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 Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:48 pm
My Savior...My Lover Author: Beanie (Meh)
Disclaimer: Don't own MCR members, but I own my creative characters so you can't take them.
Peeps: MCR, Sarina Goodfield, Ashley Sparrow, Christoph Jackson (C.J), Rayne Iero, and other small part characters.
Summary: I give nothing away! HAH!
POV: Various characters (Mostly Sarina or Frank)
Comments are lubbed and I will accept constructive criticism as long as you aren't bashing, then I hate you. I hope you like my story!
Forgive me for my sucky spell checks.
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:53 pm
Prologue "You have no one to save ya now girly." His breath was horrid, smelling like evil mixed with alcohol. I closed my eyes and wept, knowing that he was right...
{Short, sweet, and cliffyness...didn't realise the shortness.}
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:59 pm
First comment!
Ooooo, You do have cliffies!
Gr. You know How much I hate them.
But nice prolouge,
I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:08 pm
Since my Prologue was a bit on the short side, I'm gonna post what will be the first chappie so as to keep you entertained. Enjoy...
"Gah! I can't wait to get there!" I smiled at my best friend Ashley, her glasses reflected the street lights of Tinley Park on September 1st, 2007.
"I know! Can you believe we get to meet them? I mean, we get to meet My Chemical Romance!" Ashley was estatic in her responce.
My name's Sarina Goodfield, my friend is Ahsley Sparrow, and we're both 24 year old die hard MCR fans. Tonight's concert was surely great, my mom (Who is still awesome because of this) won front row seats and backstage passes for tonight on a radio show. You could only imagine our excitement as my mom showed us the passes. They were like a golden ticket in the Wonka bars. Ashley and I both wanted to meet the band and hug them, me to thank them for keeping me sane after all the years of torture, and Ashley just because she wants to. To you we may sound like stupid teenies or fangirls, but I can assure you that we are just the opposite. We depsie teenies and always tell them to .... off.
"Squee indeed Ashley! I'm hugging the band for keeping me sane," I grinned until we got there, the First Bank Amphitheater. We bounded out of the car, waved our mom goodbye, and shot into the venue.
You know I won't post no mores until I have comments... please comment!
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:10 pm
Goth Shadow First comment!
Ooooo, You do have cliffies!
Gr. You know How much I hate them.
But nice prolouge,
I'm dying to know what happens next! Ha, you shall see what happens next in teh next chappie! unfortunately nothing much happens in chappie one so you have to really wait until chappie 2. Yes I like saying chappie. What goes on in teh prologue won't actually happen later, so it's kind of a preview. don't hate me for the cliffies, it's not really my fault because i write them without knowing it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:27 pm
Oh really?....
Anyway, I will be froever grateful for your
first cahppie that kept me entertained.
Thx!
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:29 pm
Hmm, yes but i won't post no mores till I get comments! Go spread the word of my fanfic and I shall do the same! OFF TO NEVERLAND! Ha, that was so fun.
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:44 pm
Ha....
Did you send a pm to mosher yet?
Telling her about this story?
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:47 pm
Goth Shadow Ha....
Did you send a pm to mosher yet?
Telling her about this story? I'm going to! Thx for the idea, prolly wouldn't have thought of it before.
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:48 pm
Ieros Baby567 Goth Shadow Ha....
Did you send a pm to mosher yet?
Telling her about this story? I'm going to! Thx for the idea, prolly wouldn't have thought of it before. Really?
Yes! I have two smart point s now!
Eh, I gotta go, see you probably sometime next week!
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 9:00 pm
Goth Shadow Ieros Baby567 Goth Shadow Ha....
Did you send a pm to mosher yet?
Telling her about this story? I'm going to! Thx for the idea, prolly wouldn't have thought of it before. Really?
Yes! I have two smart point s now!
Eh, I gotta go, see you probably sometime next week! Your mom's evil, get as soon as you can so my fanfic doesn't dissapear off this page!
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:48 pm
Fanfic=Love. I WANNA READ MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:56 pm
And thus, an update is in teh next post...
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:57 pm
But now I have control of the next post. MWHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! twisted
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:17 pm
Enjoy my pretties! (curse you Mosher! LOL JK JK) ((Warning, '...' this usually is a curse sub. You should be able to know when it is and when it is not.))It was quite a sight inside, punks and goths everywhere. I spotted a girl wearing Tripp pants and I swear I could've screamed. We hurried for the backstage door, bumping into a few people as we clutched our V.I.P passes. The guard stared at us until he saw the gold lettered passes, he let us through with a small nod.
Nobody was there until we turned the corner, we were suddenly on th ground with two guys on top of us.
"Get off me!" I growled and got up on my knees as he stood up calmly the two apoligized, making me stop dead in my tracks. Ashley did too, we glanced at each other at looked up...there they were, in the flesh. Gerard Way and Frank Iero!
We got up quickly and I began to speak, "I uh, well umm, we were just um-" Ashley cut me off, suddnely confident over her shy exterior.
"We're the contest winners. My name's Ashley Sparrow." she smiled widely.
"I'm Sarina...I think." I shakily held out my hand, and just as Frank grabbed it I pulled him into a hug. He seemed to understand and made no hesitation to hug me back. Ashley did the same and then we switched.
"Come with us, we'll introduce you to the rest of our big family." Gerard grinned micheviously and Frank giggled the infamous giggle, me and Ashley couldn't help but giggle back.
We were led to a spacey room with mirrors and a giant T.V with lots of video games and junk food. It was so awesome, and to make it cooler they had an XBOX 360. My heart skipped a beat.
"Oh...my...god! Ths place rocks!" Ashley and I couldn't hold our excitement.
"Pretty sweet huh? Gerard go get the guys and I'll get these two settled." Frank smiled chesily and Gerard chuckled, muttering to himself while he walked back the way we came. I blushed and Ashley desperately anted Gerard to hurry it up and come back.
"Umm, the hug was for keeping me sane all these years. I'd be instituionalized if it weren't for you guys." I looked at him sheepishly, while his mouth curved into a big smile.
"Don't worry about it, fans are what make the music go round. What would we do if they all ended up in loony bins?" Frank hugged me lightly and challenged me to guitar hero, he kicked my butt sideways and back. I the musical talent of an eel!
Ashley was about to try when Gerard came back with Bob, Ray, and Mikey, "Having fun whooping Frank's ...?" Bob smiled wryly while Mikey went to play Ashley, and I got to pet the fro. These guys were so nice! They let us borrow their makeup kits to do ours! I had Frank's x's and a scorpion drawn on my neck. Ashley wrote random words on herself and had Gerard's black bar over her eyes.
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