|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 3:17 pm
Shin and Akiko stand outside the building waiting for Saiyuli. "Where is she we are suppose to be entering now! Hey promise me Akiko if anything happens and it seems like im not myself leave." Shin grabs her by the shoulders "PROMISE!"
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 4:40 pm
Saiyuli arrives and sighs. "Something doesn't seem right..."She though t herself. "Besides that it looks like Shin is about to have a heart attack..." She looks around tentatively and asks: "I'm here, sorry it took so long. This place is really weird...lets just get in and get out like we did before." She thought,'Well maybe with Shin's sanity..I hope he doesn't get like before. Oh well, I just have to be careful or Towai will come out again...and that can get bad with a pair of demons and a spirit they seem to think as an enemy going head to head...oh well, I don't want to fight him.' The three of them kage-shushin inside, although it isn't like before...they were prepared this time...it was an ambush.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 4:56 pm
[Not again. Its going to happen again. wait i know what i could do.] Shin quickly attacks to ninjas with his katanas and activates his eye infront of the one who he felt was the strongest. "HITOKAGE KAI!" A strange aura is felt by everyone and both Shin and the ninja fall to the ground. Shin lay lifeless on the ground. [I hope this works. (demons) You think making yourself blackout is going to hold us back you got to be joking. the demons laugh.] Shins body starts to have a demonic heart beat. The body still lays motionless though.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 6:40 pm
Saiyuli watches and wonders what the hell Shin just did. "Great!" she thought. " Hes out cold...oh well...I'll see what I can do." She pulled both her katanas out and looks to Akiko. "Fight if you'd like, but you're in charge of Shin for the moment. Somehow I don't think he's gonna be any help to us right now." She turned back to the enemy ninja, barely parrying the attack of one as he leaped at her, a kunia jutted out as a diversion as a blast came hurtling towards her. She quickly jumped out of the way and with deadly speed, finds that attacker and knocks him off his feet, only to be faced with another directly behind her,though this one unavoidable. The blow knocks her off her feet and she is quickly pounced on my one of her attackers, and as his kunia comes down and stabs itself into her temples, the body turns into a cloud of smoke, and he notices a strong arm pulling his head back and a sharp, and quick stroke goes across it throat.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 8:52 pm
The ninja starts coughing up blood. The Kashoku member walks up to him and heals the ninja's throat before he dies, "Sir I need authorization." One of the shadow ninja tries to attack him but he just uses a single hand to fire a bolt of lightning knocking her back, "Sir I need authorization." The Raikage says, "What are the targets?" He replies, "Genin." Raikage sighs, "Capture them." He tells the Raikage, "They already killed one of us. Damn Himora used a cheap move." The Raikage is stern, "It doesn't matter I want them alive." The Kashoku URA member says, "Fine." He continues fighting and the Raikage asks him, "Utari, what the hell are you doing? I told you to capture them!" The brainwashed ninja's anger is put down then he does as he's told. He creates two lightning shields, one around him and one that encompasses the room. The other lightning ninja all say, "Enmo." They reappear inside of Utari's own shield. He reports to the Raikage, "Targets captured. They won't be able to kage shunshin out of the shield. Their technique isn't true teleportation, unlike ours." The Raikage is getting impatient, "Took you long enough." [I may have to put you under more conditioning...] "Kills authorized against anyone else who shows up. Bring the little guys in for interrogation. And Utari... Hanmukei authorized. I don't care what you have to vaporize. Keep those genin in custody." Utari's glowing eyes slightly lowered, "Yes sir."
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 5:54 pm
((Deleted posts. Please make it more believable. They'd have a *lot* more security than that. The *Raikage* himself wants you guys in custody he's going to have maximum security. It'd be a lot harder to get out than that. I'll give you the setup of the security of what it'd really be like:
1) Shield - pretty much got that part right 2) Chakra draining crystals - crystals rigged in the ceiling of the room that emit radiation renders you incapable of generating chakra 3) Wires that drain your chakra but leave enough that you'll live (they aren't going to drain all your chakra or you'll die). Any attempt to generate chakra will be absorbed through the wires and used to power the village (>>hint: blackout<<) If the prison loses power then they'll switch to backup generators which are enough to power the electric floors/walls and lights. 4) They'd strap you guys to beds/tables or whatever they feel like as long as it doesn't conduct electricity. They'd leave you only with prisoner clothing, no shoes. The floor + walls would be electric so you'd get fried if you touch it (enough to cause cardiac arrest). 5) Guards just outside the door. They'd be URA because the Raikage ordered them to "keep those genin in custody." The hallway outside the door would be electric too. 6) The prison your in would be underground with pretty thick walls/floors. Everything's reinforced with steel. The prison your in is heavily reinforced with stuff to keep the prisoners in and others out but it isn't the best prison in the world. The best prison in the world is holding Ouja, the prison you're in is maybe 1% of that prison. Just saying this prison isn't "inescapable."))
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 7:16 pm
(so shin got out. Saiyuli wasnt trying to get out she was still in there. I got a plan though.)
Three ninjas show up masked. Its seterusu. The walk in silent and cause hardly any fuss. They continue to use genjutsu making the regular chuunin black out. They go down the stair and grab there real gear. When they get down they quickly kage shushin in and use the shadows to make spikes and stab them but they move too quickly. The lion maksed ninja quickly shoots arrows at them with percise aim. It hits a couple ninja in the leg imoblizing them. Katash quickly comes out and does a Bushido Ouufu and cuts one of the healthy ninja to pieces. The other ninjas run to get help. Seterusu do not persue and quickly locate the ninjas. WE got about 3 mins. they quickly cut the chakra strings allowing the ninjas to generate more chakra. Katashi uses his eletric element and shorts the floors. "Comon we got to go now he throw them both katanas and runs out. They quickly follow right when they reach upstairs the alarm goes off. They get outside and meet URA lightening ninja. Katashi sighs "Why do you guys have to make this so difficult. We will give it back when we are done." He laughs.
(Hey recruit let shin escape like that alright. Hes going to come back and get captured trying to rescue his team alright.)
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:10 pm
((k i edited out the part "huge army" cuz lightning URA doesn't have a huge army. They could take over the world if they did lol))
Utari is in front of the group and the Raikage speaks to him, "If you want to become a Yogensha you have to prove you are one." Utari takes off his sunglasses and tosses em aside, "Yes master," with a bored voice. Out of nowhere he creates two lightning shields to trap the shadow ninja and protect the URA. The Raikage is watching him, "Heh he executes justu so fast I can't even see em." Utari tells the other URA, "Get the outside shield." They all nod, "Enmo." They appear outside the shield and execute the jutsu to create another outside shield so Utari has a free hand. He asks the Raikage, "What do you want?" He ponders for a second, "Go ahead and kill them... and use hanmukei. Try not to vaporize them." "Sure," Utari is still bound to his clan's code of honor, "The scroll you have isn't the real scroll. The real one is impossible to reach." The Raikage is thinking, [Why is he explaining anything to them... I really need to brainwash him again.] "I hid the real scroll myself. I'm going to use hanmukei. I'm sure you know what that is. Sorry... I'd rather fight you without it but..." He executes the hand seals instantaneously, "Hanmukei." An aura of yellow chakra surrounds him and he shoots a lightning bolts throught the lion masked ninja's body burning a hole through it. He starts shooting lightning bolts at the other two but they use kage shunshin to evade. The Raikage is concerned, [I hope those URA can hold the shield. Utari's lightning bolts might burn them out of chakra any moment now...] Utari drops his lightning shield protecting himself then Katashi kage shunshins and slashes at him. Utari laughs, "You forget about my other chakra shield?" Another seterusu kage shunshins then stops. A few moments later she coughs up blood. Utari says, "Unblockable attack. I teleported a shuriken into you. Even though you detected an attack you can't evade this one." She falls over and some sharp blades are sticking out of her. The Raikage asks Utari, "Why are you keeping them alive?" Utari tells him, "I *will* clear my grandfather's name. I'm taking over this URA unit whether you give me the Yogensha title or not." The Raikage is ticked, "Who the hell do you think you are?! I command you to stand down! Now!" Utari stops for a moment then continues, "I've learned so many jutsu I wonder if there's any more left in the world. I want to develop my taijutsu skills. I'm on the BAN List of several countries, classified as a Super Ninja. You can't stop me." The Raikage smiles, "Have it your way then. Take care of your men, Yogensha Utari." [Looks like brainwashing him isn't going to work.] Katashi uses Hitokage Kai trying to take out Utari but it wouldn't work, "That cheap trick." He pulls out lightning blades then starts slashing at Katashi but he kage shunshins. Utari starts using kage shunshin to follow him. Katashi forms hand seals and creates shadow spikes to pierce Utari but they can't penetrate his chakra shield. Utari sighs, "I'll be fair and only use one hand." He creates shadow spikes and starts attacking Katashi but he kage shunshins away, [This one is obviously the most skilled of the group.] He sees the other URA are almost depleted of chakra, [Looks like they aren't going to keep the shield up anymore... Not like I need it.]
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:55 am
Katashi laughs "Your really think that we would have all of us in one spot?" The two other masked ninjas poof. "Thats why its so easy im the only real one here. I got a question for you. Have you heard the wind?" He stops and with one slow swing of his sword right as the shield goes down. A gust of wind that just blows over everyone just as a regular wind gust. Utari looks at him confused. All of a sudden the men start to burst into blood and fall down to the ground. Utari is has a couple of scratches on his shoulders but nothing serious. "Yea that could of been you." Katashi laughs "You maybe an elementalist but so am I. We stole the scrolls 50 years ago. Or do you guys never notice?" Katashi continues to laugh. "Whlile you lack at your taijutsu i do not. How do you like my wind blade? Sorry but i didnt want anyone interferring so its just you and me now. You said hand to hand right?" He drops his heavy armor and huge sword to the ground making a huge indent in the earth. "Are you ready?" Katashi teleports behind Utari and starts to throw punches and kicks but is being matched with blocks. "I dont see why you work for kages they are a complete waste of time. Its too much politics for me to be honest. Thats why im a rogue ninja. You should join. What do you say? All the strongest ninja should work together instead of being commanded by these kages. Right now im teaching these kids but after this im leaving the shadow village. I only stayed for one kid and thats Shin. I thought he would be interesting. Have you seen his Kekki genkia?" He pauses "Not his eyes but another one that was placed inside him. I hear he is quite the destroyer." He conitnues to talk to Utari like there were long lost friends.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:29 pm
Utari heals his wound, "Wow you used almost all your energy just to put a cut on me. I feel special. I knew you were the only one I was fighting. Raikage-sama asked me why I was "keeping them alive." I wasn't keeping anyone alive I was using the least amount of energy that I could. How do you think I detected your little kids as soon as they entered the country?" After moment of silence, "Everyone has a different energy signature. Those clones you made had the same energy signature as you. Of course... clones are missing certain things in their energy signature... 50 years ago, you guys didn't have to deal with me." Lightning bolts starts coming down all over the place ontop of Katashi but he keeps kage shunshining to get away, "And elementalist?" He laughs under his breath, "Elementalist that's hilarious. I'm a jutsu expert. Elementalists are wannabes." He starts throwing random jutsu at Katashi then Katashi starts running for it but Utari keeps up with him. Utari follows Katashi, "An elementalist can't do half what I can do." Utari's shadow comes out of the ground and follows with them. Katashi is surprised then Utari captures him inside 2 lightning shields, "That's right. I've fought Kiu. I have to say he is an excellent shadow ninja, which is why I studied his jutsu. He thinks he's untrackable. Hehe that's stretching the truth. He invented a cheaper version of one of our deadly jutsu." Since both his hands are being used for the shields he gets his shadow to execute Kagenai Shunshin, putting shuriken and kunai into Katashi, "Looks like..." Utari suddenly stops, "Time's up." He teleports away from Katashi then his shadow disappears.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:43 pm
The ninjas quickly escape from Lightening.
Shin shows back at the village moments later and sees nothing wrong. [Wow its really quiet.] Shin pulls out his katanas and walks in quietly. Shin walks foward and sees a ninja with bright yellow eyes its Utari. Shin quickly takes a bushido stance. "Give me back my friends. I also would like your scroll i cant believe i didnt see that it was a fake. I guess thats what you get in a middle of a battle. He runs and Utari and starts to swing his katanas but Utari dodges with ease. Shin then executes his techniques 5 point Bushido Oufuu which attacked Utari from all sides but Utari quickly shields and laughs. Shin laughs and his fangs start to grow. He runs at Utari and punches right through his shield hitting him in the face. "YOUR PATHETIC JUTSU WONT KEEP ME FROM WHAT I WANT!!"
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:55 pm
Utari falls to the ground, "Eh a jinchuuriki. Great." He gets back up, "I don't have time for you. Bye." Shin suddenly appears at the bottom of the ocean. Utari is soaking wet for some reason, "You want me to bring these guys back to life before I go?" The Raikage is amazed, "What???" Utari says, "You told me to take care of them so I did something. It's still possible to bring them back but it has to be now or never." The Raikage says, "Okay..."
Later the URA members that were killed get back up, "Where are we?" They look at each other, "Omg you're URA!" They get up and panic then the Raikage says something to shut them up. They reply with no emotion in their voice, "Of course."
Utari is in his room and takes off his mask, [Looks like I won't be fighting for a while,] then falls to the floor. A woman rushes into the room, "Are you okay Kie..." She sees him lying on the ground knowing he's unconscious. A slight smile shows on her face, "How long will you be out this time?"
The Raikage is satisfied, [Looks like you'll be a fine Yogensha. You joined URA to learn better taijutsu.] He becomes worried, [That can't be the only reason why you accept the invitation. Why are you really here?..] URA ninja report to the Raikage, "Sorry sir we couldn't gather data on him." He's dissapointed, "Why not?" One replies, "They're guards don't let anyone within a certain distance of their clan without giving lethal force." Raikage sighs, "Nevermind. I don't want to piss them off too much. I hope they understand I didn't mean anything by the intrusion." "Would you like me to tell them sir?" Raikage says, "Yeah. Ask them for information this time instead of trying to take it by force. Maybe they'll tell." "Yes sir."
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|