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'Tomorrow'

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Torokukat
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 8:00 pm


The yesterday that I forsake,
Has become the tomorrow that I shun.
The childish me clings to now,
But it's already tomorrow.
This desolate place I call "My Sanctuary",
I should leave behind, but I can't,
Even though you're calling me.
Why won't you just stop calling me?

Don't touch my heart-
I don't care how much I love you,
I don't want you to love me.

If I were to fall to pieces,
Would you give me your hand?
Or, if I were to leave,
Would you look for me?
Or would you even know I loved you?
And if I were to die tomorrow,
Would you cry for me?
My heart's too busy being stubborn right now.

Don't touch my heart-
I don't care how much I love you,
I don't want you to love me.

Don't touch my heart-
I don't care how much I love you,
'Cause you'll always love her,
And I don't blame you.
I don't blame you.
So I don't want you to love me.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:10 pm


hmmm... nice. Question: What was your outlook for the tempo? Was it a fast song or a slower one?

Shirashima
Vice Captain


Torokukat
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 2:32 pm


Slow, at most, Andante.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:28 pm


I see. Thats what I figured. Its good. I like it a lot. It makes you think... which is what really good songs make you do.

Shirashima
Vice Captain


Torokukat
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:01 pm


Thank you. ^_^
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Songs, poems, rants.... all is welcome. Come bare your soul!

 
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