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 Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 9:00 am
Way Back When
Way back when,
Before I ment you,
I felt alone,
And you did too.
Way back when,
You made me smile,
Even though it;
Only lasted a while.
Way back when,
Before you went,
My heart was whole,
But now it's bent.
Way back when,
I met someone new,
And now I know,
Your love was true.
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 11:38 pm
Wow I love how the last stanza ends the poem.
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 4:45 am
i think its awsome
all of it was pretty good
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:13 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:52 am
tht poem is amazing i loved it
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:21 pm
love the poem........
cry, cry......
it really remind me some old good times......
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 10:05 am
thank you for all your comments, would you want me to add another poem on here?
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 5:29 pm
Sure. That would be awesome. XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 8:28 am
Inner Pain
the rain came down,
the thunder rolled,
the lightning slashed,
and my feelings unfold.
as the rain hits me,
I begin to cry,
no one understands,
and no one knows why.
as the thunder rolled,
I wanted to scream,
and then I woke up,
it was only a dream.
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 10:23 am
Sometimes
Sometimes I still hear them,
In the supper’s breeze.
Sometimes I still feel them,
In the winter’s freeze.
Sometimes I still miss them,
In the days that pass me by.
Sometimes I still see them,
In the fields that are so dry.
Sometimes I still smell them,
In the flowers that she had.
Sometimes I still see them,
And it makes me glad.
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