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Ok before you read this keep in mind 3 things
1.This isn't my best poem
2.I'm not a proffesional writer
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3.Please only comment on this if it not critique and just mentioning the poem 'cause keep in mind the second thing

Ok got it... good thanks for taking your time to read that now here's the poem


The day the flowers grew red (the name)

As he sat there just thinking
thinking about his bonnie lass his men came
they came in masses
asking wondering and thinking
there blue uniforms looking just right dandy in the morning sun
and as he looked at them he knew it was the last time he would see them
for he would die
but he knew that he could not see his lass
for that would be in the hands of the almighty god
and that he could not question
for giving a quick last thought of his girl would hurt to much he yelled to his men
FORM UP MEN AND GIVE THEM ALL HELL FOR IRELAND
answered was this by a hearty EULALIA
who are whe men, he shouted in a voice even the rebels could hear him
and back at the man in the beautiful brass stars came a shout so tremendous
so tremendous
it shook the firm ground of that virgina soil
for that cry was
EULALIA
saying a quick prayer for all the men that would taste copper that bloody day
he thought
his mind wandered
to what we do not know
but i will tell you this child he was going to die for ireland
now as he shouted to his men the earth shook with a mighty rebel yell
a yell that only one could be compared to the mightiest of yells
for that yell was EULALIA
and as they shouted the men grabbed the lead and steel and marched
towards there doom did those brave men walk
they flew that beautiful irish harp which by the day would be nothing more
than a rag
a rag
a beautiful rag
stained with mens blood
this rag was a symbol for peace though
for war to
and for ireland
and as they marched
the ball flew at them
and they took that lead
those horrible flying pieces of death
for they were irish it would take more than a bullet to stop them
and they marched with lead in them
for they walked on and they brave man in brass stars watched his men and his flag
and he saw both fall
rushing to the aid of a fallen man
then to the precious flag
he rushed forward yelling this
GIVE 'EM BLOOD AND VINEGAR AND HELL! EULALIA!
suddenly he saw the sky
and he tasted copper
and he thought "this is what its like to die"
and above him a picture of his lass appeared and he touched her and held her
and he whispered to her "i died for ireland girl i died for her"
and then she started to go
and he said then "why do you leave me"
"because you must meet our lord" she whispered
always like her to whisper
and he three words that he wanted to say died on his lips
but all that happened was blood
he spoke blood
and a veil came over his eyes and he whispered oh so softly
"Of course darling i'll meet you at heavens gates"
but before he was gone he heard something so famed
so beautiful
that to this day can be heard
for it was the cry
the cry of the celts
the irish
his men
EEEEUUUUUULLLLAAAAAAALLLLLIIIIIAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!