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Jentya

PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 3:38 pm


This is actually a year old. So I have improved a bit since then. This was taken for summer intensive auditions. I'm actually quite proud of it especially when I look at the picures from two years ago which were just plain scary. I'd love to here helpful critiques ^_^

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:11 pm


I'll face myself...




I think it looks great! Way better then mine at least




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PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 8:48 pm


wow, you look like an amazing dancer.
i can't think of anything to tell you to fix.

but since you're so good i'll bet you could get that leg higher if you wanted.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 10:07 pm


You have such a fabulous, beautiful arbesque line!!! 3nodding Nothing really much that I can say besides that. Though it might be a difference in ballet styles/ techniques, but I believe that you should lift your wrist more on the arm in second, I think that your whole arm should compliment the leg. Since you're leg is long and stretched, your arm should give the same sort of long illusion.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 11:58 pm


That's beautiful! Your right arm looks a little awkward to me, but in general you have incredible technique. I'm very impressed!
PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:15 pm


I wish I could do a nice arabesque while staying on Pointe without losing my balance ><

Your technique is nice and you probably can now get it up higher.

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Jentya

PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 11:58 am


Thanks everyone ^_^

Well it's time for audition photos again, so I'll see what I can do about getting it higher and fixing my arms and wrist.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 7:22 pm


wow you really look like a great dancer not like me well my arabasque are not low but when i go higher i keep on losing my balance and i can't stand long enough for a picture taking !!!!! hehe

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:12 am


oh wow, this is lovely! :]
just wondering, how old are you?
PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:46 pm


You have a lovely pose just lovely I'll never be that good sad

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 6:04 pm



Amazing
PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 10:16 am


omg...that is so awesome! mine is really bad, and i have been dancing for about 6 or 7 years....you are really good! Perhaps turn out a little more, but other then that, it looks nearly perfect biggrin heart

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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 10:22 pm


looks like your standing knee might be a little bent.
i think you could straighten your wrists a little, and spread/stretch you fingers out a little more.
if you could turn out your standing leg a little more, it would be so gorgeous.
it's so much better than what i can do.
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