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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 9:49 am

This is a Little mermaid type Story. This story is loosly based on the classical version and really loosly based of teh Disney version. there will be bits and parts that seem to come from the Disney version.
This story will have a few original characters.

If you want to review please check out my Fanfiction account.And review there please

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3810502/1/Gundanium_Mermaid

If you want to watch the classical version please watch
Little Mermaid : The Classical Version

Songs in this Fic:
Only Hope - Sung by Mandy Moore - From teh Movie A Walk to Remember

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 9:55 am

The sun shone through the deep blue waters of the ocean, penetrating the darkness and glittering off the bodies of the aquatic creatures moving through her body. Creating a harmonious melody of light. A creature rare and widely known swam along adding to its wonders. The creature? A mermaid. The body of a fish and the torso and head of a human. How these creatures came about has never been know. But they existed.

Well that is what my friend would have written had she the choice, but she can neither write nor speak. She suffers through many pains that I cannot help her with, one of which is that she is a mermaid and I am a merman. She chose to live among the creatures called man and bear the pains that her choice cost. She has as much time in the world until her true love marries another. She cannot use her, what used to be melodious, voice. Every step she takes is like sticking a thousand needles in her leg. All of this came about simply by over exerted curiosity, for if she had never disobeyed her father and grandmother this never would have happened.

Excerpt from the Journal of Duo Maxwell.
The Head of Atlantian Security

“Youko(1)! Wait up! Wait Up! We aren't allowed to go that far yet! you know we have to wait until you get your Pearl of Age!” yelled a brown haired boy with purple eyes.
“I know that, YOU know that and yet all of my sisters already have their pearls. They come back saying how the wind sings to them and gently caresses their skin. How the Moon has this soft glow that it never hurts to look at it. Duo, I WANT to see the surface, I want to feel the wind and to see the moon that glows so soft. My sisters all got their Pearls when they reached fifteen. I am eighteen and STILL haven't received mine.” Youko ranted. It was a familiar rant that she had said many times over the past two years, and often heard by her best friend and partner in mischief Duo.

She turned around. Her black hair floating in the ocean. “I know you are tired of my ranting, and I know that the only reason Gran hasn't given me my pearl is that I am the last of grandchildren to come of age. I also know that they don't want to give it to me because of the long history of trouble making I have gotten into with you.” she added gloomily, her green tail swishing back and forth in the still water, as she rubbed her arms anxiously.

Duo knew that this was true. Being the last in a line of daughters meant being treated as the baby even if you were twenty. And that took it's own toll on his best friend. Ever since they met she had been treated always younger than what she was. Her parents and guardians hoping that she would stay small in the mind if not the body. The two trouble maker had met because of a horrible accident.

The Sea witch Dorthy Catalonia had made the sea into an angry beast. Howling with rage and turning the water black with silt and sand. The only buildings that were safe were inside the Kingdom of Atlantica. One of the Buildings were just barley inside the border and in one of the more poorly built areas too. The Building was an orphanage and a church combined. Mer-orphans had decided to go out and play and the Father in charge of the place and a devote believer in gods, had just brought in many children that had been stealing from the city vendors to survive. He had accidentally caught the leader by colliding with him. After that the Father had been kind enough to pay off the fee the bunch had taken and brought them home, to the Maxwell church. The group took little time becoming civilized and almost all of the thieves were adopted out, except for Duo. He had been an unruly little beast of a mer-child. Trying his hardest to make Father Maxwell mad at him, to get him to throw him out, Back into the streets. Father Maxwell never gave up hope that Duo could be loved, If only by him and His wife Sister Helen.

It was one day that they were talking about the Sea Gods and those that live above the sea that Duo blurted out in a rushed sentence, “I only know of one God and that is the only God I believe in, Shinigami, the God of Death.” Sister Helen asked why and he responded back, “The God of Death is the only God that plays with our lives. He comes unseen and he always leaves with those that are precious to you. For Death is a certain thing but you never know when it will happen.” she said quietly. After that statement a little girl ran through the church.
“PAPA MAX!” the child cried out.
“Princess! What are you doing here? Is you Father visiting again?” The stunned Father asked. The girl nodded.
“Uh huh, yup he is here, he brought more supplies for you to have. Ne Father? Who is this boy?” she asked suddenly.
“His name is Duo. Duo This is the Youngest princess Of Atlantia, Princess Yuoko Atlantica Triton The seventh and last daughter to King of Atlantica.”
“You can call me Youko, if you want. I don't like being called Princess...it makes you sound as if you are either mad or are babying me, I don't like that.” She smiled. Her blue eyes shining with happiness.
“I am Duo, I may run, I may Hide, but I NEVER tell a lie.” Duo said with equal happiness. They had both seen mischief in each other's eyes and Youko started visiting Duo everyday, or at least she did until the church was destroyed, and Duo was the only survivor.

The Sea Witch had created a strong storm one day while they were playing near an octopus's garden. When the storm hit, they hid the cave. When it was over, they had to dig their way out. When they got back to the Church the building was demolished and Sister Helen's top half was sticking out from under a pile of rock. She had just enough life to tell them that Duo was the only one left and that Father Maxwell had been swept away by the storm and most likely had died.

Youko saw Duo's eyes fill with extreme sorrow as his only mother figure faded away in his arms. she swore that even if Father Maxwell was still alive out there somewhere, she would make sure that he was prepared to deal with it, as if he was dead. She didn't want to see her best friend worry himself sick trying to find him. If they ever did find him, then Duo would be so Happy, but if they never did, then he wouldn't have to deal with the pain then.

Yuoko took Duo back to her home. She told her Grandma what had happened and asked if Duo could stay at the Palace. It was agreed but only under one condition, that in the future Duo would train to be her bodyguard. Youko had no problem with that. At least until she realized that he was old enough already to take classes and to train. There was hardly anytime for them to spend together, but when they did get together, they pulled the funniest pranks on the whole Palace. There was this one prank that involved a whole lot of seaweed and a punch of shells. Her sisters opened up their bedroom door to find a 'Sea monster' fall out onto them...All eleven of them screamed.

It was often then not that Youko would end up tending Duo's wounds and bruises. The Palace Guards trained him hard and fast, Making him learn all styles of fighting that they had. Within ten years, Duo had become the Head of Atlantian Security. And now the troublesome two were thicker than blood.

That was how they had met. There was only one surprise for Duo. One day while they were goofing off Yuoko had decided to start singing. Duo had urged her not to sing in front of her Grandma or her Dad. If she did she would be put into concert after concert, never earning herself a moment's respite, and what free time they did have would be taken away to only Hello's and Goodbye's

“Oh come on Duo just a few moments on the surface please! I should have seen it at least two years ago but i let my family control me and now three have passed. Duo I know you never got to see the surface either. Please! Please with a seaweed parfait on top!” she begged.

“How can I say no to a seaweed parfait? Only five minutes Youko-chan that is IT I mean it. Until you get your Pearl, Five Minutes is it.” he scolded, gently hugging her. Youko's smile shone all the way up to her blue eyes, causing them to smile brightly. It had to be one of her most brightest and most happy smile he had seen in a long time. “Yeah Lil' sis we go to the surface tonight at midnight. Be ready. I will sneak you out and we can admire the moon and feel the wind.”

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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 9:59 am

It was hard waiting for midnight to come that night. Especially since her family decided to keep and extra careful watch on her. There was a witches storm that night. you and Duo were worried that it would cause a delay in their departure. It ended minutes before midnight. Youko swam around Duo, laughing and giggling like she was ten years younger. Duo was just happy to see her that happy as well.

As they made their way to the surface, you saw a black shadow far above them. Her curiosity getting the better of her, and Dragging Duo's along too. She swam faster than before to see what had made that huge shadow. A bright flash and a feel of a thundering boom shocked the two just before they broke out of the water. Another bright flash and a flash of red that looked like an anemone was briefly seen by both of them. The book that followed after made the two dive back under the water for a short time. They swam to a nearby rock and just sat and watched the flashes of light and booming noises.

amazed by the lights and sounds they almost forgot about the moon and the wind until a strong gust a wind breathed across the two. Youko shivered. The wind was caressing her skin, and at the same time it had such a sorrowful melody to it as it blew across her face. The sorrowful melody made her look up at the sky. Thousand of twinkling lights stared back at her, as well as a large pale circle in the sky issuing forth a soft luminous light that bathed their pale skins. Duo sighed in happiness. Sure it had been longer than five minutes but he was hardly thinking about that. The wind and the moon was so relaxing and melodious, that he felt like he was in heaven.

Another flash of red light went off and this time they saw a ship! Oh it almost paled in comparison to the ships they had seen on the floor far beneath them, but then again, maybe it floating across the water with some sort of music echoing forth from it made a difference. The two gave each other a daring grin and started racing toward the ship. Duo won, having more endurance and more strength than the youngest princess.

Youko found a rope to pull herself up near the deck, Duo followed. There were two-leggers dancing! It was absolutely amazing and intoxicating, at the same time. To both the mer-folk it looked like a hypnotizing mating dance, but still it was lovely.

“Wow! amazing!” Youko whispered in amazement.
“Yeah! look at their faces! See the on that looks like stone statue? he is..” he never got to finish his sentence as suddenly a large four legged creature decided to give him a french-kiss. Youko was laughing. She knew her friend's preferences was more towards the male end of the species, but the creature suddenly deciding to attack him like that was funny. Especially since Duo had turned the most amazing shade of green mixed with red.

The creature was suddenly called away with a whistle and Duo was sputtering. “Th-That was m-my FIRST kiss!” This only made Youko laugh harder. She had to dive under the water again so her voice wouldn't carry onto the ship. When she could control herself she went back up to watch the two-leggers some more.
“Duo!” she suddenly hissed in excitement. “The blond one! the one with Sea colored eyes! Oh Duo! he – he is gorgeous!”

Duo looked over the crowd and saw who she was talking about. It was too bad that she saw him first. The blond was standing next to Mr. statue and two others. The ones next to him looked just as delicious to him. One had jet black hair and looked more dark than his companions, and the other had a weird freaky hair thing going on. He had to admit it looked cool. As he watched them closer he noticed the looks between Mr. black hair and Mr. weird hair, well they were taken with each other, the way Jet black kept stealing glances at Weird Hair and vice versa.

“Yeah sis, Look we have spent enough time on surface lets go before the storm hits.” he said as he sniffed the air.

“Storm?? Wha-” she paused noticing the odd smell in the air and some darker clouds coming in suddenly. “Duo! Lets watch them from a distance a bit more...Please?” she begged, making her eyes turn soft and tearing them up, knowing that Duo could never resist them. He gave in. they made their way back to the rocks they had been watching from earlier When the storm suddenly hit.

The Sky was filled with rain that stung, and Loud cracking thunder and long branch like Lightning. it was amazing to watch and both Youko and Duo got a rush just watching on their rock. Until they saw on of the branches hit the tall pole. There was a loud CRACK sound and a loud BOOM at the same time. The pole was burning like crazy. It suddenly fell over and crashed on the the deck where the two-leggers had been dancing.

Pieces of wood from the railing was flung into the sea and. there was screaming and yelling. it was utter chaos. Youko gave Duo a worried look, and he returned the look. They both dived into the sea and rushed back towards the ship they had just left not an hour ago.

By the time they got there the creatures were yelling for five names. There was a splash and only four names being called out. Two more splashes were heard and only two names were left. They were yelling for Quatre and Wufei. There was a Loud explosion and tons of red flashed and loud booming going off. The Duo and Yuoko dived under the water to avoid the noise and the falling debris. Suddenly there was no ship! It was all in pieces and falling from the sky. The two rushed to the surface to see if they could find the two that the two-leggers were looking for. Looking all around them and occasionally diving under the water yielded nothing.

Duo saw a hand suddenly slip under the water and rushed to save whichever the hand belonged too. Diving down quickly to save the two-legger. Duo had no problem brining him up to the surface, but had a problem keeping him up. it seemed this two-legger had a rock heavy bottom. At the same time Youko saw a glimpse of blond before it disappeared under the water as well. She rushed to get to him before he sunk too deep. pulling him back to the surface had been an ordeal for her. Keeping him up had been no problem for as soon as they reached the surface her floated.

They both swam towards the nearest shore, feeling the pulls of the tides of the waters in their bodies. It took them many hours to get there with the extra weight of the two-leggers, an the sun was rising in to a lovely dawn. Youko reached the shore first, seeing on how she had the more cooperative passenger. She waited in the shallow watter for Duo to bring his passenger. When they puled the two, two-leggers, so both were laying on sand only did they sit on the uncomfortable surface, that was beginning to itch their fins, and rest for a moment.

Yuoko sighed in relief. both the passengers were breathing and she started humming. It was a soft tune filled with joy and of happiness, The sorrows and fear of loosing, and at the same time relief. That tune was exactly how she was feeling. After catching just a few notes, Duo joined in. His baritone complimenting her sweet soprano voice. They just sat there, enduring the warming of the sand as well as the increasing itchiness.

They sat and hummed for a long time until voices were heard. Yuoko and Duo scrambled to get back into the sweet coolness of the water. they had just reached past the shallow water when a Group of ladies found the boys on the shore. they quickly gathering their wits and took the boys back into their building. It had a giant cross on it and was almost a pure white color.

Youko was happy that the two-leggers were safe and sound... But she was dreading on going home. By this time they were sure to be having breakfast, and missing their youngest daughter. Duo and Youko swam as fast as they could to get back to the Palace before they sent out the Royal Army to find them.

The two ran into her sisters first. Her sisters promised to help them get out of trouble...IF they told them what had happened and where they were. Youko gave Duo a look and took a deep breath.

“Now BEFORE you all flip and shout at Duo I was the one that dragged him into this mess.” she got all her sisters to nod. “ Now I will tell you AFTER you help me and Duo out...I don't want Daddy and Gran getting mad at you if you know where we were at before they scold me royally for being late...” her sisters promised.

Her sisters pushed both her and Duo in their closet with the leftovers and new pits of the 'monster' piled on top of them. with a strict order to 'sleep' the sisters locked her and Duo in the closet. after about ha;f and hour the doors were suddenly flung open and both Youko and Duo didn't have to pretend to rub their eyes in surprise. The King and Gran both hovered there looking a bit miffed and relieved at the same time.

“Daddy? what's wrong? I was sleeping.” Youko said in a childish yet tired voice. The king swept her up in a big hug.

“When you didn't show up for breakfast with the bottomless pit, We figured something was wrong... Your sisters claim to have seen you enter their dressing room last night and didn't see you come out... And by the looks of things you were planning another 'monster'.” he stated worriedly. Yuoko gave him a big hug.

“Yes Daddy, me and Duo got locked in here by accident and fell asleep...it would have never occurred to you to check their dressing room since I have my own...I am sorry for making you and Gran worry like that.” she said very apologetically.

After that, her father treated them to a second breakfast, were only Duo and Youko ate, while the others just nibbled for courtesy . After that Youko's father gave them the rules on pranking...again and let them off to wander the castle. The two entered her Sister's dressing Room and saw that all her sister's had gathered there...

You took another deep breath. Ready to explain to them.

“Duo and I went to the surface.” she said simply.

“WHAT! -Why!” they all shouted.

“You all got your Pearls when you were fifteen... I STILL haven't received mine. I am eighteen now... With you all talking about the surface constantly I wanted to see what it was like... And Duo will receive his pearl when I receive mine. It is not fair to both of us that because i am am the youngest that Gran Holds me back so i can be the kid forever in their eyes.” she stated. She got a murmur of surprise in response...

They hadn't realized their sister was that old. They also just realized that they had been bragging to her about the surface constantly ever since the oldest had gotten hers twelve years ago. Each looked down to at their tail-fin in shame.

“Well that wasn't all that happened. When we reached the surface, they were having some sort of mating dance...Although no mating was done...At least I don't think any was done. but It was amazing to watch.” She continued on about the celebration she saw and about the males that had caught both her's and Duo's attention. Each describing the one they saw and the one's that stayed near them. “ Then a Storm came out of nowhere! we slipped back to the rocks and just watched the storm! It was such a rush! Then A strike of lightning hit the ship-” she said as she went ahead and described the rescue of the two-leggers. “You see sisters. We not only broke the rule about surfacing but we broke the rule about meeting land dwellers.” she said calmly.

The sisters each realized something as they described the men. The two in front of them were in it deep...and they didn't know how deep yet.

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:06 am

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“Quatre, wake up... wake up Quatre. Quatre don't make me get Shenlong to give you a french kiss.” said an annoyed voice. Quatre woke straight up and out of bed.” You have your birthday today... We leave for the docks in two hours... Don't go back to sleep Prince.”

“Wufei! You know I don't want to go on that dang ship just to unveil that stupid statue that Rashid got made for me! AND PRINCE MY BUTT! You are a Prince too. As well as Trowa and Heero!” he yelled at the closing door. He sighed. Today was going to be a lo-ng day. He glanced longingly at his bed, but knew the moment he laid back down that dog would be up in his face trying to tango with his tongue, so he got dressed in a white open shirt and black comfortable pants, as well as comfortable yet sturdy shoes. He ran a comb through his short blond hair. He took one last look at himself in the mirror before he ordered three people, who were going to be VERY unhappy, to come aboard the ship with him. if he was going to suffer, he wasn't going to do it alone.

The party was going surprising well and Quatre was enjoying himself, a bit. When Rashid called everyone to gather at the starboard of the ship. Quatre REALLY didn't want to be there now. As soon as everyone was gathered, Rashid made an announcement.

“Today as we all know is Prince Quatre's twentieth Birthday. As most of you know Quatre has always been a kind and loving Prince, since he was toddling around. One of the best heirs this country has ever had. Well to commemorate his birthday the Maganac Corps. offered to build something for him. I suggested a statue and the idea hit it off with them. They asked me, as their leader to unveil it on the ship tonight.” he reached down to untie a knot and pulled the covering off the statue. It only looked vaguely like him... The only thing that looked like him was the head... The other looked like if they based it off some sort of drawing of a warrior or something. “Happy Birthday Prince Quatre!” Rashid shouted, as others joined in.

Quatre quickly left the deck an went to find his friends. When he found them, Heero was already trying to plot the destruction of the statue, while trying to figure a way to save the head...They all liked the head. When Quatre joined in, it quickly became, lets see who can plot the best way to destroy it period. The discussion was only paused briefly to look at the fireworks that just started. Quatre thought they looked like red weeping willows, and quickly got the others to see how he saw that.

Shenlong had been running free while on the ship and Wufei saw her suddenly dart over to an area and stay there for moments, wagging her tail rapidly. Wufei decided to save whatever poor animal Shenlong had found and called her over to him. Only to have Shenlong quickly jump on Quatre to make him fall over and try to kiss him, preferably in the mouth and not on his face. They heard laughter that was sweet sounding but decided that it was most likely one of the people on the ship.

Finally the group was relaxed and having a great time, when a sudden CRACK was heard and then a loud BOOM followed by the sound of the main mast splintering and catching fire. part of the mast crashed on to deck and shattered the railing as well as most of the deck boards. Everybody scrambled for the rowboats. Wufei, Quatre, Heero and Trowa all stayed back to make sure everyone got off safe. They were about to head into the last boat when on of the guests saw Shenlong near the wheel. Quatre and Wufei fought Heero and Trowa over getting the dog by saying they were smaller and thus much fast than the two taller Princes. Heero and Trowa dived into the water after they saw that Wufei and Quatre had thrown Shenlong onto the the lower deck and seen Shenlong jump off herself.

Right after Trowa and Heero jumped off, there was a loud explosions of fireworks. and Quatre and Wufei were nowhere to be seen. They searched the water for what seemed like forever, but never found a sign of either one of them, when Rashid pulled them both fighting forms into his rowboat and rowed them all back home.

It was quite a surprise when they got there that there was a cloister of nuns sitting on the docks. They told a story that they were heading out for their chores when they saw two males laying on the beach. They don't know how the two got there, but there were large grooves in the sand, which suggested that somebody dragged them out of the water. But there wasn't a soul around to see who had done it.

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They felt like they were being pulled, or guided. Quatre had the feeling of cruising on the water. He didn't have enough strength to open his eyes to see what was pulling him. But the body was warm against him and he was freezing. Wufei kept feeling like he was sinking and that somebody kept pulling him up. He was grateful to whoever kept saving him from being sunk, but he knew that he could swim as well as a rock.

When Quatre felt the warming sand beneath him he gave a sigh in relief. The sand was warmer than the body was, but he couldn't help but feel like he was missing something amazing. When Wufei felt the warm sand beneath him he also gave a sigh in relief, sand didn't make him feel like a falling rock. When they heard the two voices humming, they knew they could engrave it in their minds forever. If they ever heard the singing voices again they would recognize. It was the song they sang that made then give in to their weariness and fall into the dreamless sleep if only for moments. But something made them wake up again. The music was gone and a splash was heard and many frivolous voices came chattering upon them.

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When the two Princes awoke they saw a glimpse of a girl before they passed out again. When they awoke again, they found themselves at Quatre's Palace, tucked safe and sound in their beds.

Trowa was sitting on Wufei's bed and was actually asleep, holding on to his hand. Wufei saw that his lover had fallen asleep and the slightest movement from his hand would wake up the tall prince. Wufei just watched his face. It wasn't often that he got to watch his lover as he slept, but then again his had was asleep and he had an overwhelming urge to move it and wake it up, which he did.

Trowa muttered in his sleep and clutched the hand harder, opening one eye to make sure his lover was still there. He saw that he was awake and Wufei was smiling at him.
“Hey.” Trowa said lovingly
“Hey, yourself my Prince.” Wufei said with the same amount of love in his voice. “You know what...You need to sleep in more... I rarely ever get to watch your face as you sleep, but you watch mine all the time.” he added in a whine. This caused Trowa to laugh and hug his oriental lover.
“What happened?” Wufei decided to ask.
“The Ship was struck by lightning. Everybody was off except Heero, You, Quatre, and me. Somebody noticed that Shenlong was still near the wheel. You and Quatre fought me and Heero over it by saying that you two were lighter and faster than the both of us. We gave in. We saw Shenlong jump off the ship. But before you two could get off, the fire had reached the fireworks. The ship was decimated and we couldn't find either of you two. Rashid pulled me and Heero out of the water. We didn;t want to stop loking for the two of you and Rashid had seen our streangth start to fail.

When we reached the shore some nuns found the two of you on the shore. We don't know HOW you got to shore before we did. There was no current that could get you there that fast, and you were pulled up and away from the tide line.” He explained “You have both been out for three days. I was really starting to worry.”

“How is Quatre and Heero?” Wufei asked suddenly sitting up, and getting a bit dizzy from the sudden blood rush.
“Heero is fine... Quatre still hasn't woken up.” Trow replied a bit concerned for his fair-haired friend. He held his Lover lightly letting him become used to being elevated before he released him again.

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Heero had decided that since Wufei had somebody to look after him when he woke up, that Quatre needed one too. Heero decided that he could read while looking after his friend. He was in the middle of a rather exciting part of the book he was reading. The stoic character of the book was right about to do battle with the masked fighter, when Quatre woke up. Heero mentally glared at the younger Prince but marked his place int the book and went to reassure his friend.

“Heero? Wh-” Quatre tried to say but realized that his mouth was as dry and wood. Heero gave him a cup of water that had been at his bed side.

“The ship blew up.” Heero explained. Heero told Quatre how they had found him and Wufei. He also told him that he was pulled above the tide line.

“Heero did you find the person who dragged us up?” Quatre heard himself ask.

“No. Nobody saw who did it.” was the brief answer that he received.

Who could have saved us? I remember hearing the most beautiful song. Wait. There was two voices. A sweet soprano and a baritone... A fisherman's couple maybe? I remember being cold but at the same time warm. I remember the feel of rushing water against my chest. I-I can't remember much else. - WAIT! A remember a silhouette of a person! Who could it have been!? Quatre thought to himeself. Pushing his memory to remember.

“Heero, there were two people... A soprano and a baritone. They sang to us. It was a most lovely song... and I remember being pulled in the water... But that is it.” Quatre's wearisome voice called out as he decided it was best time for another nap.

Well that is certainly something new. Trowa came by earlier and didn't say anything like that...But I doubt that owa pushed Wufei for anything that He remembered...I ... I shall stow it away for later use.Heero decided to himself

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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:11 am

It had been weeks since Youko had seen the blond human. She had been gathering all sorts of Lore on humans and their habits. There wasn't much, except that Humans were never nice and they ate all fish creatures. Humans were never to be trusted. She asked her father why and all she got was 'humans killed your mother.' not much of a response... But did humans really kill her mother, or was it having too many children to bear that killed her?

Everyday had found her singing the song she had sang to the humans. Duo had begun to do the same, but thought better about it, The other guards would most likely think he was up to something if he went around humming and singing like an idiot. So he only did when he was around Youko. But he was thinking about the brown haired human, the one who he referred to as Mr. Statue. He had gone far enough to try and draw what the human looked like. he thought it had turned out all right... so he drew what he could remember of Youko's Blond angel looked like. He gave the finished result to Youko and was glad that he did. He had gotten one of her rare smiles again.

Indias, Youko's oldest sister, had felt the most guilty out of all the sisters since she had been given her pearl first and had bragged the most. She decided to apologize by finding out where the human, that her sister cherished, lived. She had the dolphins help. They knew to look for a Blond human that was surrounded by four men. She had given the description of the men just as Youko and Duo had given her. So far she had no luck, But the dolphins thought this was a 'game' and thus the game would spread to the other dolphins, so it was only a matter of time.

Yuoko's other sisters had begun to pester their dad and their Grandma about why Youko hadn't received her pearl yet. Each sister had gotten them to realize how old Youko exactly was. They were one step away from going to a neighboring mer-kingdom to get their king to give their sister a pearl if their father and Grandmother did not give it to her.

It was exactly one week later when Indias had gotten news about where the boy lived. She was going to go and tell Youko, but something a bit bigger stopped her, her father.

“Where exactly are you going in such a rush, and with such news about a human” Her father had spat out the last worrd like it was venom.

“Father, not ALL humans are evil and want to exterminate the mermaid race like you say. After all, wasn't the Sea-Witch Dorthy once loved and cherished above all, but them she turned intothe dark arts and became so evil? There has to be some good ones to balance out the bad Father. And to whom I take this news to is no business of yours.” She replied curtly

Her father was a little taken back. Indias had never spoken to him like that. So startled was he, that he didn't reach out to grab her when she swam past.

Indias rushed past her father. It would do no good to get found out now, especially when they were so close to getting Youko her Pearl.

Her father called out, “WAIT A MOMENT INDIAS! I have some news for you to spread to your sisters. Youko will be given her Pearl tonight, Everything has been arranged for. Make sure that you and your sisters are well prepared and make sure Youko is presentable, as well as Duo.” her father commanded and then left. Startling Indias.

Now there is NEWS! Indias thought. She rushed off to tell her sisters. Youko being the last that was told.

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“Youko!” Metti, another one of Youko's sisters, called out. “Guess what!”

“What?” Youko asked surprised. Metti had never made it a point to seek her out that often.

“You are getting your pearl tonight! Dad gave Indias the news and she spread it on to the rest of us. We drew clams on who would tell you. Oh! And Duo is supposed to be present and presentable too. Hurry to our dressing room! We got work to do. Indias is getting Duo, he will meet us there.” she said scattering the facts around a bit, but getting the point across.

“REALLY? Oh Metti you aren't being mean are you? Your not just saying this? I really am getting my pearl tonight and so is Duo?” Youko asked worriedly

“No I am not being mean, and Yes it is true. Now hurry up, the party starts soon.”

Youko rushed to her sister's dressing room. Inside was Duo. he was getting his hair done. Yuoko glided nervously over to him and took the next seat. Duo looked like he was in heaven. Indias and Sara cleaning his hair, deeply scrubbing it and relaxing his scalp. Youko was in for the same treatment, only Metti and Hoshi did that for her. Coral decorated Duo's hair, while Riches did Youko's. Just as the last hair decoration was in place did their escorts come to collect them for the ceremony.

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The castle was beautiful. Their escorts showed then to the room where the ceremony would take place. That room was the most lovely of them all. Youko and Duo had never been allowed into that room before. It was only for the mer-people that had gotten their Pearls. There was a lovely garden that was the envy of the sea. There were so many Mer-people around that Duo and Youko's heads were both spinning in delight. Duo received his pearl first.

Duo was nervous. But the look on Youko's face calmed him. Youko looked as giddy as he felt moments ago, and that was a contagious feeling. The ceremony for him was simple. He just had to re-swear his vows as Youko's guardian and protector. He was given a pearl that matched his eyes, a deep purple that bordered on black. The pearl was set in the hilt of a dagger. Duo accepted the pearl dagger without a second thought. As he receded from the stand Youko was called up.

Youko was nervous. She didn't know what she was supposed to do. But the look in Duo's eyes was of fierce joy, that she ignored her feelings and glided to the stand where Duo was moments ago.

Her father and grandmother both straightened up a bit. This was their last child to receive her pearl. They didn't want to give her the Pearl but with their other children supporting her they had no choice.

“My People. Today we give out the pearl to the my last daughter. May she always be happy.” Her father said with elegance. “I have but one thing to ask her before she receives her pearl.” He looked at her. “Will you sing us a song, my daughter?”

Youko looked at her father. He had never asked her to sing before. She didn't know that he knew that she could sing. The request was reasonable and she had no reason to refuse. With a sigh she began.

There's a song that's inside of my soul
Its the one that I've tried to write
Over and Over again
I'm awake in the Infinite cold
but you sing to me over
and over and over again

So I lay my head back down
And I lift my hands and pray
to be only yours
I pray to be only yours
I know now your my only hope

Sing to me the songs of the stars
of your galaxy dancing and
laughing and laughing again
When it feels like my dreams are so far
Sing to me of the plans that
you have for me over again

So I lay my head back down
And I lift my hands and pray
to be only yours
I pray to be only yours
I know now your my only hope

I give you my destiny
I'm given you all of me
I want your symphony
singing in all that I am
At the top of my lungs
I've given all I had

So I lay my head back down
And I lift my hands and pray
to be only yours
I pray to be only yours
I pray to be only yours
I know now your my only hope

hmmmmm
mmmmmmm
oooooooooo

She finished the song with a song with a soft inaudible sigh. She didn't know why she chose that song, it just popped into her head. Her father and Grandmother seemed to be happy though. The whole crowd seemed stunned except for Duo and a few of her sisters. Her father handed her the Pearl that belonged to her. It had a blue sheen to it as well as the Atlantian coat of arms with a crown siting on it. The symbol represented that the owner of the Pearl was of royal blood. The pearl was set in a har decoration that resembled a lily. She allowed her father to put it in her hair,

Youko graciously accepted the Pearl and turned to crowd. They all cheered. the loudest was Duo followed closely by her sisters. The celebration lasted hours. And unbeknown to the crowd, they had a secret watcher.

Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:36 pm

I watched that on youtube, it was interesting but sad. I already realized that she would have that kind of fate though because I read the story. I started to read the fanfic and I think you have great writing skills. It would also be awsome to read too and interesting if it wasn't a crossover of those two things that seemed to be focusing mainly on the OC. In this particular way of thinking, it's kind of hard to swallow (I'm sorry, I've had crueler criticism on my own fanfics that had OCs in them, at least one...and my own crossovers had mean-ish/harsh criticism too, I think...so I'm trying to be nice.). I didn't dislike it or anything, it's just that I'll have to think of it in a different light before I can finish reading it.

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