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In the 23 century a war was unleashed between two worlds that were colonized by humans, the planets name was Hydra. Hydra is filled with many resources that have become scarce on Both Nyx and Atla, and due to both planets different views of Hydra a war broke loose between the two. The Space Superiority counsel has controlled Atla for more than a hundred years. The counsels view was that the resources on the planet should be dispersed to the planets that deemed worthy, which were basically the planets controlled by the Space Superiority Counsel. Slowly but surely the people who lived on Nyx disagreed on the view of the Counsel. Thus the Brotherhood Coalition was formed, the Coalition’s views were that the resources should be spread around the cosmos to every planet but in return the planets had to join the Coalition and one-day rise against the Counsel. But history must start somewhere and that somewhere was on the planet Hydra, the new Garden of Eden. The war has raged on for decades now and shows no signs of stopping. Now this battle for the cosmos has boiled down to the brave pilots and soldiers fighting it, and their efforts can make a loss into a victory.

Species-------Description
Baku-------fierce reptilian warriors that are as strong as motivated
Humans-------you should know you are one
Atla-------the quick and stealthy fish like people of Nyx, they use a water apparatus to live on land much like a scuba diver uses air tanks to breath under water
Horus------- these winged species can range from looking like angels to looking like bird men
Khepri-------the final newly known species found. This race looks very much like the humans except for the fact of the tails and that they look like elves

Class

Spy-Spies send information and sabotage the enemies

Pilot-pilots are the ones who fight and control the warships

mechanic-mechanics repair the damage caused by the spies, help soldiers on the ground, and repair ships

armory gunners-armory gunners are the people firing the cannons on large ships and sometimes even bombers

transports-they transfer prisoners,new recruits, and send ground troops to the enemy planet

soldiers-They fight on the ground and are the body of the operation

Commander-commander gives the orders to pilots;soldiers, and give the amount of soldiers going into battle

# of classes

everything is infinite except commanders

2 commanders per military

Character skeleton


Gaia username:
character name:
race:
class:
appearance:
Reason to join the war: ((optional))

primary weapon:
secondary weapon:

Gaia username: gambles_for_anything
character name: Basho Mikimoto
race: Horus
planet: Vidar
class: Pilot
appaerance: Standard Pilot Gear
Reason to join the war:

primary weapon: EMP rifle
secondary weapon: Dark Matter Gernade

((A few suggestions for you. Your role play is called Ace Pilots, so I would have other none-pilot positions available if someone wanted, but they would consist as mostly NPC, as most people will want to be a pilot.
I would also suggest you try to have a squadron of NPC pilots to help fill in the ranks till more people can join. Then your not waiting here for x number of people to join before you can start, you can start as soon as one or two people come in.
Another thing I would suggest doing differently would be present more of a difference between the two sides of this war. As far as I can tell, some disagreements have come between the two worlds, and now they are fighting. What is this disagreement? Are you going to role play it as a beginning to the story or reveal it as you go? Is this a war so long in the making that no one can remember the reason for each others hate? Just a few thoughts for you is all.))

((Also, your picture links aren't working correctly, and your stretching the page with that top picture. Could use to shrink it down a little (which if you need help with that, I can help you).))

((One last piece of advise for the moment I guess, I would suggest you plan on playing the part of commander, at least for the moment. If someone wants the role later on, then maybe have the old commander die in some heroic way and replace them with the player that wishes to be one, or a player you think could play the commander well.))

(By the way, this sounds like an interesting idea. Work out the details and you could really have something here. I wish you luck on this.))

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i think that you should have a post that explains the differences in the races and planets
ie:
species-------description
human--------N/A
Baku----------reptilian warriors that eat enemies dreams
ect------------ect

I'll get my brother to work on the grammar because I suck at it

as for the hole colonization thing the species were found on the planets not they colonized them

Hows is that people if you have any more suggestions please tell me