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Nagi47

PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:23 pm


Name: Falie Naedi
Gender: Female
Race: Elf/ Demon
Age Appearance: 19
Role in Story: Main character.
Any powers: Can manipulate water to some extent.

Apearance:
Green slanted eyes
Brown hair
Gentle appearance with the occasional smiles here and there.


Family (not all that plained out yet):
1. A twin brother who she hangs around with all the time. They back each other in times of need no matter what. They are like best friends. His name is Hythe.

2. Her mother is an elf named Tilla. They share a special bond and share everything with each other. All she has to do is just ask if there is something bothering her. There are no secrets between these two.

3. True father is unknown and her mother isn't willing to give up the information so easily.

About her so far:
Falie cares a lot about her family and not much about others. She likes her small circle of friends and that's the way she wants to keep it. Instead of using her powers to protect, she uses them for her amusement, draining the water and life out of others for her amusement like a true demon. As it is her nature to take away life then to give, she's grown quite secret of her abilities and only lets her family know what she does in her spare time. I guess that's why it takes a long time for her to warm up to others who aren't her friends or her family.

If you do end up in her circle of friends. She can be very caring and someone to hang around with. She leans toward girls more and keeps men at a distance although she doesn't realize it.

Activities: I mentioned the life draining already. Collecting flowers and making decorations with them with her friends. Attending to her work around the house (making sure the servants get their job done right). Bribing servants or others (to keep their mouth's shut). Singing and swimming and fishing.

Favorite Foods: Fish. She LOVES them. Human and mermaid flesh (she doesn't know her mom is feeding it to her but she loves it and it keeps her from attacking the servants when her desires for flesh becomes too strong).

Fears:
Priests (They always sense something is odd about her and she doesn't like that)
Friends finding out about her abilities.
The mass genocide the king (or emperor. Can't decided) keeps talking about.
Going to new places.

Must learn to:
Use her powers to protect instead of harm.
Open up more.

I think that's enough. Any suggestions?
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:17 am


what's her first memory?
what's been the most important event in her life that still affects her?

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:02 pm


I like the whole she believes her life is simple and clean, but deep down there are secrets in her backstage (example her demonic evilness and her mother feeding her men)

SECRETS AND DEVIOUSNESS!! MAHAHAAHAH
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 4:26 pm


free_gypsy
what's her first memory?
what's been the most important event in her life that still affects her?


Um... first memory? Good question.
I'm guessing that it's her waking up to go look outside with her mother and brother. Her mom just wanted to show her children around the island that she rules over as well as spend time with them.


Most important memory is when her mother confronted her about being too friendly with peasants and people outside of her family circle for her own good after almost getting hurt at the beach (I'm not sure how yet). Falie became paranoid of the world around her that day, carefully choosing her friends and using her abilities (her status, bribing people, or her powers) to get rid of threats.

Kokiri-frantic
I like the whole she believes her life is simple and clean, but deep down there are secrets in her backstage (example her demonic evilness and her mother feeding her men)

SECRETS AND DEVIOUSNESS!! MAHAHAAHAH


Why thank you biggrin ! I'm messing around having "bad" characters as the main characters and "good" characters as the opposing force in the story. It's turned into a quite an interesting experiment for me trying to flesh everybody out.

Nagi47


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 12:08 pm


How are elves and demons capable of breeding? Are such hybrids common in the setting?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 5:04 pm


t's possible but uncommon and also a very sinful act xp . This is why her mother won't reveal who and the whereabouts of the father is so easily. In order for a demon to mate successfully in the setting I made up, they would have to do it under the disguise of an elf (or human). Kind of like the fox demons in Japanese mythology. Where the offspring would look like any normal offspring except with some of the powers of the demon. I hope that makes sense.

With that part said. If the demon is a powerful demon, then the offspring would also carry some of the demon's traits as they get older or only show them in certain situations. The demon in this case was a water demon so Falie and her brother can not stay in the water too long for they will start developing "wired bumps" on their bodies which develop would soon turn into scales. Any longer and a tale fin and a cross between a western mermaid (think Little Mermaid) and an eastern mermaid (think Mermaid Saga) would take place. It's not a pretty sight. Luckily, neither of the twins have gone past getting bumps.

The sinful act part? Priests are at the highest, then elves, then humans. Demons fit no where in between as they are creatures who enjoy causing disorder. Raping women to make hybrids so close to humans or elves that they don't stand out is one of them. Such hybrids aren’t welcomed because the priests don’t know rather to kill them or let them live. They are often purified, causing them to die anyway.

I think that explains the whole hybrid thing. In Tilla’s case (the elf mother) however, she was not raped. She was a desperate noblewoman incapable of having kids and wanted them badly. When a demon was rumored to be causing havoc on her island , she searched for him. The demon admired her bravery and didn’t kill her. Instead they talked every time they met (she kept going back). One day, their relationship evolved from mere talk into something more personal and the demon asked what the girl wanted as a wish. Not believing that she could have kids, she laughed and mated with him that night.

I hope all of that made sense. I think I’m going to make a thread for Tilla later. I just realized how interesting she could be.

Nagi47

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