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 Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:05 pm
ok. SOOO... i like to write. Mostly poems, and i try to write short stories, but they wind up being ALOT longer than i had planed. Longer, only because i go to far into detail and/or of into another subject. but any way. i decided it was about time i put some of my work some where, and thought here was a good place to start. lol.
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:13 pm
First a poem that i wrote this morning. But hell helped me with the ending.
ooo and i haven't titled it yet. I'm still working on that part.
My love is like the sun.
Constand and true.
It's aways bruning
It can't be extinguished,
by thoughts and feelings of others.
My love is like thew ind.
Can't be see, but it's there.
You can't control it, but
It can always get stronger.
My love is like the willow tree. Steady and strong.
It can bend with the changing winds,
It can't be uplifted,
By means of jealousy.
My love is like the ocean.
Deep and palpable.
Can't be drained, but
It's purity is boundless.
My love is all these things,
And my love is one more.
It's always yours.
Now and forever.
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 10:07 pm
questions?? comments?? snide remakes?? nothing?? crying
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