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 Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:46 pm
Finished my last comission today. @______@ now i'm jus' frreee to panick about my leaving for france for a year. Shading is so scary. tooo scary.  Iris_Virus's character Strength. Winner of the pin-up auction i did with Chowder, Asiago Cheese, An JV.
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 7:25 am
reminds me of julie or whateverhername be from The Maxx.
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:10 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 8:35 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 10:45 pm
I have no idea what either of you are referencing. Sorry. XD
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:15 am
I like it, I like the coloring too.
But is it me or is her leg a bit off? Or too small?
And her hand with the 'glove' on it...seems odd, like the thumb is too long. And her left arm seems too short also.
xO
Otherwise I like it . :D
Kudos.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 11:30 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:45 pm
haha..i still have to do that... i've was grounded form the internet forever, so i haven't got to it at all yet.. i still have alot of unfisnihed commisisons i need to get finished with...
i'm a bit confused about what i'm supposed to draw for Iris_Virus.... i know she wants her avi, but does it HAVE to be full body? how sexy?? can i mess with the hair??? grrrr
i like this. i like the way you colored it, and like CLaireVoyant said, her hand is a bit weird.. either the thumb of pinky has to be shortened/elongated...but gread idea and the slight distortion of her leg gives it mucho vavavoom!
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:48 pm
Okay I thought I saw this in some earlier sketches of yours, but now I'm definitly seeing a problem in the way you draw jawlines.
It's hard to explain without a draw over, but basically the line of a girl's face is convex, but in your drawings their face is concave. This causes her chin to be askew, with the definitive give-away being the angle of her eyeline and the angle of her jawline. If this is too confusing (I feel a little like I'm babbling) then ask and I'll break out a draw over or something.
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:14 pm
Keratin Okay I thought I saw this in some earlier sketches of yours, but now I'm definitly seeing a problem in the way you draw jawlines. It's hard to explain without a draw over, but basically the line of a girl's face is convex, but in your drawings their face is concave. This causes her chin to be askew, with the definitive give-away being the angle of her eyeline and the angle of her jawline. If this is too confusing (I feel a little like I'm babbling) then ask and I'll break out a draw over or something. if you have time to do a red-line draw over or something i would love to see it, however, in the end i'm not sure it's going to prompt much by the way of a style choice. I mean, i know i'm not drawing realism, and i'm not trying to. The jawline isn't the only bit of exaggerated anatomy here. However, it's good to know it's there, and it'll definately be consideration next time i try for more realism.
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:18 pm
Chowder88 haha..i still have to do that... i've was grounded form the internet forever, so i haven't got to it at all yet.. i still have alot of unfisnihed commisisons i need to get finished with... i'm a bit confused about what i'm supposed to draw for Iris_Virus.... i know she wants her avi, but does it HAVE to be full body? how sexy?? can i mess with the hair??? grrrr i like this. i like the way you colored it, and like CLaireVoyant said, her hand is a bit weird.. either the thumb of pinky has to be shortened/elongated...but gread idea and the slight distortion of her leg gives it mucho vavavoom! Ah, so she comissioned a different character (her avatar) from you? Well, if you're curious about what sort of liberties to take, you can always just communicate with her. Both you and CV mentioned the hand....i know exactly what you mean. I guess all i can say that was i was thinking of her gloves ben over sized and baggy when i drew it, but in that case the finger's should be longer as well. Oh well. If it were my own piece, i'd probably go and edit it, but i already know i can draw hands more correctly so whatever XD i'malazyass.
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:29 am
Page Boy Keratin Okay I thought I saw this in some earlier sketches of yours, but now I'm definitly seeing a problem in the way you draw jawlines. It's hard to explain without a draw over, but basically the line of a 's face is convex, but in your drawings their face is concave. This causes her chin to be askew, with the definitive give-away being the angle of her eyeline and the angle of her jawline. If this is too confusing (I feel a little like I'm babbling) then ask and I'll break out a draw over or something. if you have time to do a red-line draw over or something i would love to see it, however, in the end i'm not sure it's going to prompt much by the way of a style choice. I mean, i know i'm not drawing realism, and i'm not trying to. The jawline isn't the only bit of exaggerated anatomy here. However, it's good to know it's there, and it'll definately be consideration next time i try for more realism. I'd like to add that it's not just a style issue, here. I've already said this to somebody else today, but her chin is crooked. I understand that if you drew her from a different view, you'd probably draw her chin differently - I'm pretty sure you wouldn't draw it lumped more over onto one side of the face than the other if you drew her from the front. It's not something I noticed at first - Greg's the one who made me aware of it - but now that I am aware of it, I can't suddenly stop noticing that it is there. If you don't want to do anything about it because it's a style issue, okay, but sometimes it's better to adapt that sort of thing to where it benefits both style and the more obvious anatomy sorts of things.
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:59 pm
I''m sorry, i didn''t want to sound as though i was disregarding his comment.
i mean, no matter what...once someone points something out like that in my work, it really sticks in my brain and i think about it whenever i draw.
I did say i would like the see the draw-over, since my lack of drawing experience and anatomy expertise sort of prevents me from really understanding his critique. ...now that i''ve drawn it wrong, i want to know how to draw it right.
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 6:25 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:07 pm
She's too good to leave mundane crits at her feet.
Recognize Stylism for what it is and appreciate the groove.
/duh.
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