall, under the window of the attic. He closed his eyes and he tried to stop the gears in his head from spinning, blocking out the noise of laughter until he was asleep, until the moon showed it's face and security. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I may not be on for a few days and I'm gonna need some help with this. I may not be one because leaning over the Computer screen isn't good for my back and I've been having som serious back problems.
But to go with the storry, I'm going to kill off Leone. I don't know how and when but I know it will involve the police but to make it happen now seems to abrupt since he was just introduced, Olivia is supposed to have a connection with her brother, and I will Illude to him later on... >.<
Anyways, if you have any suggestions, put them in the vampiric writers block, and comments may go in the comments section.... Enjoy...?
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