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Commission, warning- 2 boys hugging [OPEN]

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Xiaa

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:57 am


Please help me with the arms:

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I know my proportions/anatomy suck in general when I draw anything under the neck x___X I think my commissioner is too nice to tell me if there's anything wrong with it. I don't want to embarrass myself again to my commissioner ;0;
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:08 pm


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the muscles are a little oddly places, and you forgot the young boy arm pit!
but do my red line help?

Natorra Red-wolf


Wolfger

PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:50 am


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The biggest problem I saw was that your characters weren't grounded properly on the floor plane.

Let me know is there's anything you don't understand in the redline.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:38 am


Ah! Okay, I see how to fix it now. Thank you so much!

Xiaa

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