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Gale Of The Seven Weapons

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Kyo Emiya

PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 9:32 am


I'll change the title as soon as come up with something fitting. I'm writing this for a video game I'm self-producing. Any feedback is great. If you choose "Other" in the poll please suggest your idea for the adaptation.

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The Title Is kinda a spoiler at the moment, but feel free to suggest a change to it.

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Troubling Circumstances


"When?"

He stood there, looking at the ground, seeing nothing but eternal darkness. Death filled cries resounded everywhere around him. Comrades and enemies alike fell and died a horrible death.

"Dammit! When!?"

Hate filled his eyes for this senseless war. He stood there glaring, yet glaring at nothing. Moments passed before the order to retreat was given. Three spearmen came at him head on.

"Tell me when, damn you!"

He charged at them, his sword gripped tightly in his right hand. They thrust towards his stomach, but he sidestepped. He stabbed one spearman, cut down the second across the chest while ripping out his sword from the first, and split in two the third at the waste. He stood there, cluching his sword even tighter, and cried out at the top of his lungs. Cutting down another, he sprinted of towards the randevous.
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"Why?"

"I'm sorry, princess, what did you say? Forgive me, but I wasn't paying attention."

"Why won't the war end?" Emily began to cry. "Why don't they just quit already!?"

Samson sighed. "I recall telling you before that we are in no position to question it."

"Yes, we do!" Now cold fury was added to the great emotional mixture. "Why won't father just quit!? Nothing has been gained, and we are only losing!"

"But I recall there being a great victory yesterday in Kanch. The Vors have been retreating more and more recently." He seemed almost happy.

"I see," said Emily. He tone seemed devoid of any emotion. There was a long pause. "Mr. Samson, I wish to be alone for awhile."

"Very well." His tone was level. "If you need anything, I will be outside." He walked out the double doors and shut them gently.

An eerie silence took over. Seconds passed before breaking when Emily collapsed on her bed, her tearful eyes staring into the cold white ceiling. "You fool." Sadness spoke. "You were asking the wrond person." She closed her eyes, and within minutes she fell into a deep sleep.
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Emily, what are you thinking?

A gust blew over the black-stained plains. To think that such a once beautiful landscape could be reduced to this in one night. And similar events were taking place in many other places. Villages burned and pillaged. The fires of war trully spread beyond the fields of battle.

The battle last night wasn't as bloody as usual. Even though he lost several hundred men here and there, overall the loses were much smaller. Before the deathtolls would be in the thousands. It seemed the losses were dropping as the war dragged on.

"Almost seven hundred in one night," James said to himself. "Maybe they lost even more."

"What was that, my lord?" Captain Trans quickly glanced in James's direction.

"Nothing. Just thinking aloud." With that, Trans slowly turned away. At least, thought James, I did not have to face him. James brought his head up and stared into the horizon and the setting sun.
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"I need to get their morale up, now!" shouted Captain Torn. "If this plan goes well, we could end this war in a month!"

"But sir, we've been at it for who knows how long. If we keep up like this, we won't have any men for a plan."

"Maggot! We are almost in position! Just three more days, and the Svans will be crushed!" Torn turned his back on the lowly soldier. "Now get out of my sight." The Luitenant hurriedly walked out of the tent. As soon as he was sure he was alone he gave a huge sigh. He's been fighting on the front for seven months. This "new" battallion were nothing but failures looking for some quick glory or easy pay. Three months and already on the verge of collapsing, and good help was hard to find. The local schools do not provide the talented men they once had. That is, since the war began.

"I really need a vacation," said an exhausted voice."All I can do now is look forward to the next battle..." He sighed again. "...and hope it would be the last."
PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 9:56 pm


Chapter 1
The Journey Begins


"Man, I'm starvin'," Veck complained. "I haven't had a job in weeks."

"What are you belly-aching to me for," asked the bartender. "Everyone's barely scraping it by as it is, so stop your whining."

"I can't help it. Come on, buddy, show some charity. Even just a little, please?"

"Sorry, but no. I don't want any trouble. If you're so broke go sell that sword of yours. I don't think it's of any use, especially for you."

Veck's expression changed from hungry to dark in an instant. Even his meek, begger - like tone changed. "There are reasons why I carry this sword..." He got up and walked out the door. I can't give this up yet, he thought. He turned the corner and noticed a woman in a white cloak, her hood covering most of her face, speaking with the stableman. She handed him a bag. The fellow stood shocked for a few seconds, then dashed into the stable and returned with a lean looking horse. A minute later the woman was riding off towards the west gate.

How interesting, thought Veck. He approached the stableman. "That's a nice bag you've got there. What's in it?" The stableman didn't seem to notice. He was off in his own world, staring emptily in the same direction the girl went off.

The bag contained a large sum of gold.
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Corrin let out a long, loud yawn. "I'm so bored." He looked very cute with the bland expression on his face. He stared up from his bed to the ceiling, watching several tiny balls of fire dance around each other, flying close to the wooden beams of the attic.

The sound of footsteps came through the door. Shock overtook Corrin as he jolted upright, the tiny flames winking out. Someone's coming, he thought. He jumped onto one of the wooden highbeams, crouching low in anticipation for his new guest.

Along minute passed before a tall, black coated man with a longsword on his left side waltzed in. Now! Corrin leapt from the beam and crashed head on onto the "intruder."

A long silence loomed over the pair as Corrin sat on the man's head. A muffled voice resounded as the man struggled to get up. "That voice sounds familiar..." pondered Corrin with a hint of playfulness in his voice. No sooner than he finished Veck threw Corrin off, gasping for breath.

"You...brat..." Veck mouthed between gasps. He took a minute to catch his breath. "Grow up already! What's with you and your little 'surprise attacks?'"

"Awwww, lighten up." The childish grinon his face was adorable. "There's no fun in just saying 'hi"or 'hello' now, is there?"

Adorable...except to Veck. "Your 'fun' is hazardous to my health, you devil."

"Demon, not devil."

"In any case, it looks like it's time to leave."

Corrin's facial expression became serious. "What happened."

"A girl bought a horse."

"Maybe a young whore managed to steal enough out of a man's purse."

"A fast, healthy horse."

"Several wallets."

"Paid in an ornately decorated, purple velvet purse, with the Senikarth family seal on it."

Corrin took a moment to let it sink in. "You...you're sure you don't want to claim what is rightfully yours? I mean..."

"Not in the least interested. You know my plan?"

"How much do you think she has?"

"It's not about the money, this time."

"We're almost broke! How much do you think we have left?!"

"To tell you the truth, I've be holding out on you."

"...What?"

"We have two purses left for emergencies."

"Wouldn't..." Corrin took a deep breath. "Wouldn't our current situation count as an emergency?"

"Not really. I'm not close to succumbing to starvation, nor are you, and the main is enough to pay for this room and keep my horse adaquately fed."

"Why you..." Anger shone across Corrin's face, but Veck ignored it.

"We should leave now, before the gates are shut."

"I'll go on ahead." He got up, picked up the longsword as long as he is in the corner of the room, and started for the door. "Which gate did she go through?"

"West."

"I'll meet you there." He openned it halfway before stopping. "By the way..."

"Yeah, what is it?"

"Sorry for the 'whore' comments." He quickly closed the door behind him and sprinted down the hallway, down the stairs , and out the door to the inn towards the west gate.

Kyo Emiya

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